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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
loved the conversation btw arnav and anjali
the way they read each other
i love the way the story is progressing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
nice one.. good that Anjali wanted to do her thing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Fantastic👏👏👏
Loved it🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Chaitu!! :)

That was a simple update yet left a deep mark .. esp with respect to the Mother - Daughter duo!
Both right in their own ways ...Only circumstances that will develop in the future will help one veer the direction of their thoughts to fit some ways!
Lets see what that circumstance now will be and who's side will it favor!

Now the calculative lill sister! must i doubt her abilities there? She nailed it at the right place causing her brother go off guard! :)
Yes very true ... if there could be anyone who would rationalize the situation he and Khushi were in would be Anjali ... and rightly judged at it ...
Atleast that must have provided him some respite abt her affable thinking ...towards Khushi!

Ah! the A/N :- You know something that stands out in this story is its pace! Its not always easy to maintain interest of the readership with parallel leads or the non lead characters in the chaps.. but i must applaud you for doing a commendable job for being successful at it!

This story stands out for me ... mainly for its super cast with their larger than life attitude...
Every role defined here have been molded perfectly to bring out the respective characterization;for instance Rudra ... his introductory chap drew me in... The chap essayed him so intensely that you tend to forget the righteousness or not of his character and all you are forced to focus on is his powerful nature... that you land up admiring him!
Its the same for all the characters.. from Anjali to KK to Priyadarshini to Humera to Payal to Anandita to Shantanu ...and so on!
Such is the effect of your writing Chaitu! You can gimme anyone in the chaps .. and i am confident i will read it with the same zest ... :)

To be honest! for me it was L3 that lured me more into it than IMTBE ... Not saying IMTBE was not liked ... never! Offcourse given the difference in the genre I really cant compare them... but all i am saying is L3 has more potential ... not a novel material I would say but something more ... given that it invokes better aesthetic faculties... so the tv world it is... which I have been telling you this time and again! you need to be careful abt it available without copyrights! :)

So ... here i put an end to my quill! Thanks for the update Chaitu! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
I may hav said dis already bt once again would repeat !
Ur anjali is d best anjali! She is d coolest lady!
I loved d brother sister bonding!
Even after saying mother-son duo always are for each other ,shez so cool wid arnav!
Kid Sister's will always b d brats dey r!
And i seriously love d way u focus on a character and make us c ur pov.
Dats real amazing work!
Also to understand ur ff , i need a dictionary wid me ;)
ur writing skills are jst awsummm !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Despite all the composure and sane behaviour Anjali at heart is a brat...and I'm happy she feels comfortable in letting go every once in a while with her family...else life would have been unbearable.
Despite her resentment I love how comfortable she is with Arnav...almost like a partner in crime. So shantanu for Anajali...? a bit too soon a no too presumptive...?

And finally Arnav verbalizses his love for Kushi ... But how did Anjali know..? Just intuitive or a little bit of help on the side.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Nice update!
Anji has a backstory... right and she is chafing ...will she get her due in the AR piece?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
I like this Anjali
She's stubborn and is moving forward 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Fantastic update 😃
Loved it 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like the concept of ur story...
its new:) :) :) :)
I lik the way story is gng...
love the way u give importance to every character ...
really i become ur fun...
love it..

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