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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 11 years ago

i always wanted the khushi suicide scenario to take a sharp turn in the show rather than it to have ended in the way it did!! just my thought about what if not in the kidnapping route!!

hope you will all read and support and above all like it!!

i am extremely happy with the love and support i have got with my FF HIS LITTLE PRIDE!! a story between arshi and their daughter!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3599942/his-little-pride-arshi-daug-pt17-139-new-20-1-new

i hope it continues with this FF as well!! i am posting the prologue down!! till 10 updates are ready so i guess this time it will be regular!!

those who need pms plz drop your comments and buddy me!!

silent readers your most welcome as well though i hope to be given a sign by atleast hitting the like button!!

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS TOTALLY MY CREATION!! ANY RESEMBLANCE TO OTHER STORIES IS NOT INTENTIONAL! i hope it does not happen though😆 charecters belong to 4 lions while story line is mine!! purely for entertainment purpose!!

i have tried my best to edit and add pictures to make it better!! plz tolerate!!

PS: i saw most of my works in FB!! come

on yar atleast give me a credit for sitting and typing hours!!

OFF to the PROLOGUE!!

Prologue!!

"I cannot fix on the hour, or the spot, or the look or the words, which laid the foundation. It is too long ago. I was in the middle before I knew that I had begun."

Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice

arnav: its because you lack a character KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA!!!!! DID YOU GET IT!!!!

arnav walked out throwing out the angry glares of disgust and words straight on her face...

KHushi slowly let the words sink down her and finally sank to the floor...

arnav's words din hit just khushi but also two other pairs of eyes who had rushed up behind him to check on her

arnav stood rooted seeing her in the stairs her eyes all teared up and wide with shock

he swallowed the lump in his throat finally: BUAJI... NK

buaji stared at arnav and just when she was to reply they heard the sound of a huge THUD and people screaming below

as horror struck through arnav he ran down the stairs to find khushi in a pool of blood with people swooning around her...

buaji: khusssiii

happy ji quickly called for the ambulance

nk was shocked and checked her pulses and let out a sigh to see she was alive... arnav felt the earth beneath him slipping away every minute as he held on to her patting her cheeks as buaji through her tears were throwing angry glares at him...

the ambulance arrived and nk helped khushi into a stretcher and into the ambulance...

just when arnav was about to get in BUaji held his hand shocking arnav nk and garima...

she made garima get in and closed the door on arnav's face as the ambulance sped by leaving behind a shattered arnav and a shocked NK!!

PART 1 is below this post after the index!! Scroll down!! this is a romantic story for sure but plz bare with me till the base is set!!will try my best to add in enough pics to make it look better!!

Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 10 years ago

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 1 -- SCROLL DOWN!!

Part 2 pg 10 ( 9/10) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=10

PArt 3 and part 4 Pg 18 ( 14/9) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=18

PART 5 AND PART 6 PG 26 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=26

PART 7 page 35 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=35

part 8 page 44 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=44

part 9 page 49 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=49 (8/10)

part 10 page 57 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=57 (11/10)

part 11 page 62 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=62

readers note page 70 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=70

Part 12 page 72 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146?pn=72

part 13 page 79 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146

Part 14 Page 90 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146

part 15 page 95 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3728971/arshi-ss-battling-desires-maha-double-updates-27-12-new-pg-145-146

Part 16 page 102 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=102

part 17 page 106 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=106

Part 18 Page 108 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=108

Part 19 page 109 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=109

part 20 page 111 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=111

Part 21 page 114 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=114

part 23 page 121 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=121

part 24 page 126 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=126

part 25 page 129 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=129

part 26 page 132 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=132

part 27 page 135 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=135

part 28 page 138 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=138

Part 29 page 142 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=142

part 30 page 145 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=145

part 31 page 146 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3728971&TPN=146

Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 10 years ago

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 1 :-)BATTLING DESIRES

"I could easily forgive his pride, if he had not mortified mine."

Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice

The ambulance sped away leaving behind a shocked arnav and nk!!

arnav stood rooted to his place with his eyes all red in rage!!

his words failed to help him and he looked at an NK who had nothing but a shattered and a disgusted look for him...

as tears made way through nk's eyes he walked past arnav and drove away!!

arnav stood staring at the path as tears finally made way... the people who stood surrounding him were hardly noticed by arnav!!! all he could see was the last few scenes flashing before his eyes!!!

fear of may be he was wrong slowly crept into him and made him gasp for breath in the open space...

his head was sweating as he heard a Horn!!

he turned to see Happy ji!!

arnav looked at him when happy ji made him get into a car and drove away to the hospital!!

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Raizada mansion!!

the receiver slipped down nani's hand as her eyes went wide in shock! tears made way and anjali and mami looked at her petrified at what was the news she heard!!

anjali took the receiver to hear nk and she stilled hearing about khushi!!

mamiji had tears flowing down her eyes!! she had never realized she loved khushi so much until this second she was hoping it to be a bad dream!!

payal rushed out of the kitchen and anjali walked near her and cupped her face and told her the news...

payal felt the ground beneath her slip away and she slipped down the floor crying: khushiii

akash ran down the stairs out of his room hearing payal

the next minute they were on their way to the hospital!

shyam was out of station and was yet to be informed!

