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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Absolutely scintillating... sublime and ethereal!!!

The scene in Arnav's house has a dreamlike quality - brilliant!!

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Arnav has given her his everything...with this revelation, I can clearly see a man hopelessly and irrevocably in love. Khushi is double-minded for quite a sometime yet she means good.

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nanoni

@nanoni

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Very good. I always look forward to the rest of the story that I find you very well written. And do not you stop in so good way, because I really like this story has an end.

I love the way you write, because it is not lost between updates.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Beautiful update...

I just love your writing...🤗

I really like Shaan... wish that he didn't get to know about Arhi that way... Realizing that khushi has called him for Arnav must be painful for him... Hope he will forget and forgive them soon...

Love Arnav today... He showed her the depth of his feeling for khushi... He didn't hold anything and express every thing with his actions...

Khushi should tell him about shaan ans her conversation before he get to know from some where else...

Continue soon...

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

As usual!
D way u write surprises me a lot!
How can sum1 write so perfectly!!!!
UNBELIEVABLE...
I really really wait for ur update(d way i am waiting for season 5 of TVD)
khushi's reaction surprised me a lil..but then again seeing so many portraits might have shocked her!
Waiting for d new revelations to happen!
U should just start writing a novel... Coz u r just tooo good!