Arhi FF 'A tale of two hearts' Imp Note (22) 29th March - Page 9

Hope all is well and you are able to update soon.

Its really beautifully penned
as for d characters i would say u do justice do ur each char. Protraying theiremotion... like d way u portray deir caharacterisation their both negatibe n positive sides as nobodt z purely white.. turn of event was really unexpected but d matter z more worse wat its meetd eye liked d way khushi qs. Him regarding deir relation's dimension its flow
n no doubt her qs. Gave arnav his insigt abt his bride in a new light of her persona n may be his answer would hv satisfied her for d tym being...as for his family he z distanced from them nother mother n adi comparision really kills a person's self confidence but arnav didn't get affected n determinedto prove him...i hope after knowing d whole fiasco d family would see d person who acted knight on shining armour
thx do notify me wn u update it

Beautifully written Vanhii...

Thanks for the chapter,it was very nice

What is the mystery with PayAl hubby Akash... Is he the one threatening Aditya

brilliant update..

Thanks for the recent update. I am eager to know what made Aditiya go back on his word. Payal does not an understanding spouse.