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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


Thanks a lot dear...just about to start typing next part.
when story is in mind , it hardly takes one hour to type...may be will update by afternoon...



take your time dear...
but plz pm me because I'm not knowing when you updated your story
that y I missed your updates... Just saw in fan fiction yesterday...
that's y giving comments in bits
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795



take your time dear...
but plz pm me because I'm not knowing when you updated your story
that y I missed your updates... Just saw in fan fiction yesterday...
that's y giving comments in bits


sure dear.will pm you when i will update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Last Part

Shlok ...Astha let out a heavy breath which made him crazy. This was after three and a half years, he was listening his name with so much love from her... It made him feel that she belongs to him now completely...

Astha... he whispered in her ear biting her earlobe softly and looked into her eyes taking his lips very close to her, he cupped her neck , they slowly brushed their lips into a soft and gentle kiss , just when the kiss started deepening, Shlok pulled Astha closer to him , their tongues collided and explored each other , they deepened the kiss more and more . They both wanted each other now after wait of years, completely and wholly...

When Shlok felt Astha losing breath, he broke the kiss and picked her in his arms taking her to the room and laid her on the bed...while Astha's eyes were closed, shy and tender...Shlok smiled seeing her nervous face and shivering lips ... He cupped her cheeks and whispered ' I love u Astha...I wanted to tell you that night but look my sins made me wait for years to tell you...

Hearing those words made Astha open her eyes to look into his eyes. She could see love and only love in his eyes ... It melted her soul...'I love u too Shlok ' she whispered back. And I always wanted to listen same from you... We will never ever talk about that past, that may be bad but gave us biggest happiness of our life... Made us understand true meaning of Love...the true love... Which we could never understand, if all this had not happened... we will just remember happy moments of last three years, we have been together...

Shlok smiled on listening and carefully started caressing her cheeks with his thumb, Astha enjoyed his touch, his possessiveness and passion. After a few seconds she wrapped around Shlok's neck, guiding him to lean further. he started leaning on her more , their bodies plastering to each other ... Just when there was no space between their bodies or their lips , Shlok crashed her lips once again on Astha's ,... Astha instantly responded by opening her mouth further for him, he entered his tongue which explored her mouth as she licked his lower lip. The kiss started becoming aggressive


Coming back to reality, Astha blushed as her cheeks started getting hot . Shlok smiled on seeing her reaction and buried his face on her neck removing the pallu of saree and started giving her moist kisses on her exposed part of neck while his hands unhooking the blouse. He sucked on her lower neck making her moan in pleasure as she entangled her hands in his hair..

He kept leaving moist kisses as he pulled her clothes down and down, he kissed her waist and nibbled on her belly button for long making her body act again and again in pleasure ... Just when she couldn't take it anymore, she pulled him up and rolled on top of him, unbuttoned his shirt and kissing him up and down his muscular chest, she kissed his throat as he whispered her name .. She kissed Shlok passionately,
Finally he rolled on top of her, looked at Astha for approval before proceeding further.. Astha nodded her head shyly looking down. He covered them both with their sheets as he claimed her body, Astha's grip tightened on the sheets when he held her hand tightly in her's ...


I love you Astha...I was waiting for the day for years... When once again you will be all mine but this time just for love...saying Shlok took her lips in his and entered her body.

After claiming her body. He kissed her forehead softly and lied next to her. He pulled her closer and hugged her as tightly as he could.

When they broke the hug she too softly kissed his forehead with tears in her eyes... he moved his thumbs on her eyes...No Astha, no more tears now... there will be only happiness in our lives now onwards... She smiled on listening, snuggled in his chest and went off to sleep, and soon after Shlok dozed off too... The best sleep of their life after so long wait...
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Good Morning sweetheart... Astha kissed on Shlok's cheek... Shlok wrapped his arms around her waist pulling her closer... Good morning Jaan. This is the best morning in my life...saying he crushed his lips into hers...

Ok get ready soon, we are going to Ayii baba...Shlok spoke breaking kiss...

Shlok, so much has changed in these years na? You are so close to ayii baba now? But what about your ayii baba Astha spoke placing her head on his chest...Shlok pulled her closer and told her everything that she didn't know... Only when his cell rang...it was Anjali...

Ji ayii... How are you?

I am fine beta, how is Astha? Anjali asked...

She is fine too ayii and the best news is, she is with me at our home. Shlok smiled caressing Astha's face... Talk to her... and he handed over the cell to Astha...

Ji Anjali ji... Astha spoke with hesitation...

Anjali ji nahi beta, Ayii... I am your ayii... Anjali spoke with love...

Ji.. ji ayii. Astha smiled on listening...and they had a long and heart to heart talk... After that Shlok took Astha to Kirloskar's to make the best of the day for her...

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Love you jaan... Shlok spoke waking up on a lazy Sunday morning...

Love you too dear... Astha spoke getting up and with their usual routine checked the cell...

What happened? Shlok asked...

Nothing ... today ayii didn't call us .she was talking about Anjali as it was their routine to talk daily morning...

She may be busy sweety and moreover its Sunday, may be bab... Mr. Agnihotri at home... he spoke with a bit hatred...

Let me call ... Saying Astha called Anjali...

After a number of bells Anajli picked the call... Astha...saying she broke into tears...

What happened Ayii... Is everything fine? Astha spoke in a worried voice...

Your baba met with a heart stroke...Doctor has advised surgery but he is not ready for that...

What? Astha was shocked...but why Ayii? What is the problem in getting surgery done?

He is broken Astha... Since he felt death like moments...

But ayii...

He wants to see his children... Anajli continued...

But all are with him...

He wants Shlok and Puja now...

