Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 8

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

AaShlok together under the downpour..couldn't be better!!!

continue soon!! ;)

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Nice update..👍🏼.
I like the bubbly and clumsy aastha that u portray in your update..😃.
Shlok's dislike for his mother was clearly shown by you and his respect and love for his father as well such contrasting emotions for his parent figures..
Boy shlok is already irritated because of the climate and the rains and uspe aake gir gayi aastha now let's see what unfolds ahead..😆.
Keep writing eager to read the next update..😊.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Interesting update.

Originally posted by: LuvStrk-001

Lovely FF dear!!!!!!!!!

Enjoyed every bit of it!!

Thanks for PM and sharing it!!!!

Plzz do continue!!!!

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

LADY BAD LUCK 😆

Originally posted by: .Siham.

Awesome updateee yaaar thanks fooor the pm

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

that was a nice one...

Originally posted by: eshitamisra

nyc update dear 😊

continue soon

thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: -Priya01

Awesome update ...the fall is really 🤣 ..I enjoyed it ...beautifully penned down...Lady luck to Lady bad luck😆

Do continue soon

Thxs for the pm

Stay blessed rab rakha

Originally posted by: awida

Loveved it. I love to read about Shlok's feelings. In the serial he looks mysterios.