Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

That was lovely dear.

You have shown how Arnav is seeing things now. Its an eye-opener to him. Now he is seeing things as they should be. Life is not a business deal and he is being made aware of it. He has started to see different aspect of people whom he had known all his life.

Loved the update.

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dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rulama
That was lovely dear.
You have shown how Arnav is seeing things now. Its an eye-opener to him. Now he is seeing things as they should be. Life is not a business deal and he is being made aware of it. He has started to see different aspect of people whom he had known all his life.

Loved the update.

Thank you rashmi ji!! Yours and smita ji's encouragement is really helping me got through this writing phase, for its new to me and I have to learn a lot. Yet you people are kind enough to look for good into my effort. Thank you so much, dil se shukriya!!!😊

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome work...👏

The first part was emotional...And the second one was too...😊

Khushi is so cute and good...⭐️

Can't wait for more of Arshi...

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome update
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Wow superb update.

Khushi knew how to blend.

Arnav when had reach home after a month, has now got reintroduced his family just because of Khushi. She is spreading happiness. He now knew everything and Khushi role in every one life except him. He got fail to indulge her in his life and him in her.

Update soon

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

happy u continued dear..so it arnav is sort of jealous of khushi's attention in the house...would like to know their married life?

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

oh wow! this is beautiful! he has started appreciating her..

but i have a slight confusion.. at the end of 1st month he started noticing these things..

but at the start of the chapter how long a time has passed? is it 1 month after the marriage or much much later?

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hi just came a cross the two parts and it was awesome! You have nicely depicted the way Khushi has been ill treated since form her childhood days albeit in a very unnoticeable subtle way. Felt really bad for Khushi, who only thinks of spreading happiness in other people's lives by sacrificing her own happiness, and also not expressing even by a single emotion that she is unhappy or sad but faces the life with a positive attitude. So eventually she had to get married to Arnav as well with out considering about her own self. You have very vividly explained the place Khushi has made for herself in the Raizda family, and now Arnav himself is noticing the fact that he is no where in her little happy family. And if I'm not mistaken he seems to be wanting to be noticed and included in her life. Amazing writing and the way you have portrayed everything is so damn fantastic. Hoping Khushi will finally get her happy ending. Looking forward for the coming updates😊

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Don't you dare finish this in the next shot😉...

I want more... I can really get a clear picture of Khuhsiii... she is tooo matured for her age... How she treated his family as her own and how she mingled with his family...

Bwtween all these, did I tell you that you write beautifully... I really hope I told you in my last comment for the same Work...

Arnav is not attracted to her, still... But, he can see his whole family getting attached to her within a month and arnav is no where in her frame...

I really hope Khuhsii will soon be blessed with her husbands love.. and that too much possessive one..'

Frankly, I really wanted you to continue when I read the first shot, but as you have already given a note that you want it to be a one shot only, so gave up my idea of commenting that point..

But, I am really sooo happy to know that you thought about making it atleast 3 shots.. But, I will say that it will go more...as I want more.. I am selfish😃

~Amrita

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Lovely story and the way u narrating it is just superb... I don't think that u can wrap this story up in 4 parts as well bcz u have just shown Arnav's side of the story and Khushi's side is yet to be explored and then how Arnav will make his place in the life Khushi has created in his house and family without him, u've got a very strong storyline going here so plz turn this story into a SS and only then u can do full justice to this great concept and story and trust me u r more than capable to do it... Really looking forward to read this fabulous story with all the twists and turn.

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