New Story: Qubool Hai PT11 PG 53 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome and long update...
in rathore style "good job"...
cont soon...
thanks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all dill se sorry for commenting late..was caught up in my personal fiascos...

beautiful update

specially the part 1...full of perfectly planned missions nd action packed scenes...jst like any hollywood movie scenario...

nd the second part...lovely...
fully 'Dutta' licious...lolz...

nd the best scene was Baji tesing Dutta vid dat song for Aisha...loved it the most...

waiting for the face off of arshad and dutta..

continue soon zubyji...

thnx for the pm$

love
Aisha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

awesome and long update...

in rathore style "good job"...
cont soon...
thanks for PM...


😆 I have gotten a Rathore style compliment then it must have been good😳 Thanks Anu.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

first of all dill se sorry for commenting late..was caught up in my personal fiascos...

beautiful update

specially the part 1...full of perfectly planned missions nd action packed scenes...jst like any hollywood movie scenario...

nd the second part...lovely...
fully 'Dutta' licious...lolz...

nd the best scene was Baji tesing Dutta vid dat song for Aisha...loved it the most...

waiting for the face off of arshad and dutta..

continue soon zubyji...

thnx for the pm$

love
Aisha


Hollywood action???? Now that's a bit too steep😆 But glad u liked it,Aisha.Thanks for the comments😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10

Wow. Awesome
Love the precap
Thx


Thanks dear😃 You are the only one that said anything about the precap😛 Yes.That's naani Maa.She'll meet us next update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...😊😊😊

arshad in action...
dutta blushing...awww.😆😆😆

Note:-less active till mid of october bcoz of exams...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unreserved my comment on pg 24 😳😳
Now for part 6:
6A:
Piping hot parathas and Keema curry 😉 ... ahannn... jaane do... is barey mein baad mein baat karenge ...
Daddy Rawte worried ... he knows what Dutta's terror means 😉
Beautifully scripted the part of the raid and catching the gang ... 👏👏
Entire operation was described in such a way that it was easy to visualise 😉
Virkar happy ... found someone who is helping him 😉
6B:
Aai Saaheb - Dutta and Baji scene was hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ye Baji bahut bur apitega kisi din Dutta ke haath se... 🤣🤣🤣🤣
But ye kya
Consignment pakda gaya ... and TV par news bhi aa gayi 😲😲😲😲😲
Ab aayega mazaa khel ka ... Dutta and Arshad aamne - saamne ... The direct match ... 😉
And now Appa Saaheb entering ... pretending to be a referee ... 😉😉
Appa Saaheb ki entry ke baad zyada dhamake honge 😉😉😉
Precap is interesting ... Aisha's dad coming back from Dubai and Arshad visiting hi maternal grandparents 😉😉
Overall a fast paced update 👏👏👏... mazaa aa gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
aj to monday h 😉
updatewa 😈
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

B,

Bahut der kardi sanam aate aate😳😳😳

Finally you are here🤗

Been waiting forever for ur reviews,B😃

Hey!Meri marathi kaise lagi?😉😆 Not even fit for jootis & chappals??? 😛

Nah!Arshad isn't visiting them.They have rushed over to meet their grandson.A bit more family pyar mohabbat on the way.For both.Ash & Arsh!😉

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