will u accept my friendship

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi friends i m writing my first story bcoz by reading all d stories i want to write a story .when i watch a movie mujse dosti karo gi ,i have a thought that i want to write it on arshi .

pls srry if there is any mistake

characters

arnav singh raizada:
a young man who currently lives in london and complted his studies and return to their parents and also for his love.
khushi kumari gupta:
fun loving girl always spread happines around her.
she is the only one daughter of shashi and garima gupta
lavnya khasyap:
modern girl,rich attitude and best friend of khushi

chapter 1:

early morining after doing his exercise and doing his daily routines and went to his AR designs.
when he entered into the office all becomes silent and doing their work
then he open his laptop and read his read and he smile bcoz it was from his love
he doesnt know his name and all they bcome friends by mails
later their friends bcome love and they didnot express to each other.
one day he received a phone from his parents to ask him to come to india
then he said i will come as soon as possible by finishing d work in office
they were happy because they their son long years ago. and they talk for a while and disconnect d phone
then he sent mail to her by informing his arrival to india and he want to meet her.



pls kindly ignore d mistakes and tel me how was d story either to continue or not pls comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
see there you go
bravo, love the start:)
and it is really awesome start
do continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow you managed to post it!!

Great going!!!

Start is interesting!

Update soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 2

By seeing d mail from arnav and she feel restless to meet him.
after one week he planned to return to india for to book the tickets he ordered aman to book the ticket to india by next filght.
then he packed all his things and enter into boarding section and he enter into the flight and taking his seat and thinking about the things happen in all these years and small smile appear in his face.
IN RM

all his family were ready for making the welcoming arrangements for his son.
at the same time khushi,lavanya were also arrived with their families to meet arnav.

hey i dint tel u that all these three are friends and family friends

then arnav parents,his sister,his jijaji,akash,khushi,lavanya were went to recieve arnav from airport

then flight is arrived and arnav came out to meet his family from private exit section bcoz all media were present at the outside to take his interview and asr didnt like this type and directly went to meet his family
after meeting his parents he directly came to lavanya and ignore khushi and he think that for all these years he recived mails should be coming from lavanya bcoz she is beautiful and he think that khushi has not dare to mail him because she is shy type of character
by seeing this khushi get dissappoint that her arnav did not recognise her and felt bad and she didnot show it and it was covered by smiling to him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo!!! :D
great u started writing stories!! :D
acha now story!!
its damn!! awsm!!
and mujhse dosti karogi is one of my fav movie so looking forward!! :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey buddy
awesome start
congrats
love the concept
try to cont. asap
n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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similar to Mujhse Dosti Karogey
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey that was great...
continue writing... and congrats...
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
I like the plot and everything but you have got to work on the grammar,typos and length of the chapters anyways it's a great start and I am looking forward to read more of this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful start
hope Arnav finds out it is Khushi



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