D3 (A new FF, as I imagined) COMPLETED(15/07 /14) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode -45

R was very happy as T would be staying with them during the workshop & thus can spend more time with her.

One fine day, team enjoying in Canteen & T enters

Team: Hi T, kaisi ho. Evnt Mgmt ki classes kaisi chal rahi hai? Bahot busy ho gayi ho yaar. Humare liye to abhi tumhare paas time hi nahi hai!

Raashi (Raghav + Aashi) - Ha yaar tu to hume bhi bhool gayi

T: Ohhhooo. Aisi baat nahi hai. Actually bhai aap ko kuch kahena hai. Who Ma ko low pressure ki wajah se tabhiyat kharab ho gayi hai . So, I have to go to Jodhpur.

Sw: Yeh kab hua? Actually mera bhi ghar pe baat nahi hui. Theek hai ek kaam karte hai- main tkts le ke aata hu , phir hum dono kaal hi chale jayenge . ok.

T: Nahi Bhai. It's ok. Aap yahi raho. Main akelehi chali jaungi. Waise bhi samne workshop start hone wala hai, so bahot kaam rahega. Mere sath agar aap bhi chaloge toh yah ape probs hogi. So, u stay , I can manage

Sw: Nahi T, main bhi tere sath chalta hu. Koi prob nahi hogi.

T: Bhaaai, plz. Aap yahi raho. I promise main roz phn karke aapko update karti rahungi

Sw: Ok, par jaldi aa jaana.

R was following their conversation & was upset thinking dat, he wud nt be able to meet T for next 2 weeks.

T left. R makes an excuse & he also left

R: I know tumhara jaana Zaroori hai, bt plz jaldi aa jaana

T: R: Pehle main jaun to sahi. Jaungi nahi to jaldi kaise ayungi.

R: I'll miss u

T gets happy hearing dis(in her mind) I'll miss u too.

(loudly) Koi bhi kaam hoga to cl kar lijiyega

R: Kaam nahi hoga toh cl nahi kar sakta?

T (pause) aap mujhe kabhi bhi cl kar sakte ho.

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Episode - 46

Next day whole team including Sharon, Rey & Swayam went to station to drop Tani.

Sw: Apna Khayal rakhna. Pohoch tehi phn kar dena.

T: Ha bhai

Sw: Khidki ke bahar haat mat rakhna. Raaste mein anjaan logose baat mat karna. Koi chocolate , lollypop ya kuch bhi offer kare mat khana.

T: Bhaaaiii. Mujhe akele travel karneki aadat hai. Aur plz main koi kid nahi hu, jo aap aise advise de rahe ho

Sw : Ha pata hai

T: Toh Phir?

SW: Nahi, who travel time pe aisi baatein sunne mein achha lagta hai na- khidki ke bahar haat mat rakhna & all dat

Everybody laughed at their conversation. T left by train.

Few days late, all sitting in Canteen

Team: Yaar SW, teri T se baat hui. Who theek se to pohoch gayi thin a? Teri chichi kaisi hai ab? & who wapas kab aarahi hai? Actually T nahi hai na, toh kiska leg pull karu, achha nahi lag raha hai.

Before Sw, R started answering

R: Ha yaar. Who theek se pohoch gayi thi & uski Mom bhi theek hai, & who next week hi aarahi hai.

Boys (surprised): Tujhe kaise pata chala?

Girls : Ha ha bolo bolo. Tum kaise jante ho?

R: (feeling a little awkward): Ha meri usse phn pe baat hui na, isiliye

Girls : Usne hume to phone nahi kiya. Aashi, Raghav kyat um logo ki use baat hui?

RAASHI (together) : Nahi to

Everybody lukd at R

R: wo... Usne mujhe bhi phn nahi kiya. Actually maine phn kiya tha.

Boys lukd at each other, raised their hand, C-H-E-M-I-S-T-R-Y

Girls : Tumne use phn kyon kiya tha

Sw: Kya hai yaar. GS hai, to apni AGS ko to phn kar sakti hai na. Tum log aise kyon...

Team : Nahi yaar hum to aisehi puch rahe hai

(silently to one another : are yaar yeh SW ko sakh ho jayega. Bas kar)

Boys :n Yaar hum thoda ghum kea ate hai

Girls: Ok, SH humare sath chalo. Hum bhi thode der mein aate hai

Sh: OK

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Episode - 47

Here REYAM sits together

R: To T apni MOM ki bahot close hai na

SW: Ha, actually, mera Chacha ji i.e T ka father, uski paida hotehi, ghar chod ke chala gaya. Kaha hai kisiko pata nahi. Mujhe & T ko to chachaji ka face bhi yaad nahi hai. Dat's why chachi use humesha apne aap se chipak ke rakti thi. That's why she is so soft in nature. Shi k treachery k baad mujhe laaga she wud completely break down. Par she managed to become strong

R: Par woh apne father ko bahot miss karti hogi na

Sw: Actually family members jaise mera parents & me - hum sab uske liye bahot protective hai. Mere Ma & Papa toh use princess ki tarah rakhti hai. Bt she don't relate to my father also as there is no such strong bond between me & my father. According to T "Hum dono ka condition ek hi hai- ek ka gfather uski payda hotehi ghar chodke chala gaya & dusre ka father hote hue bhi kabhi sath nahi diya".

