IPKKND: Maid, Mistress & Mrs Thread 2 chp10 pg17 CONCLUDE - Page 18

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..

Lovely ending :)
I hope u write an epilogue and that tol soon :P 😃

Originally posted by: indhuza

😛 kept my promise...read ur first story today

Originally posted by: smat

⭐️ just finished reading Maid,Mistress&Mrs

engaging and enjoyable to read as it was full of many different
emotion from each of the characters.

Originally posted by: Destinyhope0305

Oh My My is dis some kinda Deja Vu ..
I remember reading few chaps of dis story long back but never finished though coz i dint get any Pm dat time .. so totally forgot abt dis ... n i really dint know its written by none other dan u , The mind blowing author of Lessons in love , which has somehw topped my list of awesome arts !!!

Its now wen i came upon dis story thanks to the person who must have commented n den itself dis story landed on my "My Posts"!!!

I read all the parts in one go .. n reading only once wud be an understatement coz i read it twice instead of one (Not kidding!!!)


All the chaps were really shrewdly carved dear !!
Ok to begin with what i really like abt ur stories is u keep it all "arshi" ..Be it Khushi's hindi dialogues or Asr's sraightforward dialogues .. All natural ..

Well it wud be baseless to say i dont like authors who dnt do dat .. But i really am impressed hw u keep it all real n ethical with respect to Arshi ..
Coz we all know Khushi is known by her Shudh hindi n ASR his perfect English .I love dat thing of urs ..

2ndly y i adore u is dat u really blow us out by ur cute little innocent small gestures .. be it khushi's habit of leaning on ASr or ASR's habit of answering k in his own rude but sweet way etc etc .. i always point dat out all sweet tini tiny gestures in all ur updates ..


Ok now coming back to dis story ... it really formed untamed ripples inside my tummy every time i read it ..!!
(Some dialogues were read by me 4 times)

Her diary or river of emotions which u have narrated really blew me off dear ..
Dnt laugh or smile but wen i was reading the chaps wherin u have shown flashbacks , a lonely tear actually did pour out of ,my eyes .. sriously i donno y but there was a sudden rush of emotions inside my tummy imagining the flashbacks u mentioned ..


N frm dat i can really guess wht wud be the condition of our Arnav reading it .. i know its just a story but still it really touched my heart ..

Khushi was so mortified she went to the extend of calling herself Mistress .. dat was like the last gun shot to my heart ..

Wen he utterly declined to meet khushi during one of ur flashbacks n asked her to leave since she came without permission.. i swear i wanted to strangulate ASr at dat time ..

She was so naive .. hw cud anyone even think of hurting her !!!

I m glad he had accident otherwise i wud have really filled buckets of tears in less time !!!

Ur flashbacks were senti .. they were a blend of khushi's patience , her desire , her sufferings , her undying love for a mere douchebag ..

But den hw Arnav really took care of the troubles was outstanding .. u quite ,maturely portrayed both arnav n khushi's turmoil well !!

Good one dear as usual .. keep it up n shower us with ur updates ...i really wanted to share more but i m sure u wud laughon my stupid emotions !!!!


P.S- Only one complain though i think u ended dis quite early.. i know u dnt may not like to stretch ur stories but dis one deserved more chaps .. No offence my personal opinion though !!

Originally posted by: KhushiPM

wonderful story you wrote

thank you for reading..

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