What? Astha was shocked... Talk to Shlok Ayii...and she handed over cell to Shlok...Shlok was also in shock on listening the conversation...

Shlok beta, please come for your Baba...Anjali pleaded

No, he is not my baba. He had made all suffer...you, me, Puja and moreover Astha...

But, it's his last wish... Saying Anjali broke again and cut the call...

Shlok... Astha placed her hand on his shoulder..

No Astha, don't... he warned Astha, I know what you want to say...

But he is your father...

I don't need that person in my life...We can't be family again ever...

But this needs its complete family... saying Astha placed his hand on her abdomen...

Astha... Shlok looked towards her in happiness as well as surprise...

Yes Shlok, I wanted to tell you... You are going to be father...and our baby need its complete family... Our baby deserves love and blessing of its elders... Let's go back...Not for you, not for me. Just for its sake...she pressed Shlok's hand slowly on her abdomen...

Shlok was thinking deeply with tear in his eyes...

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I... am sorry ... Niranjan folded his hands in front of Shlok, Astha, Puja and Aseem...

No baba, you are our elder, you have all the right to scold us, to care for us...Astha spoke

But I always made my prestige bigger than my family, my children... Now when I am near end, I am alone...

No baba, we all are with you...you will be fine...Puja said...please agree for your surgery...

Just on one condition, if you all promise never to leave me again... and forgive me by heart... You too Anjali... he spoke looking towards Anjali...otherwise, what's the meaning of my life...

We all are with you always baba. Shlok spoke hugging his baba...when Puja too joined them, While Aseem and Astha were standing smiling at them...

Astha, Aseem, you too join us, you are also my children... Saying Nirnajan had tears in his eyes...

When Shlok called doctor and completed formalities for his surgery...

After six hours, doctor came and informed them, the operation was successful...

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Sahib, we have arranged a hawan at home as you have reached home today... Anjali said...

This hawan will not only be for my health, this will be for happiness of my family... which is together once again... he smiled looking at the complete family standing together in front of him... As Anjali was about to move away from him... he held her hand... Anjali, I want to say something. Anjali was shocked...

I am sorry... Niranjan spoke...

Ji..?

Yes Anjali, I am sorry for making you follow me forever, for destroying your life, your image in front of your family. From today onward, no one will rule in our family.. Everybody will have his own life... Saying he opened his arms for all his children, who with tears moved into his arms.

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Shlok had joined Agnihotri institutes back while Niranjan had also permitted Astha to work again

Shlok and Astha were in their room at Agnihotri mention now...

Shlok, I am really happy now. We are with our family now...Astha spoke hugging her.

This all is because of you jaan. Shlok spoke hugging her back... Now no one can destroy our happiness...

Hummm... I love you Shlok... Astha smiled...

But I don't love you... Shlok spoke suddenly...

What? Astha picked her head form his chest with shock...

I love our baby more... he teased her...

You... Astha started beating him with cushions. He started running in the room, while Astha followed him...

Ahh... Suddenly she screamed...

Astha. He shouted coming back to her and holding her in arms... Are you OK? He caressed her face...

As soon as he reached her, she wrapped her arms around his neck and teasingly looked winking towards him.

Getting naughty? He smirked...and picked her up in his arms and slowly placed her on the bed. He turned off the lights staring at his beautiful wife.

She smiled up at him as he opened her hair and ran his hands through it.

"I love you Jaan and forever..."saying bent down and slowly kissed her on the cheek. He kissed her other cheek, her forehead, her chin on her abdomen for their baby...and then finally his lips landed on hers.


THE END


So how was it? For the First Time such bold trial..Any good any bad remarks? A story of 115 pages written with so much hard work doesn't deserve even a single line?

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story!!! thank you a lot for it!!!
come soon with the new one please!!!
Edited by Serviana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice start and nice ending loved it 😃😊👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

nice start and nice ending loved it 👏


Great??????nice start, nice ending? and middle family drama?????????😉
thanks a lot dear

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
All parts is awesome jeenia...
And this last one is fabulous...
All agnihotri's are togather...
Aastha and Shlok is very happy and they have baby too...
Perfect happy ending...
Just like SRK said...filmo ki tarah hamari zindgi me bhi end me sab theek ho jata hai...
Happys endings. ...or agar theek na ho to wo the end nahi...picture abhi baki hai...

And I know you will back with another superb updet...till date miss you...
Mere tumhare sab k liye happy diwali...
Wish you a very happy diwali too you and your family...
Edited by riddzykhanmalik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

All parts is awesome jeenia...

And this last one is fabulous...
All agnihotri's are togather...
Aastha and Shlok is very happy and they have baby too...
Perfect happy ending...
Just like SRK said...filmo ki tarah hamari zindgi me bhi end me sab theek ho jata hai...
Happys endings. ...or agar theek na ho to wo the end nahi...picture abhi baki hai...

And I know you back with another superb updet...till date miss you...
Mere tumhare sab k liye happy diwali...
Wish you a very happy diwali too you and your family...


YA, in the end everything has to be well otherwise its not ending... and i just wanted all of them to be happy...
tried to write a bit bold for the first time...
thanks for liking...
YA, will come back with some new story after diwali break... may be from next to next week...
Happy Diwali to you and Your Family too...
Have green and Safe Diwali...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Serviana

awesome story!!! thank you a lot for it!!!

come soon with the new one please!!!


Thanks a lot dear... for liking... will try to come back with new one may be after next week...
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes it was totally nice i liked the part where astha searches for her house and remembers shlok, i also liked the part where shlok comes to know about true colours of his father, also emotional scene with anjali and when he accepted her as ayii and last but not the least shlok and astha fighting with goons after the bomb blast truly enjoyed a lot reading IS IT LOVE????👏👏👏👏

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