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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kanug
awesome
superb
amazng

Thanks so much deedu 🤗

~*Mrs.RanbirKapoor*~

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: I-LUV-MYSELF
hey alien luv ur story cont soon🤣

Thanks Chudail 🤣

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey
Arpita... seriously muaahhh!!!🤗
Vry rarely get to read something lyk dis!!!!
N pls pls pls cont dis n pm me!!!
Well i know its really gonna be a sad stry... bt sometyms just luv to read dem!!
Prolouge se seems lyk taani is gonna suicide...quiet obvious!!!
N im really in love wid d line.."i dont take life for granted bt my life does."❤️
Even dis..." ur lyf id beautiful until it betrays u"
Just in luv wid it ...or i better say... fida hogai mai tumpar n iss sad stry par!![❤️
Pls continue it n update fast!!😃

I have intelligent readers 😲 😆

Thanks so much Shikha di...

Sure will PM you..

~*Mrs.RanbirKapoor*~

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: cuppypie121
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Appy u wrote this??? 😲
I'm really excited to read this ss
Prologue was just mindblowing
Continue soon

Yes..Lol

Thanks..

Sure..

~*Mrs.RanbirKapoor*~

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

damn interesting ... waiting eagerly ... [/QUOTE

Thanks ..

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: tareyfan
wow dear d concept is jst amazing...luvd it..n did u update d first part ?? coz ur inddex does'nt say so 😛 anyways if it is posted will catch up with it soon...n if it is'nt updated plss updte it soon...really eager to read more of it...

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no..No first part 😆

Sure..

~*Mrs.RanbirKapoor*~

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Dreaming...
Update plzzz!!😈

In some time 😛

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Arpita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Chapter...1

"The happiest day of my life..." She said while taking a turn and feeling the rain..Playing with the raindrops and unaware of this cruel world , she was going wherever she wanted to..

"hmmm...zaraa sa jhoom loon main..." she mumbled while dipping her feet in the collected rain water on the roads.

"Are naa re naa re naa..." She said , smiling , in a man-ish tone remembering him.

~*~

It was night , the moon was hiding somewhere behind the clouds making the night more dark. Rain was in its speed. Thundering clouds were making the their noise very rarely.

The roads were empty , just one-two cars of the office going uncles and aunties . Everyone was in their houses enjoying the rainy season may-be by eating pakoras and adrak waali chai . But here , this girl was in her own world , enjoying like a kid , juming form here to there , there to here . Splashing water on herself , sometimes going to her dreamy world remembering him and smiling wide , she was loving this . Who can say that this was the same girl who always used to be sad and an introvert ?

"Hayee ye baarish.." she said while twirling around ..

~*~

"mmm..mmm...mmm.." she tried to speak , but only these few cries were audible , she was asking for help.. He tightened his hand on her mouth making it more difficult to speak , also he tightened his other hand on her neck , holding her from back . She was in immense pain. She closed her eyes , tightening them , showing her pain.. She tried to make herself free with hitting him with her hands , but in return her hands got tied with the help of a rope by the another man .

~*~

They took her to the car , and threw her inside the car on the back seat , making her head hit the car's door . They switched on the engine of the car and started driving .. The man covered her mouth with a white cloth making it impossible for her to speak now.

~*~

After the long , painful drive for an hour , they both came out of the car , opened the door of the back seat and pulled her through her pony-tailed hair . It was difficult for her to even stand now ..

"Chup chaap chal , jahaan main keh raha hun.." he barked in his dark tone making her fear , more ..

She followed him , her hands were bleeding because of the tight rope tied . Her head was paining ..She was indeed in fear and nervousness.

~*~

*Trin..Trin..Trin...*

Her phone ringed making her shocked. He looked at her like a wild tiger , he picked out the phone from her bag , pulled out the white cloth tied to her mouth with a force , she barked in pain. "aaa"

He covered the speakers of the phone and ordered her , "main theek hun.." he said , and ordered her to say the same on the phone..

She was not in a situation to react.. She was paralysed .

"maa...main theek hun...bas ghar pahunch rahi hu..." She said while closing her eyes , making tears come out with force.

As soon as she said this , he disconnected the call , and force fully , dragged her to a room.

~*~

It was a scary room , nothing only few card - board cartons lying here and there

He pushed her , making her fall on the floor and went closing the door tight .

It was all dark now . No light . She was damn scared now .

Tears were hanging on her cheeks , she was too shocked to accept what happened suddenly .

~*~

"maa ..main theek hun..." words came out of her mouth unintentionally , while she closed her eyes .

She closed her eyes , accepting that , She is in danger .