firstly I am sorry for being a duffer reader...
And then i won't drag this long straightly coming to update of last OS which i read..
That went in a simple flow deetha.. If i would be given a chance to select my favorite OS from your works.. it ought to be this one.
Deetha every word, every emotion was greatly displayed by you...
i liked the fact how you took flight from rey's break up with tanni and then his marriage with kriya..
Its taboo here that this concept (rey-kriya-tanni +past) goes quiet messy but you maintained it beautifully with a grace to it.
when i first read that office scene where kriya comes with lunchbox i was like ohh fish.. is he still with tanni but nahh you surprised me with their professional relation only.
Though rey was being angry and all like tough on kriya but your way of handling his dialogues, his character was one thing which i loved the most, it was perfect, He was clueless about diary's quotes but that made him worried and I liked it..
Honestly speaking to me the USP of this OS was Kriya's quotes which you have wonderfully merged between every situation.. it was going so well like a calm river that i didn't even wanted to end so soon..
Infact i got to see a new face of kriya's character in this and that was being calm outside and having thunders inside.. which reflected in every line she wrote..
Once i heard this somewhere.. "Sometimes people can't say everything they feel, so they write it all on papers."
and this came to me as i kept on reading this master piece by you...
and honestly speaking Tanni's character in this OS didn't make it look awkward, i kinda was comfortable with its presence.. because may be you have made it so easy for me to feel nice about it..
And last bit where Kriya had written these lines
Bohut bhaar sa lage ye dil aaj!!
Shayad tumse door jaane ka dar!!
Jaanti hun ki tum mere akbhi nahi ban sakte..
par kaash hum kabhi alag hi na hote!!
Saha nahi jaata ab mujhse..
saalon se tarsi mai tere kaande pe sar rakhke rone ka..
Aasha hai ek din aisa aaye meri zindagi mei jo meri uss intezaar ko prra kare..
Tere hoke bhi tumhari nahi banpayi!!
shayad tumse door jaana hi likha hai meri kismat mei!!
They took me off for one moment i was really worried whether kriya will be alive or have she done something to herself..
mereko sachi mein aage padne mein darr lag raha tha but himmat karke pada toh meri jaan mein jaan aayi...
it could not have any ending more apt than this one.. it did get a thumbs up from my side..
And a big huge to you that you made me read this amazing OS..i just fell in love with each and every aspect of it..
And dunno why these were my favorite among all the quotes..😃
Dil bhi kaisi harquat karta hai!!
Hawa mei chalne ka khwaab dekhta hai
Paani mei mitti se ghar banake basne ka sapne bunta hai..
par anth mei hamesha toottha hai...
Use bhi pata hai ki toot ne pe dard hota hai
Fir bhi ye dil Sapne kyun dekhta hai??
Shayad kuch dil tootne keliye hote hai..
Zayda lamba hogaya na.. dont worry or nahi likhungi... just yahi puchna tha..Ki rey ne toh mana kiya tha na woh cook nahi rakhega toh kaka kahan se aaye beech mein??😕
and you taught me a lesson that yes a work can be brilliant and nice even without mushy romance and high notch drama... i just fell for this OS.👏 ❤️
Anyhow you planning to write something like this in future make me read it please.. i would love to do it..
A truth i wanted to say, yes i did have choking throat while reading end.. i really was having watery eyes but they weren't sad ones they were of being overwhelmed..this was the effect of this OS on me.. i think i can't say anything much in words now..😳😃
PS:sorry for this long comment.. can't help it..😳
and i promise i will read other OS asap...
Edited by pallavi.14 - 11 years ago
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