A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164 - Page 100

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic epilogues, they surely had a very beautiful journey with fair amount of ups and downs. and four beautiful children I am glad they will make time to spend with each other because this how life is after marriage with kids I know because I have four of my own and my youngest son name is Aiden too. Jenny you are an amazing written and I hope you return back to india forum after you well deserved break.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity to read all your beautiful stories.
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Posted: 11 years ago
See, I am never on time😭😭😭
But anyways, here's to the story -

My journey with ALS had been a great one! I still remember it was my examination time when I found this fic on the forum & the prologue got me hooked to the story. It was great to read about their childhood love...they parted on unhealthy terms but they isn't it said that 'If you really want something, than the whole universe conspires to get you that thing' I think the dialogue goes like this only😳

Arnav came from a place where he with his own eyes had seen the broken relationship of his parents (If my memory is not bad) & so he was the bad guy in the beginning!

Whereas even though khushi too didn't had 'good' memories with her parents, her father to be specific, she still was a warm & affectionate human being. I hate her mother sandra bas!

Their first meet had been really😆 Reading all about their childhood made me feel everything they felt...don't know why...and so throughout I felt connected to the story!

I know our elders always want the best for us & so did khushi's grandmom, but according to me she she did wrong by choosing that-two-timer-drunkard-lusty-bas***d for khushi over arnav & making us, the readers & our ArHi go through so much of pain😭

But then again destiny had other plans! Distance makes heart grow fonder & I guess this applied here. Branny was such a sweetheart! I was glad when khushi gave their love second chance & brought happiness in her life which was full of struggle & pain!

Mr. Foster ke baare mei main kya kahun? he was just a great lover! Who despite of everything, took the initiative to make things better between them & to prove her that together is a beautiful place to be!

Janice was a sweetheart too <3

I loved their heated moments ☺️ & then at the end their marriage was a bliss! I loved dawn & mark too. Without them, this wouldn't be possible!

And then triplets?????????😲 I have heard of rare cases!😆

Now they are fours siblings & branny got to boss them in everything😃
I loved the last epilogue where even though they fought, they made it up to the other which showed that even though fights happen between couples, important is the way you deal with them...you be with the other throughout!

Supperrr sorry for the late Comment!😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
Jen, sorry for the delay, but updated my comments here... Direct Link
Do give it a read if you get a chance... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god jenny...I was so busy with my job that I took forever to read the epilogue and note...
And wat an epilogue..being never in a relationship, I have only experienced romance through the lovely stories like yours...and that have done enough damage,coz now I want a partner exactly like arnav..well,i understand that for that I have to be as perfect as khushi...enough of blabbering.😉...
The way with which u told us love like that never fades with time,i just loved it...and the three cuties,they were sweet too.and oh, Branny has become BRANDON now...and wants to be called so only...well too bad branny...u'll remain BRANNY for us forever,who used to call certain Mr Foster 'annav'..who used to have a friend named twinkle!...
And the note...Note that was a little bit disturbing...just wanna say that we wold never get enough of ur stories and arshi...so plz come back after ur break...we'll wait...afterall there's a doctor-doctor romance waiting for us...
Now that was the biggest post by me on any of ur threads...the reason being,my poor handling of words...I alwys end up feeling that I blabberd...like i'm feeling now.
Come back after the break jenny...we'll wait for u...stay blessed and happy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jammy you left me speechless with your writing 🤗 loved how you ended it can't believe it it's over
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Posted: 11 years ago

Remarkably beautiful story!!

I just found story recently, really loved it a lot!! I enjoyed reading it every bit of it!!

The love that Arnav and Khushi felt for each other was wonderful. The roller coaster rife that they had to got through just to be with one another. The hardship that Khushi had to through in her life, with her mother ,her promise to her grandmother, leaving Arnav, marrying Sean and the abuse she got. The health issue of her branny. But she stayed strong throughout all the time!

Then meeting all over again, how,Arnav changed her life, how he made branny his own, stayed by Khushi throughout the difficulty of branny health problem.

The passion that these two had and they totally understood each other. Loved the epilogues a lot, triplets ohh wow!!

The whole story was just brilliantly written and well portrayed of the feeling!!
I am sad that I wasn't able to enjoy the journey but happy that I came upon a great masterpiece of a wonderful writer!

👏 Hats off you!

Will be reading more of our work for sure and can't wait to read it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Jenny I was not aware that you wrote not one but three epilogues on Late Spring. Will have to catch up on these over the weekend. Arnav Foster from ALS, Sr/Jr Arnav from TIH are amongst few Arnavs from IF-FF that I adored.

Read your note just now. Agree that the change in last names of the lead pair in ALS sounded different in hte beginning but was only for a short while. Based upon TIH and ALS that I read, you handle your characters and their behaviors delicately and try to keep it closer to reality and logic. As a reader I felt there is a certain kind of ambiance I sense which is unique to you.

I understand from your note that you are a new mother and your life must be definitely busy so asking you to be more active writing more stories is not fair. But I will be glad if you choose to continue writing more on ArShi by coming back soon from your break. Despite its being almost an year after the show ended, love on these fictional characters ArShi has not diminished at all for many folks here. Will write after reading Bride with a doll and Intoxicated.
If you decide to come back with a new story on doctors or any other when you return, would you be able to take pain in PMing me of starting a new story? Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Jenny,
So sorry for not writing for sometime, year end is driving me mad.

As all good things should come to an end this story had a lovely ending. It was somewhat different from your normal style , but i loved it -though i'm a sucker for ur historical stories.

I was reading ur note. It is not an easy job to write along with ur other personal commitments. But come what may do not give up this great talent of yours. Even if it's not the IF forum pls promise u will continue with this wonderful gift .U r an amazing writer enhance it more & sky would be ur limit. U might surprise us all by publishing ur own book one day.

Once again a heartfelt thank u for the wonderful story that u shared with us.

Love always from ur fan.




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Posted: 11 years ago
Juss caught up w/ the ending and I loved it! It was typical for them to become like this at one point in life because you have kids and responsibilities..life just changes. It was juss great to read them get together and make up w/ each other.
Jenny, I will be missing this ff dearly!...I promoted this ff in several places so that ppl read this ff. Thank you..thank you soo much for writing such a beautiful master piece! God bless you! Keep writing and plz dont ever stop writing!




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Posted: 11 years ago
Jenny, All 3 epilogues are very nice. You gave a peek of their married life to readers. I have to admit when the doc mentioned a chance for triplets, i can very well imagine how Mr Foster must have felt and was like dude you are done.
loved the scene between Arnav and Branny. Its not an easy task of seeing the boy everyday who reminds of Khushis past. My admiration for this Arnav grew further who didnt even think for a sec but stated to Branny that he was and is his son all the while.
Thanks for the PMs on intoxication.

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