Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

the chapter was superb means swayan dad knows about their divorce...
that why without let them know gave a surprise and had a conversation and in think
why did they both took such a decision and is shocked to know by hear their talk...
and it get interest... do continue soon and pm me

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

it was an amazingg update as always

as a writer you know how to develop an

emotional bond between the characters

making your readers connect with the character,

no amount of prose is going

to make them respond emotionally.

It's not the words, but the context.

the way you introduced rishi n sharon's bond was perfect

the small portion whr rishi has tears in his eyes

aftr seeing those pics

n the way sharon breaks down in front of

swayam 's father telling him

how thr beautiful world shattered into pieces was heart-touching

the small flashback was beautifully penned

swayam's guilt was seen thru his rough cold exterior

i cud see a very vulnerable sharon trying to

save her relationship sumhow struggling to get out of tis mess

the way she collapsed into tears of grief and anguish.

was beautifully penned

the place whr swayam was asking questions frm his father

wit concern added a kind off monologue

tat he still misses sharon so much

tis qoute will definitely suit swayam

''Every man has his secret sorrows which the world knows not; and often times we call a man cold when he is only sad.''

do update soon 😛

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Beautifully penned

Loved the Rishi n Sharon bonding

The flashback was painful

Confused by Swayam behavior

Update soon

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Supreb update...sharon rishi bonding portrayed beautifully... But still eager to know the reason behind swayams such behavior... Update soon

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Just finished reading all the 4 parts!! The story is going great!! Really anxious to know Why is Swayam doing all this!!

Continue Soon!!😊

Thnx for the pm!!😃

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

awesome update... loved it... plz plz plz update soon... thank u fr d pm...
i love ur writing style... now plz reveal d rsn fr d divorce... plzzz

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Eisha Amir

@Babyeisha100

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Awesome Concept

I love it

Plz Do Continue

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armaanasadksg

@armaanasadksg

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

awesome update thankx 4 d PM. update soon dear

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Awesome update :)

I loved the equation between Sharon and Rishi

I loved how you showed shocked Swayam when he saw his dad...I would have loved to see that in real...he would have looked so cute

I'm happy Swayam still cares for Sharon

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

tanvish love u for this ff

i love it soo much

now coming to the updates [ 1234]

i was mesmerised by the way u started it with the separation d pain n dat love for each other

d ignorance n suppresing emotions n not letting anyone know d inner turmoil

love in true sense means d other ones happiness n dats wat sharon did without even questioning him for wat reason he wanted to get separate

n other swayams inner turmoil killing him each second he love her sooo much but still divorced n dats where d secrect arises for dis separation 😭

n loved d way rey supporting his best buddy n kriya supporting her sis both of them always der for swaron oops swayam n sharon😉

n the club scene was amazing where swayam tries to hide his emotions n den the flashback were so soothing 😃

den the day wen sharon cums to take all her stuff d way she knew each n evey actions of swayam like a perfect wife n her concern for him😛

n d last update loved the duo of father daughter

both swayams dad n sharon so close to each other n sharon can share each n every tiny thing of her life wid him 😊

loved d way he tried to reduce n comfort sharon n vent out all her pain

n the way swayam was shocked deeing his fahter😲n d way he questioned his dad abt sharon showed his immense love for her n even his father was shocked to see it 😆😲 n wondering if both love each other den y did dey divorced😕

hope to see papa shekhawat finding out d real reason n help d two lovers get back together n even kriyaansh😉

i just loved the way the story is building n every passing update each secret n emotion will come out n i am very excited for it 😛

the way u hv showed emotions frm swayma pov n sharons pov was awesome

just loving dis ff ❤️🤗

keep updating fast fast will be waiting for it 😃

n sorry for such late comment😭