Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Amazing start!!

Thank God! Khushi is acting more sensibly here instead in the show..she went and got arnva sign those papers...

Very nice take on the story smitar!

Waiting for the next:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so excited finally new story ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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So smitu di is back wit a bang 👍🏼

goshhh i was counting days actually like wen i will get d msg from rash di nd here it is nd i was like Errrkkksss party tym coz another fantastic story to read on a row 🥳

now cuming to d update -

wow its simply awsum..!

Khushi's thoughts abt d file nd her helplessness for not able to read english is killing her..!

She is regreting terribly remebering her schl days where she never had paid any attention to english classes..!

Den her thoughts abt shyamu being an evil nd can never do anythng good was awsum,actually its more real..!

Den her decision abt telling evrythng to arnav as to her his safety is much more important dan her being proved innocent in front of him..!

Nd wit dat she decided to hand over d file to arnav leaving d entir decision on him whether he will believe him or not..!

Arnav's thoughts abt khushi,woowww awsum nd finally he is thnking of d difference in khushi's behaviour aftr he has said him d reason of him marrying her..!

Nd den thnking of their past nd her reactions to his touch,her anger nd her fightins gpirit,everythng flashed in his mind nd yet again he asked himslf whether its d same khushi whom is actually d mistress of shyam manohar jha but yet again dat terace scene flashed in front of his eyes nd again his brain won over his heart making his fist clenched nd anger ruling him..!

Lovely update 👍🏼

ahhh i cant wait to read d nxt part now 😳

its gonna b damn interesting nd me sure abt it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ...good pick ...i must say k agar barun chala bhi gaya tha shoot k lie ..dis track could be made much better ...but what has been done is done ...lets see how u unfold it ...but one thing is for sure..u will be awesum
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
woah..another great one in the making surely! wonderful start
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Updated my comment on page 1 😃

Thanks for the email Rashmi! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept looking forward to it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lo hum aa gaye hain yahaaannn 😃🤗

12 tareekh ka wait kar kar ke 12 hi baj gaye mere to 😆

Loved the start.. and from the title it luks like Arnav will act Wise in this one unlike the show 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitar



Acha hua main chali gayi. Pata to chala mujhe kitna miss kiya jata he!😉

Smita

Oho di Aapke bina to din ki shuruaat hi nahi hoti,aisa lagta hai jaise something is missing.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ha ye aaya Shyam tabhi mein sochu aapki story me ab tak Shyam kun nahi aaya? Really miss him.Aa han galat mat sochana kyun ki har story majedar banane ke liye ek villain ki jarurat hoti hai,haan ye baat alag hai aapki stories bina villain ke bhi majedar hoti hai 😉.Wo kya hai villain nahi hoga to hero heroin ko bachane kaise aayega?😆.Just kidding here to hamare heroin ko hero se bachane ki jarurat hai,ha ab kya kare hamara hero hai hi aisa zara hatke😉😉.

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