Th#5 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted TH#6 PG. 143 (26/09)

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Z, it was just perfect ...loved the flashback. But I love them all, they are so integral to the story, love the way they come in bits and pieces binding the story so beautifully...the past with the present...paving the way for the future...the way you blend and integrate them is perfect...

Love how Ratna looks at Khushi, she is the daughter of her heart and she cannot think of any better way than to get her to become one in reality then to ask for her hand in marriage...with Aranv...

I loved how she sees Khushi and notices the beautiful girl/woman she will grow up to be...it's like her heart is full of love and pride. I also felt bad that she nor Garima are alive to see the present...and the future...

Ratna was right, Arnav will fall in love with Khushi, a mother's instinct and her own personal experience was enough for her to be so confident...I loved Garima's concern about the proposal, especially given how they fight right now is justified but I love Ratna, they way she reassures her and tells her that she if when they grow up and are not in love and want to marry someone else then this rishta is null and void, but till then Khushi is theirs...( so how can she be engaged to Sinha? ! The moment either of them accept their love or are not in love with anyone else and or have no objections to the marriage fixed by the mothers...they are bond by that promise made by Garima...am hoping someone else knows about it too...a flashback...?

Loved how everyone was summoned to the room to talk ...leaving the siblings and of course Payal...loved how mami nudged Madhumati as if to say you better follow the orders too...leaving her with no choice but to comply ...

Loved Arnav's faith in the women...they wanted the same thing as him he was sure...but alas...Madhumati is related by blood so she has the first right...if only they knew the promise or are they waiting for the right moment?

I loved how they both are restless and anguish and shock and his fury and his possessiveness and his jealousy..the numbness he feels when they call the Sinha's that feeling of helplessness ...you did an excellent job of writing...what is there not to love love love about that scene, except that he is yet to respond dammit...uska Kyon farak padtha hai!Loved how she was scared of what he might say ...hoping he would not say something that would break her heart...wishing desperately to hear what she hoped he would...but apprehensive what if she is mistsken...beautiful emotions... Love the way you used this scene from the show here...it left me wanting for more desperately.

Loved how automatically he looks out at midnight habitual to their talks and how she comes in with a first aid kit and takes care of his wound, of course she has feelings for him... the pain in his heart far more painful than the one on his hand...his feeling betrayed his sense of loss..taking him back to his parents loss...it was just heart wrenching ...I wanted to tell them not to worry Z will make it all okay, but I was so lost in the writing that forget it is fiction!

Loved Payal in this ..she stole the show for me...you have portrayed her so brilliantly, the way she teases Akaash who has no clue how to deal with her...making him blush, with her very blatant teasing and flirting ...love how Lavanya walks in and saves him...but not before she notices too...

Loved how Payal plays with her words about being a book wanting to be found so interesting that she could be read with that same degree of passion ha ha ...I could just picture Akassh ...and the song...ha ha ha and loved his response asking her if she would like him to marry her and then throw her out to which I loved her response ...marry yes, throw no...poor Aakaash has no idea how to react and respond to her! But putting away the book to talk to her was a great beginning!

Loved how Payal figures out La and smartly uses Khushi's dark cirlces fo get her away from all this, at least momentarily... Looking forward to more Payal and Akash and also Payal with Lavanya!

And I am glad she is on Khushi's side and is aware of her how vindictive and horrible her mother can be and is ready to ensure that no ones causes trouble for Khushi and is going to her her guardian angle...the fairy Godmother saving her from her own mother if need be, knowing that her mother and how her mind works. Love how sensing trouble and some convoluted scheme she quit her job and is here to save Khushi...I can see her playing a major part in this story going forward...adding to the fun and excitement ...so I say...let the games begin...

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rupamudra

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Posted: 11 years ago

congrts on new thread

awesome update

i really think that was arnav voice

ratna and garima talk fixed their marriage in childhood

Dadi announced Khushi's marriage with Sinha's boy ohh! no

i hate buaji,Wonder whats cooking in her mind

loved conversation between akash & payal

" Faraq padtha hai" Cliff hanger! Not fair!!!

loved the update

egerly waiting for the update

continue soon

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations!

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Everyone is waiting to see

What will Arnav's answer be

Khushi too is waiting anxiously

Will he his love admit finally?

Or let her Sinha's wife be?

His anger and his jealousy

Bringing up a past memory

The loss of his parents sadly

Attraction they feel mutually..

