D3 (A new FF, as I imagined) COMPLETED(15/07 /14) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb...awsum..mindblowing..fantastic...
i mean..its out of the world...
i just loved it..
u r amazing man...
jst keep on writing...
u hv a long way to go...
i wont be surprised if someday a novel comes out in ur name...
all the best..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

superb...awsum..mindblowing..fantastic...
i mean..its out of the world...
i just loved it..
u r amazing man...
jst keep on writing...
u hv a long way to go...
i wont be surprised if someday a novel comes out in ur name...
all the best..


kUCH ZYADA NAHI HO GAYA. ITS GR8 DAT U LOVED IT. thanks A LOT FOR UR APPRECIATION DR. but N-O-V-E-L. BAHOT ZYADA HOGAYA . PLZ DONT TAKE IT OTHERWISE.

REALLY THANK U A LOT DR
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANKS TO ALL MY SWEET FRNDS A LOT FOR LIKING IT. ANY ADVISE ON SONG, CHANGE IN A CERTAIN SITUATION OR ANY CHARACTER OR ADVISE ON ANYTHING WUD BE HIGHLY APPECIATED. SO PLZ DO NOT HESITATE TO GIVE ME ANY SUGGESTION.


AND ONE THING, SINCE DURGA PUJA WUD BE STARTING ON 10TH - I WUD BE VERY BUSY WID DAT AS U ALL KNOW DAT DURGA PUJA IN KOLKATA IS SUMTHNG WHICH CANNOT BE EXPRESSED IN WORDS, SO I WUD TRY & UPDATE AS MUCH POSSIBLE BEFORE 10TH & PLZ BEAR WID ME TILL 20TH.
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Posted: 11 years ago
kzz but 10 se phele update ka do
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Posted: 11 years ago
DEAR ALL , IN MY STORY SWARON IS AN OFFICIAL COUPLE, WHEREAS TAAREY R NOT. SO FOR NEXT FEW EPISODES, I WILL FOCUSS ON TAAREY. BUT THERE WUD BE LOT OF TAAYAAM SCENE AS WELL. THERE WUD BE MORE DANCE AS WELL, SO PLZ BEAR WID ME & DO NOT KILL ME ON DIS. & PLZ DO READ & OBVIOUSLY IF U LIKE IT PLZ HIT THE LIKE BUTTON.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 40

Music stops & both R & T come to their senses. T felt dat all her emotions which she was suppressing for a long time is becoming prominent. Feeling confused she left R & move towards Canteen. R followed her & stops her mid ways

R: Kya hua? Kya tumhe mere sath dance karna achha nahi laga?

T cant find any answer

R: Kya hua T?

T: Nahi R. aisi koi baat nahi hai. I just thought k saare friends canteen mein hai to hume bhi chalna chahiye.

R: T , 1 minute. I just want to make u happy. Tumne itne dino mein itni saari probs face kiya, phir Maths, Drama competition & DC ka work pressure. Phir wapas aatehi dance banned & den exam. Tumhe rest mila hi nahi. So, I thought for once, if you forget everything & dance then shayad tumhare saare stress ko main release kar payunga.

T: Thnx R, aapne mere liye itna kuch socha & trust me I am already feeling better

R: Phir chali kyon aayi?

T: Nahi who baaki fiends...

R: Sab aapne taarike se enjoy kar rahe hai T, team canteen mein & ur bro & bhabi in terrace. Kya tum sirf mere sath time spend karna nahi chahogi. If u want to speak ur heart out , I am always there for you. Jab hi main tumhare sath akela hota hu, one time I feel u enjoy my company, agle hi pal tum mujhe confused karke chali jaati hu? Kyon T?

T: (pause): R yeh sach hai that I like ur company. Bt I know k aap mere company enjoy nahi karte. I know k aap yeh sab ek responsibility maan k kar rahe ho as I am ur BFF's sister & ur assistant. Shi ne mera sath jo bhi Kiya , uske liye aap apne aap ko guilty maan te ho, isiliye aap yeh sab kar rahe ho. Bt R , main aapki responsibility nahi hu. I can take care of myself. If u don't like my company it's ok. Aapko zabardast mere liye kuch bhi karneki zaroorat nahi hai R.

