Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 82

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

Me firat one to comment. I really love it.ur story is getting interesting. It am wondering what wil aastha to shlik and finally aastha is falling for shlok.good work keep it work.could make ur ur chapters little longer if possible. Waiting for next update

Thank u so much!Nd yes u r da 1st 1!😉Ok I md next update a bit longer..Do let me know if it's ok..😳

Originally posted by: Serviana

Awesome update!!! I really like your writing... so beautiful!!!

Thank u so much dear!🤗Hope I cn kip da chapters interesting though..😃

Originally posted by: Anusha16

woah!!!! hotness overload...

someone help me, I'm melting to a puddle...😆

seriously you're getting very good at this...sheesh i'm very embarrased reading this...☺️

I loved how astha thought she will never give the satisfaction to him that he scared her away..

between this to all girls who write hot and sexy ff's .

dont you guys ever feel embarrased while writing such stuff???

you people are so good... what about you teshina??

😆Thank u so much!😛Ok now to answer ur question..Initially wn I started wid my 1st FF Whatever it takes,I did used to feel embarrassed..😳Nd dn slowly I got used to it..😛U see for me it's always important to make the reader's feel da crctrs emotions..So I hv to write it like dt..😳
Nd slowly due to a couple's chemistry,my odr fav Mithvi nd here Ashlok,I get quite shameless to bring on da heat..😉

Originally posted by: sumana561

Nice update ...couldn't.stop.blushing 😳 plz continue with the same pace,don't fasten up things between them.thanks for the pm

Thank u so much..😛

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

ok so astha is on the mission to teach shlok agnihotri a lesson of his lyf

and shlok is frustrated dat wat is happening to him becoz of astha kirloskar

let see wat happens next

do update soon

Yes she is..😉M updating..Thank u!😃

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Aastha you teach shlok Agnihotri a lessons...oohooo...

And Shlok frustrated his self...my dear you are in love...

You understand soon...

I was enjoying the update dear...it was superb...👏

Thank u so much sweetheart!😃

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice update

Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: kulrudeep

👏👍🏼☺️ I simply loved the entire FF track!!truly mesmerising.It is gettiing so real that i was really getting goosebumps upon reading it!!I have read the other FF of urs as well,very very well written!!I loved it!!!!to the core!!!👏

Waiting for the update!!cant help to read what will astha do!!!!!

Thank u so much!😛Updating soon!😉Do stay tuned!

Originally posted by: saranyagulam

nice dear... I could feel the feelings of astha... keep going...

Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: jeenia123

I m saying again and again...it's just awesome...loving it more and more

And I love u all over agn evrytym u do say it Jeenia,my frnd!🤗Thank u so much!😃