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Posted: 12 years ago
4b
i myself becum so nostalgic now
bt refrain to put my feelings aside now
back to update
sacchi sometimes so difficult to understand parents
they Always care for kids
sometimes we misunderstood dem
angry wid dem
bt parents r d most beautiful gift by God to us
seems like dad rawte a angry person
he cares for bro
bt due to a wrong circumstance
equation changed now
well mother touch is speechless
she is d most sacrificing person
she do every thinng for us
papa ko mnana hmari demands kie liye
speechless
lovvely
d last line lol
parents know every activity
no matter how much we try to hide dem
enough of my banter nw
do cont soon.
thanku zuby ji
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Riya
I saw last night itself that you had reserved a reply😳 That's why didnt send a PM PLs accept buddy request.

As for the comment BRB
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
Short note again 😉
Tanvi Azmi and Sachin Khedekar ... Superb choices again... 👏👏👏👏👏
Since I have seen a lot of movies and shows of Sachin and Atul... while reading their dialogues... I can imagine their voices along with the visual of the scene that u describe 😉
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Highlights from ur reply :
Smitten of course.Now he will find the smallest of excuse to hate her to mask that feeling🥱 Men!
This is surely going to be one of the highlights of the story 👍🏼
Arshad is going to take them on a hell ride before he realises what he is doing
It will Dutta-Aisha VS Rawte-Virkar👍🏼
The core element... the backbone of the story ...
👏👏👏👏👏
I'm looking forward for these parts. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Virkar ... poor guy... iska bhi kuch karwa do yaar... biwi nahi milti kyunki rishwat nahi leta 😳😳😳😳...
Ahannn... Virkar ko jhatka... "Sharab peena ek buri aadat hai... aur aadaton ki ghulami karna meri aadat nahi" ... Virkar impressed 😉
And Plan of Action is ready 👍🏼 ... Bhau ... taiyar rehna 😉
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First of all... cool Marathi dialogues 😉
Arshad is back to his home...😳
Adorable "Bhau Saaheb" of all the servant folk...😊
Najma worried... achanak kaise aa gaya beta 😳😳
Daddy Rawte... cool... unko ye bhi pata hai ki Arshad yaha kaam se aaya hai...😊
Oopsss... both worried for Arshad... uska panga Dutta Bhau se hai 😳😳😳
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"That room"? and he went to old room? ... ye kya mystery hai?
What a cute description of his childhood days 😳 ...typical kid...a spoilt brat 😆😆😆😆
Daddy Rawte ... he loves his son a lot but cannot show it openly... he has his ways to express his love ...so what if he didn't embrace him... his ordered for the sea food for him 😉
And itna hi nahi... bte ki har khabar hai Abba ko 😉 ... aur sirf beta hi kyun... bte k dost ki shadi kisse ho rahi hai ye bhi pata hai 😉😉😉
Sea food... mere muh mein paani aa gaya 😳😳😳 ... baki sea food to nahi...but I love eating fish ... 😳😳
Awwwiiieee... i'm touched ... crossover with RNP ... 🤗
Sooo sweeet of you 🤗
Mom-son part was sooo beautiful...
Najma going down the memory lane... Arshad's grandmom... her love for Arshad ... Suleiman and Daadi spoiling Arshad ... Najma had no say 😳😳😳
Good... Arshad in not an atheist 😊
ahannn chai...😉
"bachi ho to mujhe bhi de do ek cup" 😆😆😆
Hero ki Hero Karizma bike ... ahannn ... I have a question here... will send u a PM 😳😳
Daddy ki warning ... there was so much of love, care, affection and worry hidden in those words... 🤗🤗🤗
"Arshad", called his father."Keep within the speed limits.I hear of you speeding madly on the highway I swear that's the last you'll see of that bike",
Though he knew that Arshad is a grown up man, but for Daddy... he was still that 21 year old young boy ... full of life... ready for any thrill and adventure... and that old image of Arshad was still fresh in his mind... 😉
Another important thing, he missed out the transition of that young boy to a mature and responsible police officer... so missing out on this was too hurting him somewhere. 😳
Both the parts were so warm and adorable 🤗
Waiting for next update 😊
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

@Riya

I saw last night itself that you had reserved a reply😳 That's why didnt send a PM PLs accept buddy request.

As for the comment BRB

ok...and i accept ur request, but i saw u send pm individually, so why dont u make a pm list?😃 save ur time.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

reswa will read and unres tom its 2 in night

unres its 10 in morning😆

hmm..arshad in vikar's quarter? omg i thought he was going to stay there lol.

🤣 Even if Arshad hd no place of his own he'd go to some shabby lodge to stay.Virkar ka bed thodi na share karega?🤣🤣🤣🤣

then he went for his house...his house. and the description u gave...when u wrote the maids were there to welcome i heard his mom dad were still angry...😕 then her mother came...nice casting, especially i love his father...sweet but strong.

arshad's childhood is very well described. he was spoiled to the core...thats why whatever he did in past left a deep scar in his daadi/ dad's heart. his dad cares/ loves him a lot, but dont show it much...these men😳

My own men are like that🥱 They'll seem very cold & distant but eyes ears will be tuned to each family members every movement😆 Really,Men!

arshad's father know too much about him, is not it? sameer marriage, ETF office...i bet he didnt come to know during his work tour😉 he was keeping as eye on him...even as angry. awww so sweet...that is our parents. whatever we do, they support us, though we know about it or not😳 they are our protector.

