ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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19sayana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Beautiful... Loved it... 👏👏👏

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Amira

@amira039.303

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

That was a sweet chapter, but I really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter! Please update soon! I just wish that arnav could let khushi know how much she means to him - or at least give a little hint. At least that would give khushi more confidence - but I love the way khushi never seems to give up on arnav. Loving it, please continue. Thanks for the PM

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dimishra

@dimishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

loved the update. the P. P. P. P. P. P. S. part of the letter was hilarious. preparing for the daughters and their grooms at home. really looking towards that.

the chess playing scenario was wonderful. eagerly waiting to know khushis discovery. again thanks a lot for the pm, as u r updating and sending them towards us when u r so busy.

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

as usual amazing update.

so it does not move too much forward in terms of the Arnav and Khushi.

but how the interaction is with the ladies of the house, is very intriguing to understand.
How free and open both Payal and Khushi with Anjali and Naniji.
how they can talk about Arnav, Akash, Manorama and it is not that there is secrecy how Arnav and Khushi's relation is restrained.
how Naniji is fair, the way she passed on the title of Payal. one more thing to note is that in IPK ...with the usual show business things...Khushi won the title of dance from Naniji...here the story is not only Arnav and Khushi...Khushi does not have to ace everything. She is she, and still she is good. Payal is good and so is every one.Payal has her traits of culinary art, being good at chess. she does not have to be docile older sister and that is it. Here fairness of the story is evident.
here story is story of every one, not only Khushi and Arnav.

please update soon.

Thank you for the pm.

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zainza

@zainza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

oh...there was no lordy...i'm missing him

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gmsk

@gmsk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Rabba ve..

I am soo relieved to know that uncle is fine now linny..

God bless you and your family always..

Soo finally m done with catching up with the update and soo soo very sorry for not commenting last night, as promised..

Was dam exhausted and slept a little early..

Anyways, as usual thoroughly enjoyed the update.

Our first lady had spent such a beautiful and warm night in the arm's of her husband but poor thing doesn't evn remember that.. she feels content and elated but is wondering why..

Well,let the days pass khushi..you'll definitely know the reason behind this feeling soon.. 😳

Buaji's letter made my eyes moist when she mentioned how garima is longing to see both her daughter's returning to her as per after marriage rituals..

Her letter was filled with love and concern for both her nieces but was obviously more concerned for her goddess of mischief..

Hahhhahha.. i laughted out so hard when both the sister's were having who-buaji-will-love-to-cuddle conversation 😆..and when khushi said

"He doesn't even let his sister or his grandmother, and least of all his wife, cuddle him! How do you suppose he'll let Buaji near him?...i was like.. girl ,she really doesn't know anything..does she..😆

"I win, my pawn-queen." - just a dream

"Worry not, Nani, the game is only about to begin. And for this game, I will make the rules." -soon to be reality i suppose *wink*

Thank u sooo much for the update linny..felt very delighted after reading it..

Thank u thank u thank u..

PS:obviously missed presence of our hotty first lordy...<3 ;)

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aspalas

@aspalas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Awesome...👏

Bua ji's letter z sooo good n the P.S.S t so hilarious...😆

hmmm...the game z just begun...lets C dear Khushi how do u make ur rules...it will not be easy to implement them due to certain husband...wish U all the Best...👍🏼

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

OOPs! galti ho gyi! Had posted the comments twice...

skip to next one.

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Hv done loads of loitering around on the forum for the day...so will jump straight to comments:

I m knotting my eyebrows and smirking on reading this...

she felt so overjoyed for no recognizable reason- as though she been loved and admired for a long time...probably at a distance.

and then slowly my smirk turn into full smile and then i giggle. 😳

When u mentioned the letter earlier and since the letter is from Buaji, i feared tht it may be a little ignorant of Khushi. but i was glad tht both the sisters were equally addressed. I liked it how u included everyone from the gupta family in the letter. What i liked most was how those very few words of Garima, held a vivid and lucid description of her rampant state.

enyoyed reading P.S.'s ...and Sanz i definitely thought of your P.P.S.'s here. 😉

I liked the how you wrote tht Lady Manorma despite complaining didn't refrain from buying things of Payal's choice.

Enjoyed the complete letter reading scene...the full moment tht sisters shared.

Missed Lordy...! u already know how much smitten he had got us all...tht just an update goes without him in picture and we start complaining agn. but thts not ur fault dear. U ignore my rants here. 😉

Like i told u earlier, already anticipating for the next update. Looks like the mystery behind the 'pawn-queen' is finally about to reveal.

Eagerly waiting. 😉

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Peda

@Peda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Hi

I've already read the update three times and have been contemplating about what to comment cause the chapter was amazingly brilliant as always.

So I'll tell you instead what I loved about it. I loved the change in tone...it was very light hearted and the the humor in the letter just added to the mood.

I eagerly await to read more.
Thanks for the pm and I hope you having a lovely weekend