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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aafan

Atleast Khushi is being truthful to herself now. Payal's wedding is approaching ...but not to Akash.
Humm... R we going to see any drama and Arnav will handle it?

But biggest news is finally Arnav realized that he loves Khushi.
What's the deal with Khushi's abroad trip and new character ...
Please update sooon.
Wonderful update and thanks for the pm.


I will do only one love story at at time in this story. So .. no .. there will be no Akash-Payal angle here. 😊

Thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnupamaJY

that was just awesome
loved it.
the emotions were written beautifully
their longing to see each other embrace each other were written amazingly
finally after 3 long weeks they met again

"A part of her ran to him, to seek comfort in those strong arms. A part of him opened his arms, to let her softness mold him. Their souls embraced each other, trying to make up for torment of the last three weeks, feeling more now what they had
missed as they were in front of each
other again."

just loved that
oh how much i love your writing
well khushi's surprise didnt go wasted
he was actually surprised
you know what i loved most in this update is arnav's realization that he loves her
all his feelings are not desires but love

"Damn." Arnav's brain answered as if in sudden realization. "I love her."

loved that
will be waiting for the next update


I was particularly very apprehensive about the part you have quoted .. I was wondering if it sounded too dramatic. I am happy too know you liked it!

Thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbug

wonderful update!!...damn he loves her :D

finally... laut ke budhhu ghar ko aaye ;)


@ bold: 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EmpressSarayu

Should I say finally and prepare myself for another earth shattering twist in the story?

Can't wait to read more! :)


Earth shattering twist!!! Hmmm ... well, I have no intention to continue this story till the post marriage days and also this story is not ending too soon. So .. yeah, there will be something. No villains though. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

I just read the whole FF in 2 days. this is frickin beautiful! <3 i donno how to give you a long review praising you for your writing but being a reader and a writer i guess the best thing i can ever tell you is that this is the best FF i have ever read on Arhi. I love how you have made all their encounters so pure and beautiful. Heck its making me optimistic...nd well believe it love again. i had all these fairytale hopes and dreams when i was younger*Not that i am old old now :D* but i guess somewhere in between i stopped believing in that magic of thinks.everthing seemed so drawn out , planned and monotonous to me.But this FF and your writing have given me back a bit of that old crazy feeling of hope and well i adore you for that.



Thank you loads!


The best FF on Arhi you ever read? Ok ... I am honored and thoroughly blushing too. ☺️

This story is very special to me since this is the first piece I have started writing on Arhi. Apparently, readers love the other story I have written more. So it really makes me feel wonderful when someone says they like this story. And to add more to it .. it is a lot more special now as you are saying it has given something to you personally. Can I feel more honored? 😳

Thank you for joining in. I would look forward to have you with us through rest of the journey. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prati_incept


amazing update...

.. and they are back to sq1.. but have option to choose different path now..
and looks like they will try and go the traditional and forever after way..

awww.. he realized.. lets see what he does about it
1. run away (doubt it.. since can not go far)
2. confess (again doubt it.. after all he is ASR for nothing)
3. keep it to himself and wait until something extra-ordinary to happen..

and

4. something i didnt think off

i know ramanchi.. again..

waiting for next..


Hahaha ... well somewhat 3 not completely! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Distance makes the heart grow fonder and in Arnav's case the three week's away from Khushi helped him realize how much Khushi means to him.


Women have this emotional radar and their realization of feelings is always sharper than men's Hence Khushi already knows her love for Arnav while Arnav just realized that he loves her. YAY! Finally :)

I loved the way each was desperate to see the other. the restlessness was written really well by you Farah!

And they way each of them believe they are hallucinating about the other is so cute :)

But the best part had to be how you wrote about their souls meeting even though they stand at a distance from each other amidst a room full of people.

Hope you'll not keep us waiting for long this time. Pretty please...waiting for enxt update already😆


Just wanted to tell you .. I love reading your replies. It summarizes the feel of the chapter beautifully.

Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shipra.aqua

Thanks for the pm...😊


Thanks for dropping by! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhima11

One of the best stories I have read on IF... So beautifully written... I fell in luv wid the story frm the first chapter...

Keep up the good work...

-Pankhuri



Thank you so much! Your kind words really mean a lot. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .sobtian.

Awesome update!!

The 3 weeks of only phone conversations has created a strong bond between them. One of understanding and cordiality, not just the physical relationship they were having before.
I guess those 3 weeks made Arnav finally realise that he loves Khushi.

Hats off to their control for not embracing in that wave of passion and missing each other infront of the staff present. 😳

Loved it! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)


@bold: Haha ... yeah that would have been something but I am trying to keep it real! 😉

Thanks for reading! 🤗

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