FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added) - Page 91

Originally posted by: amaypranay

Farah...way to adorable...And desire able...your words are simply that...

This update...was too smooth...and fabulously written...loved it!

'I love her'..the timing...of this story is just perfect!

Originally posted by: RizArshi

I so want to know about the Green Eyed Monster in YOUR love story. Do tell me 😉

Originally posted by: divya1122

aweeesome.!

just waiting for some arshi moments! cute wala moments...nd so eager for arshi hug..after 3 freekin weeks...it feels like 3 frekin years :P

continue sooon..thanx for the pm :D

Originally posted by: Asiyamajeed

Damn i lovd d4d...:)
amazng update...
Jst lovd it...

Cntinue soon...
Thanx fr the pm..

P.s..EID MUBARAK...:)

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Hehe .. That we will have to discuss in private! 😉

Originally posted by: LondonChick

That update was most definitely worth waiting for!

And the ending hayla itna cliff hanger!

Desperately waiting for the next part.

Loved it

Originally posted by: laksh65

awesome chapter, their inner feelings were beautifully narrated, so finally asr's business brain has given him a signal that he loves her,

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Welcome back hope you are enjoying the festive season F! Thank you for giving us such a well thought out and well written chapter yet again! I knew that a little break or distance will be good for these kids!

I could feel their frustration and desperation for each other, with Khushi wanting to surprise him yet not being able to meet him. It was like nothing went her way and then you made my favourite bit of the chapter happen and I will just have to quote you because I can't even begin to paraphrase this:

'How did she manage to make him feel this way always? Why he felt like believing in heaven when she was around? Why had he felt so empty knowing she was miles away from him? What were all those uncharacteristic changes in his behavior? Why now, he, Arnav Singh Raizada, felt like screwing everything else and hugging her so tight so that she could never walk away?

"Damn." Arnav's brain answered as if in sudden realization. "I love her."

^^Seriously it doesn't get any smoother and better than the above! With the above realizatin and the way you made the above realization happen I think you made Khushi and all your readers like myself extremely happy!🤗

Now that they are both on the same page, they can embark on this journey of love and understanding together. Once you love someone, you will begin to understand them too and once Arnav ji understands our KKG I am sure they will have the most beautiful relationship there is!

LOVED IT F and I cannnot wait to see what you unravel next!

Originally posted by: nehaarshi

He loves her! He loves her! HE LOVES HER!!!!!!! Omg! Okay well we knew that was gnna happen but i can still not contain myself! Gosh you make me miss IPKKND even more eachtime with your outstanding updates! :)
That is a compliment btw!
Okay so finally both face to face, I hope they both confess again I know khushi already did but again wouldn't harm her.
Okay so before I start going too overboard with this please do update soon and i loved this one :')

Originally posted by: indi52

damn... he loves her.

i so enjoyed the chapter... this carefully felt and sifted through crafting of asr's journey to an emotion he never thought he could feel is lovely.

and i am so glad khushi decided he was too important for her to give up just because he is not into conventional denouements of a stated emotion... marriage because you love. frankly i have never understood this connection personally though i did badger the man i loved to marry me, yet there were days i was equally happy to just live with him. so me very happy when set ideas like these get examined.

their meeting was beautiful... and the forest of feelings in both...

thanks, farha... was thinking just a couple of days back, ki holo. 😳