And love too hopefully

Her concern for his injury,

Hurting her more than he ..

What is Buaji planning slyly ?

Payal to the rescue thankfully

Her mother she knows clearly

And vows to protect Khushi

Teasing Akash is keeping her busy

Leaving him embarrassed naturally

A flashback reveals another story

Written by the mother's lovingly

To tie their children in matrimony

And bind them till eternity

But who will reveal this treaty ...

To the disheartened family

What role will play destiny ?

We are all in waiting patiently

An update we want quickly

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

Twiggy!

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Ohh, the farq padta hai scene! Bravo, Zee...you managed to invoke the same despair and angst through your words as that scene in the show did. And the fact Arnav hasn't been a total douchebag in this story makes it even more pronounced, because we can't even say "serves him right!".

Aaah, after MD this is the PaYash I have come to really like. Mazedaar, chatpate 😃 Look forward to more.

Madhumati is evil, I knew it! Methinks PaYash will ensure she isn't successful in her plans ?

Waiting (desperately!) for Arnav to complete his sentence... Farq padta hai kyunki ??? 😲

PS - Congrats on the new thread!

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats on new thread...such an emotional update...
I am feeling so restless after reading the chapter...why every good thing has to end...I feel like forcing buaji to go away and break that so called engagement of her...I know u will make everything all right at the end,but the impatient soul i am failing miserably to stop myself from thinking...
So their mothers already talked about marriage...believing Ratna,the Raizada she is,its so natural for her...if only Arnav-Khushi knew that...
I am hating buaji...why is she like this...whats going on in his big fat head...
Payal is an interesting character I have to say...she cares for Khushi...she even left her job only to b here...but her way of handling things is very different...I loved her interaction with Akash & Lavanya...
the Raizadas have nothing to do here actually when Khushi herself agreed to the marriage...
but why cant Khushi say that she is not happy with that relationship...Arnav wasnt in her life when she agreed...but now things her different...
the helpless situation Arnav is in now,I feeling too too bad for him...it hurts to see him suffering...
Khushi still came to nurse his wound...she cares too much not to do this...who called her at this hour of night...hope its not that Sinha boy...
then the faraq padhta hai scene...I love this scene...the pain in both of their eyes hurts me every time I watch this scene...and now after reading this chapter,and knowing Arnav & Khushi well its really heart-aching to imagine...
So is it an almost confession...wont he complete...i wish he does...waiting for more...

PS: I thought the first line was said by Arnav...but no...its Dadi...
PSS: I scrapped u what me & Chetna were talking about...😳

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Tonight...tonight everthing's gonna me alright! :P

Though won't be reading this one :(

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Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats for the new thread 😊

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

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a New Thread!

Congrats di!

Now the update:
after each update, you know its like soo close and never so far!
Wo adhuri si chaaah baaki hai!

Few things first:
if Madhumati wasn't aware of garima and Shashi's death for 6 months, then her knowing about Khushi's engagement sounds very confusing.. Unless she had a hand in it Somehow!

Because, Garima clearly made a promise to Ratna , which i'm sure she would have fulfilled.. Because Ratna has been an equal mother to Khushi too.. And her predictions were true.. Clearly both of them have got feelings too strong for each other!

Subhadhra knew of this promise..! And yet she's here ordering for the preparations for her marriage, cuz being a blood relative Madhumati has more right over her..! Like seriously? That women wudn't even be bothered if Khushi dies, if not for her some evil plans..

Payal is a breath of Fresh air, sweeping a very unaware Aakash off his feet, saying all the filmy lines and What not! She really is a pataka, totally unexpected and effective!

Arnav.. Meri jaan. Di seriously let Khushi marry that Sinha guy and i'm here for Arnav.. :p*No Kidding*

he's hurt, confused, dazed and angry, frustrated, in Love and in Pain!
The happenings till now have been over whelming, too sudden.. Its difficult to get a grip over situation easily!

Khushi has some serious questions to answer.. But in hearts of hearts.. She's hoping.. Hoping for him to say what he feels..

In last line, Arnav stammered.. Bas, whenevr ARnav Singh Raizada has been at loss of words, his facade has come up.. Effectively blocking his feelings.. Kya ab bhi yahi hoga..?

For once, i wish.. I had wished..
For once, i wish.. I had kissed..
For once, i wish.. I knew..
For once, i wish.. For just me and you..
For once, i wish.. Its all a lie..
For once, i wish.. You'd be my! :)

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