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khushi was transferred to a stretcher and was being rushed into the Ot... buaji and garima rushed along calling out to her to open her eyes and look at them at least once!! nk had reached by the time too and he felt he would loose his senses to see his friend all quiet in a pool of blood!!

the door closed leaving behind a shattered buaji and garima!!

garima: jiji ! khushiii and she slid down crying!!

nk looked at buaji who herself sat by the chair resting her head against the wall crying out!!!

arnav came rushing with happyji screaming out khushi's name and nk stopped him just in time!!!

nk: nannav!! this is the Ot!! you cant enter!!

arnav screamed back wriggling in NK 's grip: I have to See her DAMMIT!! She cant do this to me!! don you understand!!

buaji turned to look at a shattered and horrified arnav who's eyes was red filled with tears flowing down his face

she got up and with all the anger lashed out at him: why!! what more do you want to do to her??

arnav was shocked to see buaji speak to him... garima stopped crying and gathered herself and held buaji by her shoulder confused as in why she was lashing out at arnav...

garima: jiji...damadji

buaji : haye garima!! don call him our damadjii anymore... its because of him she is lying inside

garima was shocked

arnav: buaji!!

buaji: plz leave from here!! if you really wish us to be good!! plzzz

arnav: i will!! after i see her and he was about to open the door when nk pulled him back

nk: nannav!! whats wrong with you!!

arnav: cant you see!! everything is wrong dammit!! she wants to leave me!! how can she nk!! ask her to come out nk!! come out right now!!! she cant do this to me!

nk was shocked to see arnav behaving this way... so was buaji.. just few mins beack he was lashing out at her with all blames and was now crying his heart out in rage!!

before buaji could speak back nk clasped his hands in front of her: plz buaji!! we will see all this later!!

buaji turned away her face wiping her tears!!

nk pulled arnav and made him sit in the chair nearby

garima rushed out with water to arnav who was totally out of his own control!!

nk: nannav!! nothing will happen!!! listen to me!! calm down!! behave okay!!

payal rushed in hugging garima crying out !!mamiji and nani was comforting a buaji only to find themselves breaking down!!

akash turned to find arnav sitting with his head burried in his hands...

anjali placed her hand on arnav's shoulder : chotey

and he threw himself at her hugging her tight and she could feel his body shivering as he hugged her tighter!!!

tears rolled down her cheeks seeing her chotey like thisbut she was not suprised like the others coz she knew her chotey!! she knew how much he loved Khushi!! more than he himself!!

akash stood shocked see arnav in this state!!

nk pulled akash aside and told him everything!!!

akash couldnt believe!!

akash: nk bhai!! are you sure bhai spoke like this?? that too jijaji and khushijii

nk: yes akash!! but buaji !! something is messy!!after hearing nannav i thought he hated her but ever since we reached the hospital he has lost it!! he's reacting like a man who loves his wife more than anything!! i don understand anything akash bhai!!

Voice: But i do!!

they were shocked and akash and nk turned to see payal staring at them with her eyes filled with tears

so this is it for today friends!! thanks a lot for all the kind words and support!! if you liked this part and want to read the next do hit the thank you button and drop a comment to let me know you liked the story!!

pls bear with my edits!! i am not too good at it!the number of likes and comments will help me decide if i continue this FF!! so plzzz drop your viewsss!!

100 likes and i shall post th e next part straight away!!😳

love always
coolbakes!!

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sandyjerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesum and emotional...😛

luved it...👏 👏

plz pm me ...😳

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was the Fiction, I was looking for... I have always tried to imagine, what will be the situation, How Arnav will react if Khuhsi really jumbed fromt he terrace... Im going to follow this work from now on.. Please do let me know when you update next...

and Thank you writing this piece...and the pics are soo apt...😉

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

emotional update. nice start. waiting to read further

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting Concept yar...

I wanted to see a Guilty Arnav as kushi didnt do any thing...

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations on ur new story.

Awesome concept.

I loved u explored this track. it hd so much potential bt on the show it just disappointed with arnav calling her a characterless girl n then it went bck to khushi being non chalant.

Arnav on numerous occassion being extremely protective of her after the guest house incident nainital trip when khushi ws unreachable after she left rm knwin shyam's truth n most of all when arnav thot she met with an accident arnav ws totally devasted n then ws relieved like he gt his life bck seein her bargaining for channa. how he hd then almost confessed his love.

However his reaction after saving frm khushi lashin out at her n calling her character less. he dint realize spl after knwin khushi closely n her suicide attempt to make way for him n la tht a girl whom he gave no reason to love him or why he forced to marry yet for him she's willingly giving up her life. Why wud she do tht unless she wnted his happiness above her own life. also if she wud sacrifice herself even after being married to him why wud she stand bet anjali n tht snake.

He dint understand how deeply he hurt her n reason for marrying her hd shattered her completely. how cud he nt think tht she might again try tht after he saved her.

Back to the updt. glad buaji n nk knw wht hppnd n why. finally someone knws khushi's woes n will stand by her.

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Annie

@Annie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

u know i cant open ur stories on myed! Even ash's! It says code error! So pissing off!
Anyway this one i've read all the chapters except the last two updates u posted there! :( i guess i have to wait here for u to reach that chap!

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

this was what I was looking forward to. ...I actually
wanted arnav to react in this way. ...by seeing khushi...
this was actually amazing. ..
infact I loved the plot. ..
it actually seems interesting...
wondering what will happen next...
thanks for pm..do pm me for next update. ...
and yes ..well done sweetie

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