R: Nooo T. Aisa nahi hai. Ha initially main tumhe apna responsibility maan ta tha, but now things have changed. I know u can take care of urself. Mujhe tumhara company achha lagta hai. I know tum bahot responsible ho gaye ho & even if required I can share my problems with u. May be abhi hum friends nahi hai, par hum 1 team k member to hai. May be is relation ka koi naam nahi hai, par har relation ka naam hona zaroori nahi hai. If u speak ur heart out with me , apne saare problems, ache moments mere sath share karogi, may be we cud find many common things between us & kya pata hum ache frnds ban jaye.

T(in her mind): Shayad R theek bol rahe hai. Agar main R se baat karungi to mere andhar jo bhi confusion hai, shayad who clear ho jaye

R: (in his mind): Plz talk to me T, so dat mujhe mere sare confused emotions ka matlab samajh mein aa jaye.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 41

Days passed & Taarey bonding gets stronger. Though first term & 3rd terms result did'nt came, bt classes has already started. One day, team were busy in Canteen, T enters

T:Bhai, mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai.

Sw:Ha T bol, kya hai.

T:Bhai who jo naye courses start hue hai, to I want to do the Diploma course in Event Management. Mere BCom to chal hi raha hai, agar sath mein event Mgmt ka course kar lungi to qualification bar jayega.

Sw:Dekh agar tune decide kiya hai, to it's ok. Insaan ko wahi kaam karna chahiye jo wo dil se karna chahte hai. So, u go & get ur admission. Aur yeh bahot achha decision liya hai tune

R: Maine tumse pehlehi kaha tha, jo tumhare dil ko khushi de, waisahi karna chahiye. Aur tumne to mujhse kaha bhi tha ki tumhe parties decorate karna , events ki details arrange karna achha lagta hai. & u have managed drama competition, Maths competition together & phir Dance Camp mein aana. So, u shud join event mgmt

Team: R & T ne yeh career oriented baatein kab ki?

They raise their hands C-H-E-M-I-S-T-R-Y

SW luked at dem

Team: Ha T, tune sahi decision liya . Agar hum dance ko apna career bana sakte hai toh tu, Event Mgmt mein apna career bana sakti hai

T smiles & saying thank you to all left.

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Episode - 42

Next few days remain busy for T, as she was busy with her new classes in event Management, 1st yr classes & also AGS duties.

Both Swaron are spending lovely romantic moments together.

Team is also enjoying

R hardly gets time to meet T. He was all alone . Though most of the time he enjoys with Swaron + Team, but every moment he missed T. His feeling for T was getting Stronger. He felt a strong urge to meet T, to talk to her, to spend more time with her. Bt it hardly happens.

Finally the day come when their results were out. All were verY nervous as their fate is going to be decided.

T was very nervous too. She went to see result. She found she has got 75% in all subjects.

She went to see theresults of the team

AMAR - 85% in all subjects

SWAYAM, REY , SHARON - 80% in all subjects

NEHA, VICKY, SIMMI -75% in all subjects

RINNI, VISHAKHA, SIMMI- 73% in all subjects

BHARAT - 65% in all subjects

All were very happy especially for Amar & Bharat. One has got highest among friends, & another due to excessive hardwork, not only overcome his weaknesses but at the same time scored a very good result

T, Aashi, Raghav came

Team: Aashi, Raghav - Kaisa raha tum logo ka.

Aashi & Raghav - We got 70% in all subjects

Team: Wow

Sw: T, tera ?

T: Bhai , I got 75%

Peon came & informed them dat VP & AVP has called dem

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Episode- 43

All came in VP'scabin.

AVP : Guys , we r happy with ur result & as per promise, we decided to withdraw dance banned & give u back ur RH

All were very excited & happy.

