Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Five - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome update...i loved how this time instead of being offensive khushi understood what arnav santed her to understand... i am so waiting for the next update...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
great update dear
liked it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Cute and HOT upd ! Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
U r an awesome writer Smita & human being too.A writer who very well know how to describe anyones feelings & a human being who cares for others feelings as well as wish too.Really jo hum sochate hai or jo humare mann men hota hai wahi sab humare hoton pe ya writting men hota hai.Aur manushya apne wicharon se pata chalta hai ki wo kaisa hai.& I must say u have nice thoughts even though u narrated them through Arhi fictions still they were ur own thoughts & I appreciate them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
it was gorgeous update exist of shy bride and welcome to fiery bride but a welcome and evolving change for them!! Ia m pleasantly surprised with Arnav welcome understanding nature and how well he makes Khushi understands and Khushi totally supporting him!! trying to understand and being patient in understanding the changes their relationship is going through... they are are gorgeous as couple love it how you maintain their fiction character while slowly bring a transformational change in them keep their characters strong that is very unique quality you have as a writer! love it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Superb update , slowly dey r creating
An even deeper bond between them.
As a couple they have grown much stronger
During this trip. u have done an incredible
Job moulding and shaping them , it is really
Wonderful to read . thanks for the translation
Pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awww dis is such a lovely chappy 👍🏼

i loved it how khushi was drooling over arnav clad in kurta nd pajama nd he also did not complain wearing it..!

His change is quite noticeable ndi loved it how he set up d blanket on d terrace in case they fall asleep nd needed it..!

Nd finally they tried new position but it turned out to b unsuccessful nd i loved it how khushi got angry nd finally blurt out her heart's content nd wen arnav was keeping safe distance btween them while seeping her asking him to cum to her nd to take her in his embrace was beautiful..!

She cannot sleep alone witout him wrapping his hands around his waist for one night also nd she quitely admitted it to him nd finally they sleep in each other's arms..!

Arnav saying SORRY for their xperimenting of new position nd then khushi saying him dat watever happens happens dor good nd kissing him on his forehead n den falling asleep was cute..!

Nd finally arnav thanking her nd saying dat he is also changing for her nd it shows dat he is slowly becuming a good hubby was also beautiful ❤️

lovely update smita 👏

loved it to bits ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
finally ... khushi speaks her mind.
both of them are evolving in this relationship. but i want passion to seep in too now
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
beautiful update...Love this couple...
waiting for the next part..
thank you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Lovely update
Thanks for the pm

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