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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156


aww padha to i knw no nakku n
full story of bhaiya
awesome dp
change kiya 😉


Zuby ka har kisi kop ek hi word...sabr

ab kaise kahe ki yahi ek cheez sambhalni muskil hoti hai har kisi ke liye😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

Politicians aur unke ye chamche...f**k off 😆 😡...i dont lyk politics etc
kameene na idhar ke na udhar ke!😡
inko baat Arshad ke SYS aur Datta ke bhaugiri aur aisha ke samartgiri se hi samjh me aayegi......😉

omg mummy and F word?😲nice 🤣 haan mummy agree ab to ye teen hi thikane lagayenege un kamino ki akal😡

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm



Zuby ka har kisi kop ek hi word...sabr

ab kaise kahe ki yahi ek cheez sambhalni muskil hoti hai har kisi ke liye😆


zuby ji padh ri ho na 😉
lol 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
zuby ji wen u updating next ?
ps. ye dp me bhaiya ke sath kaun?
dats u kya???
lovely ⭐️
tata catch u later
do update wid dhamaka of arjun aka arshad bhaiya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks Anu😊

Love ur dp
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unreserved both my comments... Pg 8 and Pg 12 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Unres

For part 2
Beautiful detailing of the scene and perfect pictures expressing the scene. 👏

Phew! You are finally here,B😳 Honestly my threads look very suna suna without your inputs😃 Thanku!😉 detailing toh hogi! I live with the man😆
Here comes the Baji ... though I never followed that show... but I used to like the character of Baji ... he is cute. 😛

By God!His scenes with Dutta were so much more awesome than any romantic scene with the female lead😆 Somewhat similar to the current scenario here.😛A member had made a fantabulous video on Maa Da Laadla song on these two.I so wish I could show you that.Youtube ne ban kar diya🤢
Dutta Bhau ka jaadoo... 😉 His intentions are clean and clear ... he doesn't want anyone to get hurt because of him...😊 and he knows how to handle things calmly...👍🏼

Real Veer Dheer Maha Purush! the kind that stands on the front lines in any battle👍🏼


Rawte... is baar tumhara saamna Patil se hai 😉😉 ... don't underestimate him...😳

Pata nai,B! Kaise likhoongi inka clash over law & order & the biggest the baap of all clash:For Begum Aisha😆 Mera Popat toh nai ho jayega na?
So here comes another entry... Insp. Virkar from Mumbaistan 😉 (I must read both the parts of this series now 😳)... so he is just a sidekick of Rawte ... good support... but I am amazed how Virkar doesn't know about Dutta and his deeds ...😲😲😲

Virkar is aware but then he is the true blue policeman like Arshad.A stickler for rules.He thinks whatever the intentions its not upto the Bhau to maintain the law & order of the city or run the lives of people in it.That's the police's job.Plus Bhau is not so law abiding when it comes to bad guys.He thinks he has all the rights to mete out punishment.Plus as I mentioned acc to Patil Saab gold/diamond smuggling is okay.Something that both Arshad & Virkar won't stand for. But the current land thing is shrouded in a lot of mysteries & half truths.Even Virkar hasn't figured it out yet.
I thought Virkar would be helping Rawte getting to know the real Dutta... 😳

That will be done mostly by Aisha.And our khadoos wont like it a bit that his arch rival is actually a Mr Nice Guy😆 He will hate him even more after that😃
Lets see... in dono ki aankhein kab khulti hain 😉

Gradual process.Working on it!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Unres for part 3

A short note: I was about to say, choose a face for Insp. Virkar 😉 ... if u hadn't mentioned Rathore in part 1, I wud hv asked u to have BK as Virkar. But your choice Atul Kulkarni is THE BEST ... superb... my favourite Marathi actor.
replied separately. This was for you specially😳
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Cool... so Dutta Bhau knows that someone from ETF has been sent to Patilwadi to investigate cases against him 😉 ... and his reaction is "Aane do... dekh lenge" ... Bhau... isko underestimate mat karna... warna... samjhe ya... samjhaun ???? 😉😉

Bhau is thinking ETF too could be bought over like the rest of the police of Kolhapur😆 Or some honest guy could be shut up by feeding his boss well.Zor ka jhatka ka lagega bahut zoron se.😉
I was confused when u used the term "Fattu" in Baji's dialogue ... but Dutta's clarification "Fitoor" cracked me up 😆
It was hilarious 😆😆😆