AVP : OOOKKK guys. Aap logo k liye ek aur news hai. Jaisa humne aap logo ko pehle inform kiya tha, that we are gonna arrange a workshop of dance , toh who 1 mahine baad start ho raha hai. Yeh workshop pura 1 mahine se hoga.Is mein participants all over India ayenge & u ll get a very big exposure.Uska format kuch aisa rahega

1st week - You all will get a chance to learn about many other dance forms jo aap log isse pehle kabhi try nahi kiya. Jo jis area mein excel kiya hai, unke alawa bhi u ll get to know about other dance forms.

Partcipants wud not only be clg students, other individual dancers bhi honge jo kisi bhi clg ko represent nahi kar rahe hai. So, u guys can imagine yeh kitne bare scale pe ho rahe hai.

Yeh total India mein 5 Zone mein divided horaha hai .

Jaise Mumbai mein jo workshop hoga- Pura western zone k participants ayenge

Kolkata mein - saare Eastern Zone,

Chennai mein-Whole southern Zone &

Delhi mein - Pura Northern zone

Is week k end mein sab k beech ek competition hoga jisme 10 best dancers in each dance category will proceed to next level

2nd Week-Each dance category mein thoda extensive training diya jayega, where u all would get to know about ur drawbacks

Is week k end mein 3 dancers eliminate honge & 7 will proceed to next level.

3rd week - Is week k end mein participants will have to dance with props & result will be decided on best choreography & use of props. So is week mein u all will get a chance individually to showcase ur speciality & talent by choreographing ur dance form & the way you would use ur props.

Is week k end mein aur 2 eliminate ho jayega & 5 would proceed to next level.

4th week - U all will get a chance to do a special workshop with a renouned choreographer.

5th Week - Yeh pura week competition rahega jiska details aap ko baad mein diya jayega.

Jo winner hoga, unko cash price to milega hi & at the same time based on ur overall performance, u will get a chance to work for 1 yr with a established Choreographer.

So, guys aap imagine kar sakte ho ki is 1 mahine ke performance k upar aap logo ka career depend kar raha hai. So all the best for ur future. & plz take dis workshop very seriously.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 44

VP & AVP turned towards T.

VP- Taani, yeh 1 mahina tumhare liye kaafi tough rahega.

T: Kyon sir.

AVP - Tum logo ki event mgmt class mein total 15 students hai. Aur in 15 students ko individually 1 mahine k liye separate assignments mein bheja jar aha hai . This is ur details

She handed over a paper to T, where the following details is given.

ASSIGNMENTS FOR EVENT MANAGEMENT STUDENTS

1) Arranging Conferences & Meetings (Tourism Mgmt students will help in arranging hotels & ticketing)

2) Arranging marriage & social functions (Tourism Mgmt students will help in arranging hotels & transportation)

3) Arranging Trade Fairs (Tourism Mgmt students will help in arranging hotels, ticketing & transportation)

4) Arranging Award functions , charity events

5) Arranging auctions & related activities

6) Arranging exhibitions

7) Arranging events on behalf of Corporates

8) Arranging governmental events

9) Arranging promotional fairs

10) Arranging Product launch

11) Arranging Premiere shows

12) Arranging special events like workshops (whether painting, or different performing arts)

13) Arranging marketing related events

14) Arranging social events like awareness programmes (arranged by NGO's)

15) Arranging Summer Camps for Schools or college students (Tourism Mgmt students will help in arranging hotels & transportation)

VP: Har students ko 1 mahine k liye 1 particular type ki event pe focus karna hai & as a part of ur course you have to prepare a detailed report on it. 1 mahine ke assignment complete hone k baad , u have to exchange reports with each other, so dat u all will have an idea about requirement of different types of events . As a part of dis course , yeh 1 mahine baad , u'll have to work in an event management company as a trainee & based on ur performance , u ll be given marks. After completion of 6th month, u will get a Diploma Certificate.

AVP: T, tumhe Drama & Math competition ki arrangement ki experience hai. Dance camp, you attended bt as a student, not as an AGS. So, yo have to attend their workshop of dance as a part of ur assignment.

VP: Guys, since u all will be busy for the next 1 month, so responsibility of all the 4 student body - GS, AGS, CS & ACS will be provided to other students for time being. So, all of u can leave & get ready for ur new assignments. ALL THE BEST

Everybody left

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