Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9)

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Hetal

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RizArshi

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Congrats on the new thread 😃

Chapter 20

When I started reading my expression was 😔

When I read how miserable Arnav was while he was at the mandir my face was like 😭

And after that my expressions changed like this 😊, 😃 , and finally

I don't know how else I can describe my feelings after reading this chapter. A-W-E-S-O-M-E

Chapter 21

Pinch me please. I can't believe it ended 😭

But what an ending it was 👏 I m speechless. Beautiful would be an understatement.

I'll miss Loving Khushi. But I m so happy that u will be starting a new story soon. I don't know what I would've done without u and Rashmi. Hats off to u both. Thanku so much for gifting us with such wonderful stories one after another 🤗

Edited by RizArshi - 12 years ago

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Sanjana

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thank you so much, wonderful reading/

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ma-nishada

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Posted: 12 years ago

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finally sanka devi's limbic system starts working...

that was a wonderful update wa smitha...

hope the story is not going to end...

i am greedy.. greedy for arnav n khushi scenes.. pls smitha kadha nirthalley..

kurachu nalla romantic scenes koodey ezhuthu...

i luv u for this wonderful story.. sathyam.

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sho its the end... i thought there is some more to come... but any way happy that new story is coming...

Edited by ma-nishada - 12 years ago

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nishu_shorna

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Part 19

Smita...again u made me cry...i couldn't stop my tears when Arnav was talking to devi maiyya...i cant bear their pain anymore...jaldi se Khushi ko wapas le aao plz...
Tiwariji is so nice...and Girija Deviji...she is the best...
And Khushi's dream...her journey to the past...right Khushi,this was not RM...this is not your HOME...go back to ur true place...
waiting for next...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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hydsri

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oh such beautiful post. absolutely fabulous.

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pinkly

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Good one. Arnav went to temple on his own and prayed to Devi Mayya :-). I liked it very much.

You have nicely written about Khushi's dream. She realized she can not stay away from Arnav. Girija Devi gave a very timely advice. Make yourself happy first and then try to make others happy. It used to be the opposite for Khushi. She used to be Dukhi all the time and make everyone else happy. Both Girija Devi and Tiwariji are very nice people. Hope they make an appearance later in the story.

She was all packed and ready to leave with Arnav. That was nice. I had smile on my face when she ran and hugged Arnav in the end.

I wait to read your updates everyday. It has become a routine. Gosh, even though you have given long update, I feel like reading more and more. May be I will start reading your earlier FFs once again.