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@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Hey zee! Its totally understandable!!

And yeah like you said paper planes and hierarchy hai nah!

And I know how close dwe is to you! I still rem after vwt even before starting hierarchy you were super excited! :)

Lady anything you give and no matter when you give, this virtual sis will be waiting arms open wide! :)

Cheers

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

wonderful update...their love building up

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DanieshArnav

@DanieshArnav

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Awesome update...

Really nice bonding Arnav and khushi are sharing...

Beautiful...

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adithyan

@adithyan

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

i felt as if i am walking with them..beautiful update...

liking this simple straight forward arnav...[he is a bit complex too]😆

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: voldemort
im loving the innocence here...although i knw u had graded this one as 18+ in the beginning,
but sooo far (the as this is t he plot build-up stage), the innocence of khushi n the intensity of Arnav defines the beauty of ur story...
im sure it will be a treat to experience this relationship gradually mature into love and intimacy...
loved it...

I actually got rid of the rating 18+ becuase I believe my writing is better than the need for explicit sex scenes. 😆 There will be HOT moments but never direct explicit sex scenes.

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Great update! Love how everything is progressing between them!!

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Awww ... They r so cute together... Khushi is too sweet... The scene with the child crossing the road was very nicely written :)

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

loved arnav dominating nature .. Loved it yar

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

This is getting amazing by each chapter!
XD

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Awsommm well cmz lyk nani is all set 2 get khushi nk hooked up whras nanu not...arnav wud shoot nk if he getz nani's plan...arshi lil walk was cute...letz c whtz nxt update sooon!!!

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