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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

What a heartstopping breathtaking update. WOW!!!

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Awesome...

This date is may be a change in their relation... A change in his feelings towards her...

But every thing apart i love the way Arnav was totally mesmerized by her as nothing else matter to him other than her...

And he kissed her... Not due to any obligation but because of his heart...

Loved it...

Update soon...

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

For a moment there I thought she would wear the off white saree...but then it had to be the red one isn't it :-))

Loved the chapter.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Khushi avoided Arnav like the plague and i don't blame her because he rubbed salt on her wounds, made her feel worthless in a sense again

Arnav started feeling her lack of presence, or well he felt her presence yet never saw her for like a month until he planned and tricked her

then he asked her out on a date and got super angry when she was trying to get out of it but as she can't see him upset or angry, especially at her and because of her she agreed instantly

the date, the saree seems to be bewitching Arnav as Khushi is all he can see and he cannot think of anything else

and a kiss, which he fully started but it ends there which means does the kiss fully happen or an interruption or a pull back

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Wow you updated.
Arnav was always had a connection with Khushi not that he will agree to it as he was in denial but now I am not so sure..he has acted on the attraction..might go into denial later or angry, with him you never know how he will react but will definitely confuse poor Khushi in a bargain.

Awesome update.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the Update.

Just wanted to let you know that I am travelling from mid Oct to mid Nov so won't be able to comment in that period, but will catch up once I am back.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Amazing and awesome update, absolutely loved it.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well.

Wow Arnav was totally mesmerised by Khushi's beauty when he saw her dressed for the date,

So Arnav is definitely getting affected by Khushi and realised that there is strong attraction there.

Love the fact they had a nice time at the date, the last part was awesome and a beautiful moment.

However I don't think Khushi will let him kiss her as she thinks that Arnav does not like her.

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

update was really beautiful.

khushi should back off from the kiss otherwise he will tell that she trapped him like as usual😭

without confessing his feeling how can he kiss her😕

hope nothing bad will happen😲

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

oops arnav.. hope u dont end hurting her again by tryin to make her feel good...

wow khushi u wanted to be simple and chose a red saree;... uh oh..:-))

nice update

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

hi dear

first of all i should thank shruthi for making a post with her list of favorite writers...and yours was the first one...

after reading all the 17 chaps of this story (Trapped) i now know why she had put your name as the first one...u did not disappoint me...

awesome story...the feelings & emotions of arshi is well written...Excellent writing and the story is becoming more and more interesting...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

:'')

It was such a nice update...bas abb mystery toh pata chale ki what's happening...what if Arnav again pushes her away after this? Khushi will be heartbroken :'(