R: Oh ho. I am sorry. Mujhe tere & tere dad ke bare mein nahi pata tha.

Sw: It's ok. Actually T & me bahot close hai as we both r single child, both are nt attached to father , so humari bonding sibling se bhi zyada hai.

In the mean time T used to cl her brother SW everyday at night where both of dem used to update each other about their surroundings. Post their dinner SWARON gets busy with their lovey dovey conversation & R used to cl T

Bt whenever R gives any info to T , their convo used to happen in following way

T: Ha pata hai

R: Kaise

T: Bhai se thodi der pehle baat hui na, so he told me

R: Yeh SW humesh mujhse pehle tumhe sab kuch kyon bata deta hai? Mere liye kuch bhi nahi chhorta.

T: To ab jab aapko pata chal hi gaya hai, that I am always updated abt ur surroundings, to mujhe phn karneki zaroorat nahi hai.

R: Har roz tumse baat karneki ab aadat hogayi hai na

T: aadat hai, chhut jayegi.

R: NAHIII. Agar main kahun dat I don't want to change dis habbit, den?

T smiles & can't find any answer.

R: Kya hua?

T: Kuch nahi , I shud go, kaal baat kare.

R: OK bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...taarey are so sweet cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the chapters are superb
I like that Taarey bond are getting stronger and Rey missing her like crazy lol
Hope her mom get well soon
The boys teasing Rey was awesome
I like Taayam bonding, they are so adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovelt doubly updaye ...
taarey cute nad sweet talk ...
swayam instruction ..about train travel ...soo cute bro
taarey night talk ...lovely update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story
loved the updt
updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 48

One night SWARON telephonic convo.

Sw: Hi

Sh: ha bolo

Sw: Kya hua aisa rude kyon sound kar rahe ho

Sh: Mood off hai.

Sw: Par kyon?

Sh: Tumhe nahi lagta kit um kuch bhul rahe ho.

Sw: Kya

Sh: Ab mujhe yaad dilana padega.

Sw(in mind) Kya main kuch vul raha hu

Sh: Ab chup kyon ho? Humara relationship official hua hai, uske baad dance camp bhi chala gaya aur aaj tak tum mujhe 1 date pe nahi lekar gaye

Sw(in mind) Oh shit

Sh: b chup kyon ho. I don'nt kno anything . tume mujhe 1 date pe lekar jaana hai, bas

Sw: Sorry sweetheart. Tum jo bologi. Jaha jana chahogi, I ll take u. Plz ab gussa thuk do

Sh: ok. Promise

Sw: Ha baba promise

Nxt day all met at Canteen. Bt as usual Sharon was nt speaking to Sw.

Sw in Sh ear's : Kya hua?

Sh: Jab tak tum mujhe date pe lekar nahi chal rahe ho, I'll nt speak to u

Sw: Ok, promise main jaldi hi arrange karta hu , plz gussa mat karo.

All left for class. After class ends, boys were sitting in last corner keeping all of their bags in front sit whereas girls sitting in 1st row

Sw(to Boys) : Yar Sh kaafi gussa hai. Usne mujhe kaha hai, jab tak na main use dt pe le jaunga to wo mujse baat bhi nahi karegi

Boys: Achha chal, tune humari itni help ki, hum tere liye kuch sochte hai.

On the other hand with girls,

Rin: Sh, tumne yeh A/C kip rob solve ki hai kiya.

Sh: Nahi. Par shayad SW ne ki hogi

Girls: ooo

Sh: Plz, aise react mat karo. O apna parai ko lekar kaafi serious hai. Ruko, Rinni, main tumhe uska copy deti hu.

Rin: Tum uska bag dekhogi? Wo kuch mind nahi karega?

Sh: No baba. Are main to uska bag se copy nikal rahi hu, thodi na zasoosi kar rahi hu. Itna privacy hum maintain karte hai. Don't worry

She took out the accounts copy from SW's bag & gave it to Rin. She suddenly saw a diary in his bag & took out the same. She looked around to find dat nobody is noticing her. She put dat diary in her bag & give an excuse & left from there. She went to Girls room & read it . She found all of SW's emotions written in dat diary & found dat Sw's wishlist

1) Chai wid Sh

2) Rain Dance

3) Camping

4) Biking

5) Sh cooking in his home

On the other hand, in classroom boys came to take their bag & decide to sit in Canteen to plan out SWARON's date

Rinni came

Rin: Sw, wo Sh ne tumhara copy di thi mujhe as mujhe 1 A/C kip rob thi. To ye lo tumhara copy

Sw: To solve hogayi prob?

Rin: Ha. Ab tumhara copy dekhi thi to prob ko to solve hona hi tha. Thnx

Sw smiles. When he was about to put his copy in the bag , he found his diary to be missing. He felt nervous. At dis point Sh cls up.

