Arhi FF 'A tale of two hearts' Imp Note (22) 29th March

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Amrita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Vahnii...

Just came across the new work... I am sooo happy to read it... Stalking Sand castle thread, I really didn't thought of you giving another surprise...😊

Prologue...

I loved the interview... So well written... I just want to grab a copy of the book and read it... Soo much tempting... After studying for masters and B.Ed, I nearly got time for other books, other than Physics and Science... So, now when ever I get to know about a new book, I just try to get it and read it... like wise, just when you wrote about this book, I soo wosh I could have got to read it..😃

COming to updates... yeah, I am soo in love with your writing... and its really unique..😊... Good that you had posted only 2 chapters.. I am not in a satte to catch up long chapters... So, will be religiously following this work along with sand castle..😊...And is it ok I fI commnet in IF... I really don't like commenting in Blogs... 😔

Again, I got distracted form my comments...

So, AGAIN coming back to the comments... Loved the interview conducted by Mr Joshi and wow, Khuhsi won the Booker Prize... and the credit goes to her husband.. Loved how she said about him getting annoyed with all these attentions given to her... typical Arnav..😉... how hes missing family dinners...and all.. and how he criticizes ...

all these small points which you mentioned is enough to know about the characters... and the last part when the interview is over..how the little angel along with her father and brother came to Khuhsiii.. I was all aww-y at that thought...

Ok.. I know its becoming too long.. Im going to stop...

Let me read the next 2 chapters...😊

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Chap 1

Loved the conversation of NK and Arnav... and seems like this trip was really a turning point in his life...

Loved how arnav came to khuhis for her help and the way he was staring at her.. that was a cute scene..

The journey together to Mumbai... Bad that its her wedding and that too after 2 hours when she will land, came as a shock ... I really think she is ver ambitious and wanted to have a future in her career...but, her marriage is not allowing it to be like that..

Loved the update... Now, running to read the next chap

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Chap 2

So, now its almost clear that the groom is adithya and Bride is Khuhsii...and Arnav is here to help him out... But, now, hes going to marry her...without even knowing that khuhsi is the same girl whom he got attracted to...

Loved how Khuhsi was studying Arnav and how she got shocked to know he was a professor..lol.

Would love to read more... Please do update sooon...

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Vanhi

@vanhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Chapter three posted in the blog...

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Uzii

@Uzii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Very nice update,that is how our society works for girls we say tht we are very liberal n so n so but end of the day we demand this frm our girls to sacrifice themselves.well written but here the other groom is Arnav so I'm happy.

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Wow what a story I just love to read ur writings
Its so true
Indian girls has to sacrifice somewhere or the other

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SaRunHolicc

@SaRunHolicc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

finally read both chaps. Loving the way journey started ❤️

Edited by SaRunHolicc - 11 years ago

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Hey Vahniii

The Perfect Title for chap 3... Caged Angel... She is truly an angel...and now shes caged... But, I really hope she will be free form this cage once she gets married to arnav...

I cant wait to see both Arnav and Khuhsis reaction when they will come to face each other... Ahhh... I am dying to read it...

When will you update next? Am I becoming tooo much desperate.. What to do? Cant help it!

Update sooon... 😊

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Wow awesome
Can't wait to read further
Khushi is really a caged angel
Loved the update
Thanks for pm and updating

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Chapter three caged angel...

tells how Khushi is caged under the conservative who not looks beyond society, And as Khushi says Aditya is really a coward but I'm happy that Khushi will marry Arnav.

What will be their reaction when they will see each other and I'm dying to read that? Will Arnav come to talk to Khushi before marriage?I hope so, I don't want Khushi to MU him.

di it is really difficult for me to know when your story is getting updated...can you give me solution about how I'll get to know when your story will be update so that I can read it without missing any part.

and how to comment on your blog Di, I tried to do but it say you have to invite me...my mail id is vijispari@gmail.com...

Edited by vs_2706 - 11 years ago