TAAREY/D3 FF-YAARIYAN (Chapter 4 on pg 14) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Heya guys back again wid an updt..i know I am late n u guys know the reason so sry for dat...but here is the updt..n I am telling u ma bahut buri ho romance likhne ma so plz adjust kr lena..n guys do check the banner on pg 1...so enuf of my bak bak here is the chapter..i.e.CHAPTER 3

Taarey were glaring at each other with tahan wala luks which was again broken by our possessive bhai swayam..dey all went to class..they have to sit with deir seat partners..n dey were..

Sharon-Swayam

Neha-Vicky

Simmi-Nil

Rinni-Amar

Aashi-Bharat

N now it was our taarey who were left..

Proffesor-so taani u have to sit wid rey

Taarey-no ways..

Prof-why???

Ta-mujhe iss jaise ladke k sath nahi baithna hai

Re-excuse me! Tum kya ma bi nahi baithna chahta...

Ta-oh! Plz ok..tum toh ho hi Casanova toh tum kisi bi ladki k sath baith jaoge..

Re-oh shutp miss touch-me-not..

All dis was happening students were seeing dem wid open mouths...

Ta-tum..

Prof-shut up both of u n no more argument..

Then taarey had to sit wid each other..

In the evening..

Taayam were at home.taani was preparing dinner n swayam was in the kitchen only

Sw-yr mujhe ni pta tha ki meri princess itna bada surprise degi mujhe...

Ta-ha toh apko lagega q??aap toh sirf Sharon BHABI k hi khayalo ma khoye rehte ho..(teasingly)

Sw-aisa nahi hai princess..u know wat ma tumse bahut pyaar krta hu..aur jb tumhare bare ma sochta hu toh mere face pe ek smile aa jati ahi..tumhari un weird,cute n crazy antic ko yaad krte hue..(now he was smiling through tears)..

Taani couldnt say anything she jst hugged him tightly..

Sw-tumhe yaad hai taani bachpan kaise tumne ek ladke ko thappad maara tha..

Ta-(breaking the hug.but was in his arms) kaise bhul skti hu ma bhai.

Flashback

Taani 7yrs n swayam 9yrs

Swayam was playing in the garden wid his frnds...but some bad boys came n started fighting wid dem...but a guy slapped swayam n swayam fell on the floor...n blood started coming ou of his lips n frm knees too... swayam went to his home sobbing...lil taani saw dis n ran downstairs.

Ta(sobbing)-bhai kya hua aap ro q rhe ho...

sw-wo taani..bs chot lg gyi hai..kch ni hua hai..

ta-kaise kch nahi hua hai bhai..aap ko toh blo...blo..

sw-blood

ta-ha wo nikal raha hai..

taayam mom-are beta tumhare bhai ko na..kch gande ladke k aake maar k chle gye..

now lil taani was angry dat how can sum1 beat his brother...she ran outside the house to garden followed by swayam...

ta-oye tum log..tum logo ki himmat kaise hui mere swayam bhaiya ko marne ki..

sw-taani chl na yr..

guy1-oho dekho bhai ko bachane k liye behen aayi h..

taani went to that guy n bit him n slapped on the face...now other guy came to hit taani but swayam slapped him..n the bad boys ran away..

flashback ends

now taayam were laughing...den taani hugged him n

ta-bhai I luv u so so so so mch...

sw-luv u 2 princes...

ta-pta hai mujhe prince..

then dey burst out laughing..den the door bell rang..swayam went to open the door..all entered the house n were seated...wen taani came frm the kitchen gals hugged her n boys greeted hr..except rey..taarey were staring at each other wid attitude..swayam noticed it n said..

sw-plz guys not again..

taani then went to kitchen she made the dishes which were favourite of gang which she got to know frm swayam...

here wid gang all were drinking deir juices but by mistake bharat hand hitted rey hand n the juice fell on his shirt..'

bh-abe sry yr..

re-its k dude...(to swayam) dude washroom

sw-ya there it is..

re-thanks

taani was now fully wet due to sweat on her body so she decided to take a shower taani went to her bathroom but the tap was for repair so she cant use it..

ta-hey krishnaji!!!! Ab mujhe bhai k washroom ma jana padega..

taani went to swayam washroom rey was also there in the washroom.as soon as rey turned taani bumped into him and both fell on the floor as rey top on taani and by mistake the shower got opened and was falling on taarey they were all wet but dey were lost in each other eyes...LLHH was der for about 5 minutes taani hair was falling on her face ry removed the hair strands and tucked it behind her hear then rey started to come closer and taani closed her eyes..dey were so engrossed in each other that they forgot that they were in the washroom..rey first kissed her forehead n cleaned the sweat then kissed her nose n he was coming close to her lips but swayam came their n knocked on the door n taarey came to sense...

sw-rey kya kr rha hai..itna time q lg rha hai..

theu both got up and were feeling shy...den rey opened the door and swayam was shocked to see taani there...

so here I end guys...hope u guys liked it...as I said I am bad in writing romance so adjust kr lena...plz do hit like n commet..plz guys long comments krna..plzzz n silent readers plz atleast hit like...

PRECAP-swayam reaction n lots of masti..

LOVE

SOUMYA

Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow very nic chap...

romance was nic...

nd waiting 4 swayam reaction...

plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awsum update...
taarey giving taashan look to each other😆
taarey part was awsum..
taayam part was so sweet..
waiting for swayam's reaction...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
superb update, u said u r bad at writing romantic scenes,
u wrote it very well.

now waiting for next update, swayam reaction and taarey
too, update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awsome updates...😊
Read in one go...😃😃
Waiting for nxt part update soon...😊
PM me when u update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Awesone update
taarey nok hjok
tayum part loved it
flashback superb
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
lolz chapter !!!!...
tarey in tanhan is so full on gr8 while imagining!!!

hehehhe... swayam said not again .. was too funny..

the romantic prt was cute cute was romance!!!

luvd it totally.. update soon nxt plz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awww
lovely tashan
missing it so much!!!
and taayam were so cute!!!
even missing tht also
and then taarey under shower!!!
hayyeee!!!!
finally butterflies strted!!!
pls update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
mast update ...
taarey fight .cute
washroom scene ...soo cute and sweet
update soon .doo pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Supurb...n tum romance me zyada buri nai ho...infact u r really v good at it...loved it...awesum...

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