Sw: Ha jaan, bolo

Sh: Tum mujhe abhi terrace pe aake milo

Sw: Kyon kiya hua

Sh: Are pehle aao to sahi.

Sw: Ok

They both met at terrace & Sh shows him his diary. Sw got nervous

Sh: Tumne apni saari feelings yah ape to likhdi, mere samne kyon nahi bola. Anyways, tumhari wishlist maine pad li & I have a plan jaha pe tumhari & meri dono ki wish puri ho jayegi

Sw: Wo kaise

Sh: Lets go on a chai date. Mujhe tumhare sath date pe jaana hai, kahi pe hi ho, I don't have any prob. To chai date hi sahi.

Sw was ver happy to see dis & they go on the chai date.

Since the entire Chai date as shown in the story was very romantically set, so I ll nt destroy it by penning it down. So guys enjoy SWARON chai date

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xdYVGmhHIKM

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 49

2 weeks after T left, t inform Sw & R dat she wud be arriving next day. But some last moments arrangements need to be done before they all left for dance workshop. So, the student body needs to be present at college.

R: SW, tu aur Sh milke saare arrangements dekhle as u were CS & ACS

SW: Tu bhi toh GS hai na, tu dekhle. Mujhe T ko receive karne jaana hai.

R: Ha isilie toh. Tu & Sh dekhle, main T ko receive kar ke atta hu

SW: Kyon tu kyon jayega? Who meri behen hai, so I wud go.

R: Ha wo meri AGS hai, as a GS , I wud go

SW: AGS hone se pehle She is my sis, toh I ll go

Raaghav & Aashi- Xcuse me. Hun uske best frnds hai, so we wud go. AAp log nahi

Hearing all dis

Sh: Guuuyyysss. Shut up. SW, tum mere sth chalo, bahot kaam hai & pura team along with Raghav & Aashi, bhi mere sath chalo as sabki help chahiye. R tum T ko receive karne jao, as only last moment workshop details jo T k paas hai, use chhor k baaki sab hum dekh lete hai. T ayegi, to wo bhi chk kar lenge.

R was extremely happy, SW gets upset & goes from there.

Team(to one another)- Yaar yeh R , T ko receive karne ke liye itna excited kyon tha? raised their hand, C-H-E-M-I-S-T-R-Y

T arrives & sees R outside station.

T: Aap yaha? Bhai kaha hai?

R: Use kuch kaam tha. Kyon main aya to tumhe achha nahi laga.

T: Nahi, aisi to koi baat nahi hai. Anyways chaliye chalte hai

Both sat in the car & started talking on different topics

R: Tum thak gayi hogi, so tum ghar jake rest karo , sham ko milte hai

T: It's ok R, aap jaiye main fresh hoke clg aati hu

R: Kyon? Jaane do na, tum rest lo , sham ko milte hai

T: R, main event mgmt ki student hu. Agey chal k kaam ki pressure badne wale hai. So, rest lene ka time nahi hai, U go, I am cuming

R: Agar tum insist karti ho, toh main bhi wait karta hu, den sath mein chalet hai.

At Taayam's home,

T went inside, gets ready & after 1 hr left with R for college

At college,

Whole team welcomes T

Girls: Tumhe bahot miss kiya. Kaisi ho? Mon kaisi hai?

T: I am fine. Ma bhi theek hai

Sh: Welcome dear & hugs her

Sh+ Sw+ R + T: Guys hum chalte hai, aaj Saturday hai, Monday ko nikalna hai, to kuch formalities baaki hai. Hum khatam kar k aate hai

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Episode - 50

Monday comes & they all left for workshop. - 1st WEEK

T was luking after arrangement involved in this event along with students from other Event Management college & employees of the Company who is taking care of this whole evnt

She took dem to their respective rooms & provide dem the timetable of 1st week of workshop

SW: Tu hum logo k sath lunch to karegi na?

T: Nahi bhai, mujhe bahot sare kaam hai. Meri working hrs rahegi subhah 7.30 a.m se raat ko 10.00 p.m tak. Uske baad main free hu

Sh: Toh theek hai na, uske baad hi aa jana humare sath dinner karneke liye .

R(in his mind)T tere sath saara din nahi rahegi, bt u know dat woh tere aas paas hi hogi. So, tu jab chahe use mil sakta hai.

Workshop started. It is obviously a hectic schedule. The whole team individually got an exposure to other dance forms as well.

The whole day used to be tiring for T as well. She being a trainee is busy with her work all day & gets a chance to meet the whole team during dinner

Both Raaghav & Aashi mixed well with the team & whenever gets a chance started chatting with T.

Though being a trainee T was supposed to be staying with students from other event Management clgs & employees of the I Dreams Events (the Company who is taking care of this whole evnt), bt the girls insisted dat T shud stay wid dem.

So, Siddharth sir, T's boss allowed her to stay wid her frnds

After 1st week ends, everybody performed. Since participants are huge I number , so the competition took place for 2 days. Sunday morning results are going to be announced

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