True.Angry though he is because Arshad acc to him has done something unforgivable he simply couldn't let his son alone in the big bad city of Mumbai without care.Parents are like that.We move on in life away from them but they somehow or the other keep their kids close

then...arshad was very naughty in childhood...and in the last the bike...wow!!!! and his father's warning...at least he laughed carefree in all these years😃

He was terror personified.But a good child at heart.

omg, i just missed there is aisha in the story with dutta/ arshad. i was wondering who is the girl sameer about to get married..doctor?😆 stupid me

Hope Bhavna doesn't mind me borrowing Anwesha😉

hmm very nice zuby...but i want aisha/ arshad in next part😳😳 pls pls pls😳😳 and the precap...raid? dutta vs arshad starts now!!!!

War begins!😈

update soon. and still no pm? i wonder why?🤔 hey why dont u make a pm list...sending pm individually eat so much time

Abhi field mein nayi hoon😆 Thanks for the tip & your lovely comments😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
who is Anwesha???
vo reporter ??😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

ruk...m abi aai

Edit:- Uff...kya muslim naam rakhe hai ...yaad hi nahi rahte mujhe😳

Kya re Piya! Kabhi koi muslim friend nai banaya kya? chal! Mere thru thoda inke baare mein jaan lena tu😆

ACP Arshad ...Rosh ko kho chuke hai...so sad!!...really! 😆

Woh toh pehle bata diya tha na uske bad dreams & Sikki ke baare mein😕

Again nice casting...Sachin Khedekar ko Arshu miya ka baap bana diya...very good!😊

Thanks.I love Sachin's acting a lot.And simply adore Tanvi who is playing Najma😃

Bechara Virkar bhi sochta hoga ki kis dunia se aaya hai ya banda ...only tea pita hain...lyk me😳 😉 🤣

😆😆😆 ACP RAwte hai hi aise na!Too good to be true!

Najma is soo sweet ...mujhe apni mom ki yaad aa gai...😊

All moms are same.Agar koi mom character likhna ho toh we just have to write about our own mom.Koi bhi country ya state ho.they are the same all over😊😊

Dinya is too smart ...he knows very well aaj maa-bete ke beech me nahi aane ka😊...maa ko apne hath se pakane ka ar apne bete ko khilane ka🤣...macchi...ewww!!😆 ACP Rawte is crazy about fish & prawns😛

PS: log pata ni kaise ek zinda jee ko maar ke kha jate hain...well its just my pov! vaise macchi to khane ke liye hi banai hai Baghwan ne...Shh!!😆

🤣🤣🤣 Waise mujhe bhi veggie khana hi zyada pasand hai but plants woh bhi jeevit praani hotey hai😉 Toh phir unko bhi nai khayenge toh jeeyenge kaise😆

Now Bachpan me entry...naughty boy!😆
accha toh ye Arshu ji ...Ravte family se belong karte hain...ok...ok! Samjh gaye...
Arre Wah! Arshu ji herz believe in God...Namaz ...good!😉 👏 ⭐️

Ab us Dr. Chaya ko toh nahi bana diya Sameer bhaiya ki wife...shadishuda munda! 😉

Yeh Bhavna ki FF se churaya hai.Udhar Sam ki shaadi Riya ki badi behen Dr Anwesha Mukerjee se ho rahi hai😉

Papa ji ki warning...yahi tareeka hota hai in papa logo ke pyar jatana ka ...he has strong nd nice personality 😊

Gussa hai lekin bete ke aage peeche hi ghoom rahe hai🤣


Ab ye precap me takda loacha lagrele hai Zuby Tai 😆

Bahut locha hai,Piyu.Sabr!🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
why didnt u post ur ff earlier??? u are awesome u know that???
my comments in red
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

zuby ji emoction free comment lol
firstly change dat contine next page nt down 😆 Jab likha tha toh pata nai tha comment next page pe chala jayega😛
nw selection of characters superb Thanks re Payaliya😳
mindblowing
d lady najma my fav from d serial family no 1 show of sony
lovely
for part a
marathi use Kolhapuri story hai na😃
vikrar n arshad 😉
lolz so true
dat aisa banda jo corrupt free ho use asani se ladki ni milti 🤣 yaar!Achcha hona bhi kabhi kabhi bahut achcha nai hota😛
chai part
nw d feelings n pov of arshad bro for home
grtly written
easily connected
wat a grand welcome back of bro
people who r nt blood related still d bond so strong sometimes
all relationship r defined sometimes nt necessary Very well said!👏 because we choose them na.they are the strongest of all😊
excellent work Thnks Payali

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

4b
i myself becum so nostalgic now
bt refrain to put my feelings aside now
back to update
sacchi sometimes so difficult to understand parents
they Always care for kids
sometimes we misunderstood dem
angry wid dem
bt parents r d most beautiful gift by God to us
seems like dad rawte a angry person
he cares for bro
bt due to a wrong circumstance
equation changed now
well mother touch is speechless
she is d most sacrificing person
she do every thinng for us
papa ko mnana hmari demands kie liye
speechless
lovvely
d last line lol
parents know every activity
no matter how much we try to hide dem
enough of my banter nw
do cont soon.
thanku zuby ji


I wanted this to be an exclusive Mother-Father-Child episode😳 Bahut care se likha.I am glad all of you liked it.Thanks for the lovely comments.I always look forward to your banter Payali🤗

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