Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: dilectus

Thanks for appreciation. Its an OS, and was written with the same idea. You can check another OS in my signature.

i hope u wl make it as a SS.

ya i olso want to c a happy khushi in d nxt part
happily married to arnav continuing her studies too

this os is brilliant too
u hav written it very well

It's emotional but beautifully written
Great job
Loved it
Always wanted to see how and what Khushi has gone through from her childhood or at least her past where she has flashbacks of her Amma and Bauji when she was around 5-8 age
But cvs never showed us that
So thank you so much for writing this 😊

Thank you so much for appreciation guys. Honestly I cant promise anything beacuse I did not write it with a story plan in my mind, but will definitely try to add more to it for you people.. 😊 You guys are wonderful.

very nice os👍🏼 ..it is indeed a mature piece of writing dear😊

Originally posted by: dilectus

Thank you so much for appreciation guys. Honestly I cant promise anything beacuse I did not write it with a story plan in my mind, but will definitely try to add more to it for you people.. 😊 You guys are wonderful.

howww sweet..thnk u so many much..
waiting 4 next part...😛

Emotional os
i feel bad for khushi

Strong emotions in subtle words... Loved how Khushi's plight is put forth in dialogues between Khushi, her mother and Buaji...

Felt really bad for Khushi... But the good soul that Khushi is, she doesn't find fault with anyone and thinks that her family treats her so well... Khushi isn't aware of the big, bad world out there...

Very touching!

Please write more often!

this was aweome... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


can u please make it ss??

do pm me pleaseee😆

Fantastiiic OS...re u going to continue this...Plzzz u must do so..
It was a realistic one...People genrally think that they have some extra RIGHTS on adopted childern...this OS clearly depicted this thought...