A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1011

Jenny, you're a wonderful writer! It's always a treat to read your work. I've no idea how I missed this one but glad to have finally caught up with it :') Loved the fic and Branny was a cutie! I fell in love with him. 😳

Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful piece! Take care 🤗 And I can only hope you get time to keep writing here :')

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1012

hi jenny, let me just say
a...thankyou for thee epilogues great writing and b...a completion of a family getting together finally.
I loved the triplets story, a colleague at work had the same story, they already had a little biy and found them selves pregnant again. The first scan was normal, the second found the twin, and hey presto the third found the triplet. He said he didnt want to go for another scan just in case they found another.LOL. also loved the fact that ipkknd was still running in 2020.!

anyway thankyou and it was agreat read... especially as I didnt see barun as arnav 😉 or maybe an older barun ..havnt made up my mind yet, but you arnav is still yummy

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1013

Loooved it Jenny!!
The story, the writing, the characters, everything about ALS is perfect!!!
I especially loved the epilogues. The way you showed the progress of their relationship as their family grew is so fabulous.
Having read ALS now, it only is making me more impatient to know what you have in store for Arnav and Khushi in Saffron Fields.
I am yet to check your other work but I already know that I'm gonna love them!!

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1014

wow.. even this thread that was supposed to be the last is over 150+ pages now.. are you going to open a new one?

I just started reading this FF, and like your other stories, right from the beginning I have a feeling that it's going to be an emotional ride.. There is something in the way you write that I as a reader immediately get emotionally attached to the story and can't wait to read more.. 😊

That's what I am reading your completed works first though. 😊 Will start readinf Saffron fields after reading all the complete ones.. 😉

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1015

It was so beautiful!

I love how you only keep Arnav & Khushi as the characters somewhat same form the show, and then rest of characters, backdrop, times are all different.. 👏

Khushi as usual is forgiving and always trying to make others happy, but I liked it that she was not weak enough to reconcile with her mother... But I'd have loved to read more about her brothers' visit to them, I felt it was very short bit.

And all those nice things about Landour that come in the story from time to time make me wish I could visit it sometime..

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1016

I read ur whole FF- It's extremely beautiful. One by one I have started reading ur creations & truly speaking - they r awesome. Sometimes my link button was not working, so not able to put likes on each & every chapters- but it's beautifully written. So, keep on writing dr.

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Penny

@penny25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1017

Finally!!

Completed the FF!!!

This Ff is wat i call a JOURNEY...!!! A journey dat i've experienced alongside wid dese two sweet souls...two scarred souls...

I fell in love wid both of dem...fell in love wid story..from the word GO...:)

i dont wat exactly was d highpoint of dis Ff..so many scenes i've lovd... I love the setting...i didnt know such a place existd in India..trust me wen i say dis...given a chance i'm already to pack my bags nd go to dis heavenly place..FYI i live in north india..it wont be too far to go to dis place..😉

the charcter Khushi has been beautifully described through the eyes of arnav...a grl so gud...who loves any1 nd evry1..yet starvin for her mother's attention..who happend to be a very bad at dat job..i dont think..i can judge her mom...must be many things wich wud have resultd in her takin such sour decisions...but i hated dat women..wen she told khushi to get back wid dat jerk...at dat point i realised how inefficient a mother she was,...couldnt stnd up for her daughter...how she left her behind...i lovd d way khushi gave her granny d authority of her life...nd d sacrifice she gave for her...i dnt think any1 wud have been dat brave...all of dis...was too hard for...too much injustice...reading it..nd feeling d desperation of the two souls...khushi is much better person..nd mom to her child.. Branny...whose an angel in himself...u cant help but fall in love wid him..his wrds..d way khushi dealt wid him..tried to make d lil one adjust to his modest ways..explaind him in her own wrds..khushi's charcter is so real..her pain dat u can easily feel...d realistic approach wid wich u presentd her character...has lft me wid no words... The way she dealt wid her circumstnces...rised from it...#RESPECT TO GRL POWER#

ARNAV is so sexy...but the sex appeal lies in the way he handled himself..at the various junctures of his life. ..he came out so strong..an inspiration...frst his mom nd dad..den his straind relationship wid his granny...den khushi d only lite taken away from him...dere is so much a person can take...he dealt wid all..in his own way...but never for once..i saw him being selfish..helping every1..being dere in d backround...wen in d prologue he was shown wid some other grl..it left me disturbd...(d prologue had very disturbed moments)...atleast in d way u presentd everythin.. but wen she u showed d circumstances in wich it all happend..RESPECT...it made me love him all d more...

Coming to the story..u gave full justice to the title..A LATE SPRING...i learnt so many things from dis FF...i experienced so many things through dis one journey..dat i've no wrds...finally wen dey were together...it left me in peace...dere is so much dat one can take..seein dere sufferin made me suffer as well...made me realise...how important ppl r...

A BRILLIANT FF WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY BY SUCH AN EXPERIENCED AUTHOR--!!.. DO U WRITE IN REAL LIFE AS WELL??? COZ IF U DONT THEN PPL ARE ACTUALLY MISSING OUT ON SOME REAL STUFF!!!!

Will be moving ahead nd readin u're other story..soon..!srry for d delay in comment..

P.S. # sigh# trust me..board result ane wala hai...!

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hema

@Itsflora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1018

Read the whole story in a go...so wonderful..just make my day...

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LibranAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1019

A Late Spring turned out to be a very late read for me! I don't remember when I had bookmarked this story to read but the name intrigued me.

I have spent the last 4 days absolutely wrapped around this story reading it every chance i got...even with my husband sitting next to me in a rickshaw! 😉 There is something about the magic of Arnav and Khushi that makes you forget the world and just give them all your attention.

Coming to the story...it was so nice to read a story from a Christian point of view, a Christian Arnav and Khushi, the big Church wedding, the white gown, the graveyard, the parties, the dresses...it was all so nice! Being a Christian myself, I think I connected to this story at every level.

The story itself was so captivating and real in so many ways that I couldn't wait to read more. This connection that they share is so real, I could feel their loss, their pain, their joy, their nervousness every step of the way.

I have loved every word of this story and every minute I've spent reading it. All the English and Hindi songs interspersed in the story were so perfect. I loved reading the English songs in between, it made me feel one with the story.

Thank you Jenny for this awesome story and looking forward to reading more of your work. I don't know if you are still active of IF but would sure like to buddy you and keep updated on your stories.

Lots of love...

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abby2181

@abby2181

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1020

Quite simply one of the best pieces that I have ever read. A beautifully crafted love story. You captured the innocence, wonder, purity and timelessness of a 'first love' brilliantly. The subtle manner in which you have described the deep and abiding love that Arnav and Khushi share is what got me hooked to the tale.

The characters were so well defined. Flawed and fallible making them even more endearing.

I have a fondness for children and Branny is adorable. There were times in the story where I wish he could come to life just so that I could hug him.

I love how you brought in nature's elements such as the snow and rain to elevate a scene.

I immensely enjoyed this story. I hope you keeping writing more stories.