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Posted: 11 years ago
Men! C why do all the negative men in your story cross new barriers and reach new depth just when we think they cannot stoop any lower? Why?



She has a wedding at hand and I see no excitement about the same! Neither is it stressed upon! The details are missing too and to add on your note says if and when the wedding happens! Hmm! Doubt hota hain!!


Lovely update otherwise! Even hatred can be loved only in your stories due to the choice of words!

Neil aww I adore him! I'm glad he's with her! Nd no surprises for the fact she called him out of all the people!


Humeira are you deliberately avoiding the rudra might be the reason for the accident? Or you actually don't think so?



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Posted: 11 years ago
The story is set amongst corporate shenanigans, & you have madeitseem so credible. Very well researched base I must say. Rudra is the mastermind, & most others seem as pawns. With the wedding happening, & Khushi's birthday coming, ominous seems the future. The wedding hopefully should be the reprieve.
With Rudra's planning, how come he allowed Humera to contact someone, as well as move out?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shyam the coward in more ways than one...unable to see his own actions to fruition... I wonder then why he lives the life he does. A very weak and pathetic man...! I wonder how Anjali put up with him at all..? Did he not disgust her..? So Humera survives...so glad to hear that.
"You are here because of me" did he mean that in more ways then one...? So Rudra plays protector...for now..and what did he expect Humera to do..? Say thank you and then warm his bed..? He respects her but then again his sense of respect is pretty warped.

And Humera calls Neil for help and now they are going to be in close quarters for a while and do I need to wonder if the fire dept will need to make a visit..?

Surprise factor is Shaan and new girlfriend...so fast..? Did he have a spare waiting in the wings just in Case Kushi did not work out..? What's up...is this real or is it just a front..to show Kushi that he's over her and moved on with nary a broken heart..?

Where's Arnav...not dancing with his to be bride...? Not fair...! And why is Rudra the big brother missing from his sisters wedding rituals..?


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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! a busy chapter, was having hard time to keep everything straight in my head... SMJ once a criminal will always remain a criminal. I found Rudra rather confusing... Not sure what his motives were & how he took Indraneil's presence... Ah! finally Arnav & Khushi are getting married...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so shyam was behind humera accident!! but who is behind the accident!! not dushyant , why would he ask shyam to kill humera!!

loved neil and humera's talk..she called neil..much as i thot!!
but she is going to miss khushi's wedding..🥺
so wedding will be in thenext update..hope nothing goes wrong!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is a great story ..The way you have created characters and described their importance, its simply fabulous. I am enjoying myself reading this story..

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