Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

finally finsih read ur all ff in one go... but it was quite emotional but
feeling written were amazing... i was almost in pain...
do continue soon and pm me

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

how could i miss this FF 😭
the prologue nd character sketch were amazing
chapter 1 was awesome i liked the bond b/w sharon n kriya
swaron divorce 😔

Chapter 2 it was simply awesome i always like how you describe the flashback
Swayam enjoying in a club was a bit awkward at first but then his lines made me cry 😭

they both are hurt very much
i also liked the reyam bond in it
looking forward for the next chapter
love u Tanvish 🤗

Edited by Muskan_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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Cenjonstrand

@Cenjonstrand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

awesome update
both swayam and sharon are hurt
update soon

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awesome concept n story line.. CS was awesome..

chap 1 n 2 were beautifully n brilliantly penned..

d pain love n helplessness of swaron was penned brilliantly..

sharon s helplessly in love with swayam but s divorced..

swayam s madly in love with sharon but wants her to b happy n so pushed her from him for something happened which sharon doesn't know..

sharon's pain thinking she s bad n not worthy to live with was painful to read..

both r madly in love with each other but something happened in swayam's side that he pushed her away..

KR giving support to their sister n friends respectively was awesome n it was nice that they ve some1 to let their hearts out n cry n share things..

wat s d mystery.. waiting for next part ve sent u bud req accept it n pm me wen u update next..

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
res

Do Unres Soon 😛

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: SanskritiS
mine

do unres soon 😛

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Phenomenal tanvish I loved this chapter tooo much..❤️.
The kisha scene in the beginning of the update gave a light note to your update..😊.
Then swayam's fake act of enjoying his bachelorhood hurting sharon in the process and then pretending indifference in front of rey that was penned down beautifully by you.. Rey and swayam's convo was written with perfection the reyam in the show came in my imagination..😊.
Sharon's pain her hurt her self cursing was also another wow moment for me when I was reading the update.. I realised one thing while reading that you're very good at expressing emotional piece of works so kudos to you for that..👍🏼.
Last but not the least swayam's monologue touched my heart really I could feel his pain his suffering and his longing to be with sharon.. Beautiful tannu you've matured as a writer..😊.
I loved the flashback scene it was simple but very very adorable a madly in love couple image was painted in my mind while reading it..😊 ❤️.
Take your time and update this FF soon I'm really looking forward to read this write up..
Love,
Kashmi..🤗

Thank you SO Much Kashmi 🤗

Actually this FF concept is one of my favourites and I hope I do complete justice to it keeping up to all your expectations

I have always looked forward to your comments and will always do

Thanks dear 😃