ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
loved it
plz update as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Loved it...
Thanks for the pm
Do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Sorry for commenting late Lin. How was your meeting with Aura?
Reading the title straightaway i knew this gonna be an emotional one. So i prepared myself. nothing much done... just took a quite room and settled down to read ahead.

There were no discernible marks on her so he had not touched her but she felt so overjoyed for no recognizable reason- as though she been loved and admired for a long time...probably at a distance.
Things getting better now.☺️

"How sad! For waiting is not young Kushiji's forte!"
Aw, her eagerness and tempt to read the letter. I knew she would not read it without Payal beside her.

Payal's face lit up, "All the same!"
Yes, what matters is that it came from everyone.

"Well..." Payal tried to defend her forte, "Cuddling my husband is one matter, but imagine Buaji cuddling yours..."

Kushi blinked at Payal, "That's outrageously unthinkable! He doesn't even let his sister or his grandmother, and least of all his wife, cuddle him! How do you suppose he'll let Buaji near him?"

So many laughter moments! and then their rantings over a doll. I wonder how was khushi's voice as a child 😆

I tell him to stay put and spend time with his wife but he says he needs to keep working while awake to not let his mind wander to the silence that weighs within the house and the hearts that are empty of the childish laughter that filled our eighteen years.

She knows that it will be nearly three more weeks before any of you girls can come visit us but here she is, always readying and perfecting the place as though you are about to come the very next hour

It gives a heart sinking feeling. Its a one month struggle. and its just one week passed..

Payal's voice strained..

So did mine.

...All serious sorts, I say, like as though they expect me to turn serious after them! No siree, nothing of that sort will I be. There is nothing one gains from sitting with a sour face on. Life turns its tables, and you need to turn yourself round as well or it would be impossible to reach the dish. You get what I mean, girls?

I know Payalia will understand but that Goddess of Mischief! Hai Re Nandakishore! How in the world does she get into scrapes always? Her marriage itself is a curious communion!

😆😆 thank god at least she is not shouting or criticising at Khushi. She is adjusting to what has happened. I like the way she is perceiving things.


.but what use crying over spilt porridge! We can only consider the prospect of licking it off the table and we cannot consider even that if the table is not clean enough.

"Yew!" Kushi made a face, "Buaji has a horrible choice of similes when she tries to spare us some of her awkward wisdom!"

😆😆😆

Oh dear i'll make a few changes my words.. its not only an emotional update but a cheerful one. Buaji is so hilarious.

So many P.P.S's😆

The chess game and conversation there had some serous meanings. Need the trio team to decode soon pls... and finally the game will begin, With her (khushi) rules and her ways.

I am still holding my middle too...laughter is not ending. Superb update... I'm reading the letter again.👏👏👏


Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
I had really missed buaji and her quirky remarks after Arnav-Khushi had suddenly g0t married in the sh0w and reading the letter, I realized h0w much I missed her n0w!!0h I l0ve it dear...cant wait f0r the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Thankyou for the hilarious update,dear.The whole chapter had a feel good factor with everyone pulling Kushi's leg in a good natured way.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
I totally had missed this thread... Will now read the update :)
Read it :)
Awesome as always... loved the way you have explained Kushi's feeling in the morning that she felt happy as she was loved by being far...
Missed Arnav though...
Edited by limitless - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Hey Lin, am back again with my chatter! 🤗

So the first chapter on the new thread and boy has it begun with a BANG! 😎

I sooo loved Khushi's state of mind in the beginning, the lines " she felt so overjoyed for no recognizable reason- as though she been loved and admired for a long time...probably at a distance." stole my heart away ... I was joyous on reading that and inferring that he must have been up for quite some time admiring her and trying to simply believe that she of her own free will came to his room and chose to sleep on his bed next to him! Sigh silent love... It just tugs at your heartstrings I tell you... And that is precisely what the Lordy Lord is going through now though he would never admit to it even under the gravest of threats! 😆

It was good to see that the Anjali here has some brains and knows the concept of tact... The part where Manorama taunts Payal yet ends up buying all that Payal chose was heart warming... Even in the show, once you got past all those stinging remarks it was quite obvious that mami also was a good human being and for showing us that grey region again, I thank you Lin... 👍🏼

Khushi's enthusiasm was definitely contagious and all the reactions and emotions you described regarding the letter were spot on... 👏

That letter was pure craftsmanship... I mean you have been able to get all the emotions a family feels and goes through after giving away their daughters sooo damn perfectly that it seemed to be REAL.. I cannot think of a higher compliment than that to give you my dear.. I simply bow down in awe and astonishment as to the depth of human psyche you portray in your writing.

It was so endearing to see the girls reminiscing about their past while reading the letter... This is just another reason I love your writing Lin, everything you describe is so natural and relatable that I get lost in the magic you weave... 😳

Boy was it funny to imagine Buaji hugging Arnav.. The relationship between them on the show never failed to warm my heart and it is the same here as well, though I realise that it will be LONG before anything of that sort happens...

Buaji's descriptions of the silence in the house, the parents throwing themselves into work so as to remain busy and not think about their daughters evoked a sigh. The questions Buaji asked to Khushi, all so shocked and in disbelief. I am waiting to see how you handle that part when these two actually go home. I could go on and on Lin talking about that letter but I have so much else to talk about that I'm gonna stop talking about it now 😛

But I simply cannot let the barrage of P.Ss go unnoticed, that was hilarious dear 🤣, good touch of humor at the end of an emotionally wrought letter...

I'm glad to see how Nani and Anjali keep Khushi occupied and still let her be the child that she still is.. Even the thought of Nani cheating makes me chuckle and the arguments put in defense of that were funny!

Those two Raizada ladies though also pay close attention to Khushi's words about her husband and it warms me to the tips of my toes when they look at her knowing that she will be the one to heal him..

The ending of the chapter with Khushi declaring that she will make the rules reminded me of the challenges these two usually gave to each other in the show and I am excited about the game that has been set afoot... 😎

Waiting for the next part...

lotsa love,
breezy

P.S. Thank you for the lovely pictures of the Guptas... 😊

P.P.S Thanks for the PM as well! 😃

P.P.P.S Take care dear 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
unres...

lin, first n foremost, I am very happy to kno, dat ur father is alright now..
n welcome back, hope we will get regular updates now onwards...
the fact is, day by day I get more addicted to this tale, I wait desperately for the updates...

coming to the updates,

a nice way to connect khushi's long ago seen dream with her reality...
now, i would like to see how khushi utilizes her intuition...
can she really become first lord's PAWN QUEEN!!!!

loved the chit chat among the ladies...a very homely atmosphere..
naani's words n advice is very important for khushi...

n buaji's letter...it was really refreshing...she really know n understands her nieces very nicely...
n last but not the least, manorama, is indeed not very bad...
she has her own sheds...

all in all, I missed Lord Arnav, but liked the chapter...

plz update soon, dont make us wait long...
Edited by rockingsoni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
The letter reminds me home...
Loved the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Great update
The letter was nice lol so many P.P.Ss

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