I am going to pepper the story with lot of DuJi scenes.Kaash Arsh ke life mein aisa koi hota😭 woh jo ek hai humesha muh phulake baitha rehtahai
Now here comes miss Dabangg ... aaj ki Naari... sab pe bhaari... simply superb... the way she tackled the situation was mindblowing...
haye! I really had to fry my brain thinking up a intro plot for her.Whereas it was all there in front of me on news channels🤢
Well... u have touched a very relevant issue here dear... 100s of such projects are stuck in bureaucracy in India and millions of people are still waiting to get the benefits that they deserve

I'll never forget the recent mayhem in Vidharbha was man made😲 Out of the 100 of millions allotted only .6% actually went into water projects
Arshad Miyaa!!! Muh band karo... warna muh mein helicopter ghus jayega 😆😆😆 ... Rawte clean bowled ...👏

Smitten of course.Now he will find the smallest of excuse to hate her to mask that feeling🥱 Men!
Here come the boss ... Dutta The Boss ... concerned about the lady and at the same time proud of her. 😉
Aisha "Aap chai piyenge na sir" ... ufff... maar daala ... itna pyar se zeher bhi pilaogi to pee lenge 😳

Its hero worship more on her part😛 Bhau ki khayali pulao zoron se pakk rahi hai😆
Baji ban gaya Baji Bhai ... 🤣
Iski gadi to shuru hone se pehle hi puncture ho gayi 🤣

This cute dimpled guy always finds it the hardest to get a girl🤣🤣🤣
O Teri!!!!!!!! Kuch jal raha hai Arshad Miya !!!!!!!!
Brake lagao... par pehle apne assumptions par ... pehle pata to karo ki loot kisne macha ke rakhi hai... fir decide karo ki jail kisko bhejna hai 😉

Arshad is going to take them on a hell ride before he realises what he is doing
It will Dutta-Aisha VS Rawte-Virkar👍🏼
Supercool!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏 Thanku,B😳
Now waiting to see Arshad's Ammi 😊 Just now I finished casting them🥱😆 Will updte soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hadd hai!! Mera net pack khatam go gaya and aapko bhi tabhi update karna tha di?? But jane do, chod do koi baat nahi!! Firsty thank you so much for a long update...chotu updates se man nahi bharta hai! Pehle toh standing ovation di for choosing such a topic to open your update with. The bureaucrats and like minded politicians, for their malleable gains never let such projects to survive and its no brainer that people will turn to local goons if administration cannot help them. Okay enough of the heavy!

Dutta bhau was in an entirely different mood, the reeling lover boy. I could imagine his favorite chocolate brown pathani and him driving! Haye Allah...maar daala! And yeah!! Bajirao is there too! I loved their friendly horse play. These use to stick together no matter what. Loved them in one frame. And Bhau ke badle badle se andaaz, were enough an indication that Lady Dabbang is gonna make her entry! Haye!!!
And Aayesha nailed it!! She is the alpha woman. The way she destroyed Koshti and tamed the tides to her liking, one can easily predict that she is going to rule a million hearts pretty soon. And Arshad's reaction to her sexy-self, was lets out of the world! You never fail to surprise us. And Arshad darling this girl who made you loose control is all set to make you loose yourself in near future. I can't wait for the next update!!! Bole toh intezaar nahi ho rela hai!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meself

Hadd hai!! Mera net pack khatam go gaya and aapko bhi tabhi update karna tha di?? But jane do, chod do koi baat nahi!! Firsty thank you so much for a long update...chotu updates se man nahi bharta hai! Pehle toh standing ovation di for choosing such a topic to open your update with. The bureaucrats and like minded politicians, for their malleable gains never let such projects to survive and its no brainer that people will turn to local goons if administration cannot help them. Okay enough of the heavy!

Dutta bhau was in an entirely different mood, the reeling lover boy. I could imagine his favorite chocolate brown pathani and him driving! Haye Allah...maar daala! And yeah!! Bajirao is there too! I loved their friendly horse play. These use to stick together no matter what. Loved them in one frame. And Bhau ke badle badle se andaaz, were enough an indication that Lady Dabbang is gonna make her entry! Haye!!!
And Aayesha nailed it!! She is the alpha woman. The way she destroyed Koshti and tamed the tides to her liking, one can easily predict that she is going to rule a million hearts pretty soon. And Arshad's reaction to her sexy-self, was lets out of the world! You never fail to surprise us. And Arshad darling this girl who made you loose control is all set to make you loose yourself in near future. I can't wait for the next update!!! Bole toh intezaar nahi ho rela hai!!!


Shivani, my fingertips have turned to stone refreshing this page for your reply Kahaan reh gayi thi?

First of all these emoticons are sooo adorable Haye! these are my expressions when I watch or think of Arjun😳

Awesome review! True na? ya phir mera dil rakhne ke liye?😆

I will intro Rawte seniors in my next update plus a trip into his bachpannn😉

Der na karna😳

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