ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn -Thread 6 - COMPLETED

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

awesome update...😊
loved their little romance in rain...arnav admiring her..
scene at the door was too good... how he teased her..😊
now he came to know she cooked chicken.. loved their conversation..
arnav's past.. and thaat line by payal really brought tears in my eyes..!!!!
he deserves happiness now and glad that khushi is came into their life...!!!!!!
they r coming closer to each other... he will open to her soon...!!!!!!
waiting for next..!!!!
now what game akash is going to play..!!!!! eager to know..!!!!

Edited by khareshelley - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Haayyee...rain sequence...marne ka iradha hai kya Di...

Khushi is dancing in the rain...Arnav is mesmerized by her...And I am almost dead...

that "drought in your brain" wala dialogue was just awesome...

loved it how the angry Arnav Singh Raizada is replaced by awestruck gentle Arnav in a moment by her mere sight...

pata nahi kyun,par mujhe sirf ek line yaad aarahi hai..."Jis din se tum mere jindagi mein aaye,main sab bhoolne lag gayi.tumahare saath jo moments bitaayi woh yaad rehne laag gayi"...Aaj ki baad whenever it rains I dont think Arnav will remember only his lost family,but also this moment with his Khushi...

"frog stunts"...really Raizada!!!!!Just now u were drooling over this frog...

Arnav picked her up & she wrapped her arms around his neck...haye haye...

So Khushi is disappointed that he is not romancing...naughty girl...

But poor girl just cant resist...Lips...Feet...ab Chest...control darling,control...

par yeh Raizada bhi kuch kam nahi hai...
eyes...nose...tongue...lips...*coughing discretely*

Then their stepping forward-backward..."Tum hamesha pichhe kyun jaate ho...kyun ki aap hamesha a-aage a-aate hai"...

Arnav saachme Besharam hai...OMG...And he loved his new name...maha besharam hai...

Then comes Akash & Payal...Do I need to tell u again how much I love them...

Akash is so much fun...Only he can tease Arnav to this extent...and "I will be bankrupt by end of my wedding"...LOL...I've heard this line few days back...

Then comes the not-so-wanted-but-still-waited chicken fight...saach baat bataoon...seeing their beautiful patch up I almost forget if they've even fought...
anything that belongs to you belongs to me as well, including YOU YOURSELF.

nothing is going wasted if you prepare

Everytime I feel overwhelmed with your stupid 2 cent concerned dialogues, you are going to get these. She pecked his jawbone on both sides reaching it with full intensity.

And this is to compensate your desperateness to hold me right now.

You have every right to make it your, I mean OUR home the way you want it.

You belong to me the day you belong to yourself.

We will deal with it, just like the way you said. Just help me help you.

If their fight leads to these...toh phir they are allowed to fight everyday...

when the couples were sitting and talking how she made him wrap his arm around her shoulder...how he tried to made her comfortable...awesome...

and then comes his eating chicken...Oh God Di...just remembering the past again brought tears in my eyes...when I am glad he had Akash & Payal for him...also Khushi...unknowingly may that be...but just thinking how he struggled...how he suffered make me real sad...no one can deserve the success he achieved more than him...this is really emotional Di...

And as always...Akash is there to easer the situation...

Q/A game for couples...WOW...I am all excited...

waiting for next part...thanks for the pm...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Oh my that was such a roller coaster of an update.

Just when it was romantic it became emotional, just when it was heart warming it became jovial.

An array of emotions displayed so beautifully in just one update...

Loved it... Now can't wait for the maha update.

Edited by koisk - 11 years ago

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

kya bolu main!!!...

amazing update di!!!...👏

to start wid rain scene!...awww...😳

loved dem!!...

thn d chicken issue!!...

n d kisses!!...its lyk a dream!!...

i wonder whn der wl an actual kiss!!...mera kya hoga!!...😳😉😳

i was actually imagining d scene in my head of arnav wrapping his arm around khushi's shoulder!!...aww...😳

aah finally he saw d feet mehdi!!...😉

n my fav part was when payal told d story behind d chicken!!!...

arnav's past days!!...😭

i was litrally crying n though reading again n again tht part!!...dnt knw why!!...😭😭

d line ' fatty, tere ghar pe kuch khane ko hai kya!!'...omg!!...my arnie!!...😭😭

beautifully written!!...

ohh i m so excited for akash's game now!!...😉

cant wait for nxt part...

thnx for d pm...

Edited by nirmal1992 - 11 years ago

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

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love the update..
and the eaun sequence was awesome..
loved reading it..
I was really worried the chicken thing..
but they had a big fight..
and the kiss session was way too cute ;)
the most emotional part was wen Payal told the story behind chicken..
and arnav cried like a kid n hugged khushi as if his life depends on her

Edited by tushi0310 - 11 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

only today i thought no update from deepthiya

but worth the wait.

they are coming closer every moment - as the past is unraveled, arnav's demons would go away

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Fabulous update...
Both are romantically teasing each other... 😳
they are coming closer with every passing moment. 😊
Arnav's struggl in past was heart wrenching..😭
Already excited for the game.. 😉
Continue soon

Edited by shubhi15 - 11 years ago