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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Mrs Tendulkar mast tha.. aur sarabhai vs sarabhai is epic yaar! :D

i too watc h it at times

sach mein aise serials ko band ni karna chahiye
aise serial mein ek bhi aisa character ni hoga jo mujhe pasand ni hai
sabki alag hi usp hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

sach mein aise serials ko band ni karna chahiye

aise serial mein ek bhi aisa character ni hoga jo mujhe pasand ni hai
sabki alag hi usp hai

Sacchi me.. Mrs Tendulkar especially..
Mast tha vo!
Sarabhai vs Sarabhai.. i so miss it! 😭
Firse chalu karna chaiye yaar!
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Posted: 11 years ago
haan fir se chalu karna chahiye mujhe mrs tendulkar mein woh joh baar baar puchti thi na "matlab" ... love her man aur woh jo kavita wale couples the woh bhi mast the
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

haan fir se chalu karna chahiye mujhe mrs tendulkar mein woh joh baar baar puchti thi na "matlab" ... love her man aur woh jo kavita wale couples the woh bhi mast the

I know! they were awesome!
chal i gtg now..
coffee banani ha.. guest here..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

I know! they were awesome!
chal i gtg now..
coffee banani ha.. guest here..

its ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
wen i'll update u'll get the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: rhu90

pls update this ff...


wenever i'll update u'll get the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
i'll update wen i'll be free
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Posted: 11 years ago




this update is specially for swaronlove001 & all our wonderful readers..

hope u all liked our surprise once again happy diwali


from
yogini and chetna

Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 40

ignore the typing and grammatical mistake not rechecked



recap: yaar mujhe bhi yaad nahi ha ha 😆anyways
kriyansh suhagraat+ reception, swaron heartful convo
fight between cooks and non-cooks





Morning

Rey turned around in his sleep n stretched his hand to get the touch he unknowingly craved for but didn't find anything he opened his one eye sleepingly but couldn't find her .. he jerked and sat up.. suddenly a fear grew inside him, he panicked.

He knocked at the bathroom door but getting no response from the other side he turned the knob and it opened , kriya was not present inside.. he opened his door and was about to come outside but heard the sound from kitchen , he smiled and went back inside the room thinking that Kria must be in the kitchen preparing breakfast.. he quickly went to freshen up n take shower inside , he noticed her things along with his on the bathroom counter, her facewash and shampoo were kept with his , he took bottle of her shampoo and smiled more "so that's why her hair smells so good and herself so yummy " ,while showering he remembered last night events their reception party ..Kria in purple evening gown, she seemed so beautiful..

"every girl looks so pretty but with kriya its different she is beautiful from outside as well as from inside .." he smiled thinking how she carried THE SINGHANIYA'S charm with her in the reception..

He took bath n came out wearing a white t shirt and jeans..He headed towards kitchen , he saw dadi in the kitchen

"hey goodmorning beautiful!!" he wished her

"jeete raho beta!!" dadi blessed him smiling

"umm .." Rey tried to look here and there for Kria

Dadi smiled on seeing his state

"woh yaha nahi hai.." dadi informed him

"kaun dadi aap kiski baat kar rahe ho??"

"acha dadi se chalaki??" dadi said playfully twisting his ear

"ouch!!dadi ..chod deejiye mere kaan warna kriya ke taane kaun sunega??" Rey yelled

"chup badmaash!!"

"dadi aaj Kria ne kya banaya? Bhook lag rahi hai" rey asked hungrily

"bhook lagi hai?? Toh khud bana lo" dadi said as a matter of fact

"hain?? Matlab kuch ni bana abhi tak?? Mujhe toh bhook lagi hai" rey pouted

"haan toh thik hai na jaao khud banalo" a voice came from behind

Both dadi n Rey turned back to see

"not again" Rey rolled his eyes and said "ok!! Martin see I am out of your-dear-kitchen now"

"no mr Singhaniya you are allowed in my dear kitchen for today" Martin smiled

"WHAT??" Rey asked unbelievingly

"kyo bhul gaye aaj tum logo ko breakfast banana hai" martin said smirking

"oh!! Haan but kriya kaha hai??" Rey asked

"woh bahar gayi hai .." dadi rplied

"bahar but itni subah subah??"

"pata nahi woh actually use kuch kaam tha ..bataya nahi theek se usne kya kaam, But jaldi mein thi n kuch theek bhi nahi lag rahi thi , maine puchne ki koshish ki but kuch kaha nahi and kuch low bhi lag rahi thi"

"low lag rahi thi??"Rey asked surprised

"haan..n when I asked her about it , she said ki "kuch nahi, woh mall mein ja rahi hai, thodi shopping karni thi use" dadi replied

Rey was lost in his thought, dadi noticed it and tried to divert his mind

"kyon ab bet pura ni karna??"

