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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Unrsd on pg 18 :)

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Unres for os 5

yet again
"you are amazing"

fabulous os deetha
loved it

specially those lines which u wrotes...for krias diary
they were beautiful

and the last lines took my heart away...love them

all the three characters part was totally justified

loved the way u showed them..

Just hoped it would continue a bit more...

But nevertheless i know many more os's are gonna come

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

ek pm toh bhej diya karo..

os 4 mast tha..

ek dum deetha style.

loved it.

wonderful!!!!!

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

4th OS is simply Fantabulous..
Luvd d Naughty Rey n naive Kria.. Kitna taang kiya Rey ne Kria ko.. 😆
It was full of so many heated Kisses n passionate romance! 😳
Have read 3-4 times already, Still can't get enough of it!
Luvd d OS lyk anything .. Waiting for many more OS's to come :) 😉

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Reserved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Unreseved..

You know what I loved it love dit from the time i read the lines..
loved it from the time I knew you were going to write OS and yes from the time my deeth touched philosphy..
I cant tell you how elated I feel to see mature even as a writer..
The emotions you protray supresses all my worries..
I drown down into many of your works when I read them..
And I defo did not want a d=sad end to this and so tortured you sorry..

This simple end is what makes it special..super special..

One among your best of best works

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

resss

unres

Dee.. i dnt know wat to say yar..

like Asma said.. u've truly improved a lot more as a writer...

the emotions u portrayed..off all d 3 characters.. Reyaansh.. Kriya.. Taani...

whn u told us that u r gonna write an OS on these 3.. i really didnt know that it wud be somthing like this...

wat all feelings Rey wud hav gone thru seeing both of them together..in front of his eyes..

The pain Kria has been going thru always...and how it kept increasing...

all the lines which u used... they were soo damn related... each n evry word cud be related...

and the end.. sweet and simple...

very different and amazing OS..

Loved it a lot..

Dee.. u r just amazinggg... 🤗

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 11 years ago

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gauri07

@gauri07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Wen u told that u r going to write OS on dis 3, i was confused a lot.
u have potrayed all the 3 characters very well.
all the lines u used were perfect and the end was sweet and simple.
it was an amazing OS.
Luved it