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Thank you, Coolbakes for updating, I must admit I thought you had given up on the story and had almost given up waiting for the updates, so it was a pleasant surprise to see 2 updates at the same time.
I understand your desire for lots and lots of comments, and as a writer you don't feel like updating till you see lots of comments, but i hope you keep in mind that there are readers like myself, who will stay with the writer till the story ends, I read a select few stories and once i choose to read a story, I stay with it, so i also like it if i am rewarded with regular updates. I may not comment on every update, but i read every update and when i comment i will always make a proper comment.
Now about the updates, though I felt bad for Arnav, I was glad that buaji decided to uphold Khushi's dignity by not letting him pay for her treatment.
I am glad you have given NK and Akash an important role in this story. Hope they succeed in getting the snake to confess to his crime.
As for Arnav, I am glad he has not been told the truth, let us see what will win now - his unjustified anger or his unacknowledged love? The only way he can redeem himself is firstly by acknowledging how hurtful and wrong he has in the way he has treated her, then i hope he makes the effort to find out the truth and then apologize to her and her family.
And i hope Khushi recovers from her horrendous injuries and gets the happiness she deserves.
I hope you will complete this story.
I understand your desire for lots and lots of comments, and as a writer you don't feel like updating till you see lots of comments, but i hope you keep in mind that there are readers like myself, who will stay with the writer till the story ends, I read a select few stories and once i choose to read a story, I stay with it, so i also like it if i am rewarded with regular updates. I may not comment on every update, but i read every update and when i comment i will always make a proper comment.
Now about the updates, though I felt bad for Arnav, I was glad that buaji decided to uphold Khushi's dignity by not letting him pay for her treatment.
I am glad you have given NK and Akash an important role in this story. Hope they succeed in getting the snake to confess to his crime.
As for Arnav, I am glad he has not been told the truth, let us see what will win now - his unjustified anger or his unacknowledged love? The only way he can redeem himself is firstly by acknowledging how hurtful and wrong he has in the way he has treated her, then i hope he makes the effort to find out the truth and then apologize to her and her family.
And i hope Khushi recovers from her horrendous injuries and gets the happiness she deserves.
I hope you will complete this story.
Jhanak
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