Rey understood what dadi is trying to do , but he simply smiled and said "offcourse but mere team mates kaha hai??"

"ek toh upar kharaate le raha hai he he" dadi giggled referring dadaji still sleeping

"lo fir toh ban gaya humara breakfast" martin mocked and added "lagta hai ki aaj hume bhooka hi rehna padega dadi"

"arey milega milega n bet hum hi jeetenge"

"WE-WILL-SEE REY" Martin challenged

"THAT U WILL SURE" Rey shot back

Rey left to dadaji room to wake him up..he saw him sleeping peacefully

"dadaji??"

"huh!!" dadji opened his eyes sleepingly but again closed seeing Rey in front of himself"

"dadaji uthiye na!!" Rey whined

"kyun uthu main ?? tujhe jung pe jana hai kya?" dadaji said while his eyes still closed

"jung hi hai dadaji" Rey exclaimed

"huh!!toh tu jaa na ..n . Mujhe sone de, mujhe kaunsa jung ladne jana hai"

Now Rey got irritate, he shouted

"dadaji uth jayi ye warna zindagi bhar dadi ki gulami karni padegi"

"woh toh main waise bhi karta hu, naya kya hai??huh!!"

"toh jitna already aap karte ho use 10% extra aur karni padegi.."

"nahiii!!!!" dadaji woke up in horror

Now he was fully awake.. Rey smirked in victory

"tu ja main aaya"

Rey chuckled and left to swayam's room, He barged into his room and literally pulled off the blanket from Swayam

"Abey saale uth!!" Rey ordered

"arghh!! Kya kar raha hai sone de na"

"chal ab tu na jyada naatak mat kar , jaldi se uth ja warna mai Sharon ko uthane ja raha hu.. waise bhi Maine suna hai ki ladkiya raat ko bahot sexy dresses pehan ke soti hai" rey stated very well knowing that this statement would ultimately make Swayam out of his bed

"WHAT??" now Swayam was fully awake with his eyes opened wide..

"yes!!" with that Rey stood up n was about to go towards him but Swayam pulled him back

"oye!! ruk ja tu. Tu uske kamre mein nahi jayega" Swayam warned him

Rey laughed freely in front of Swayam , Swayam narrowed his eyes but smiled mischievously and said "waise Rey u seem to know very well about women's night dressing, in spite of never sleeping with any woman.. chakkar kya hai?? Does kriya seduces you in night?"

Hearing about kriya ,Rey gulped hard recalling how since two nights kriya used to wear those tops and shorts and how her long slender, perfect smooth legs plays hide and seek with him, when she tries to hide them with the help of his shirt, that she uses to tie at her waist..

"hey kya hua kuch sexy hua kya?" Swayam teased him

"Rey blushed but immediately covered up saying "chill dude!! Aisa kuch ni hai n kriya.. kriya is different"

Swayam smiled at him and rey returned his smile

"chal tu ja aur Sharon ko utha main tum dono ka kitchen mein intezaar kar raha hu"

Swayam nodded and went to bathroom to freshen up while Rey went towards the hall..Rey thought to wake Vicky also up and was heading towards the door but as he was about to knock at his door but the door itself flew open and Vicky came out stumbling to Rey, Rey caught him on time..

Rey looked at a very scared version of Vicky , this was the first time he was seeing him like that first time..

"Vicky?? Kya hua Neha theek toh hai na??" Rey asked worriedly

Hearing loud shrieking voice of Vicky , Martin and dadi too came outside of his room

"Vicky beta kya hua?" dadi too asked

"dadi woh... woh mujhe maar dalegi??" Vicky replied horrifyingly

"kaun maar dalegi ? Vicky??" Martin asked

"Vicky !! tumhe itni bhi akal nahi hai tum Neha ko kaha chod aaye??" Rey asked getting angry

Vicky gulped hard and was about to reply but Rey again scolded him

"Vicky tu sach mein paagal hai , agar Neha ko kuch hua toh main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga" Rey stated as a matter of fact

"bhai main..." Vicky tried to speak but was cut by Martin

"Vicky tumhe Neha baby ko is haalat mein akele nahi chodna chahiye tha" Martin too sided Rey

"chal hatt ab.." Rey pushed him to get inside the room but Vicky blocked the door and said

"bhai nahi.. aap andar mat jao.."

"Vicky beta kya hua?? Neha kaha hai beta ??" dadi said for the first time


continued below




Edited by crazysky - 10 years ago

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