Arshi FF: That one mistake: Thread 1 - Chapter 8

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Arshiforeverlv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

That was amazing

I love this story

An amazing writer you are

Continue

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

just started this story..

read prologue..👍🏼

and it's awesome dear..

khushi's pregnant..😲

with the man who saves her life from goons..

and obviously the man is none other than Mr ASR..😉

really interesting..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

Awesome start..

loved the mother daughter convo and bonding...khushi is confuse regarding her feeling for Sanjay.obviously she didn't loves him...very well written..loved it!

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

loved it the way u portrayed arnav and payal bonding..i just hate sanket character..he is disgusting..TG arnav reached on time..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

wow..kya sabaq sikhaya arnav ne..poor khushi..last part of the update made me so emotional..the way khushi hug arnav..and the way he consoles her...loved it

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

omggg..they did IT..their romance was very sizzling..😳😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

i know they r going to regret it..both r right on their grounds..khushi didn't stop him..she also an equal partner..what they did last night...heart broken update.. 🥺

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

omg khushi said "ILY" to Sanjay..is she really loves her..i don't think so..she fells guilty to betrayed him..it's getting really interesting..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#819

oh gosh u scared me..dream scene was hell scary...very well describe emotions of each and every character..khushi's monologue was very much needed..poor souls..both r suffering from their wrong acts..