ArHi FF: The Same Coin#3

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: mem1
It's almost Day3... and a thought is worrying me...
Will you be updating this and leave us waiting in the Tales thread...Or will you write a new Tale first, and leave us hanging here, dying to know what happened after the Kiss, who texted first...etc...

I can't even decide which option is better!!! the best would be of course if you updated both!!!! but I am not that greedy and selfish (at least I won't admit to it on a public forum!)

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I might as well tell you that I will keep you waiting on the Tales thread.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: Semanti

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I might as well tell you that I will keep you waiting on the Tales thread.

Boori ladki😡

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: Semanti

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I might as well tell you that I will keep you waiting on the Tales thread.

In a strange sort of way, that makes me feel better... cause at least there it is just anticipation... here it is a matter of life and death...

Agar hame next day ke baare me jaldi pata nahin chala, tho hamaari tho saans hi ruk jaayegi!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

I wish you hadn't stopped writing this chapter!!! 😛 I kept scrolling down, afraid that it would stop JUST as the crucial moment came...or didn't come!! I am SO glad you've taken it to the next level...and how!

It was perfect...just perfect...a bit of 'ooof!' and and 😳 and 🥳 made me all 🤪

I just knew as soon as I read 'old rose' and 'chiffon' that we were gonna be gonna's! The subtle shift is well and truly on a roll...I just loved how it started off as Khushi on her own, to him joining her, to their banter...and a bit of soul sharing...to a wonderfully intimate moment...it wouldn't have felt so intimate if all that went before it, didn't go before it...if you know what I mean!!

I'm rambling now...it's the adrenalin...I've read it 3 times and the adrenalin still runs true from the point that he's rubbing circles with his thumb!! *big deep heart sigh*.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

And ...it happened. What a kiss? dhamakedaar!!! and there were fire works...literally and figuritively.

Lovely chapter S.

Yes, I prefer to think I'm happy instead of drunk. and Khushi was happy. wow...she is loosening up and am I loving it or what.

Raizada was not drunk and he was trying to not kiss her...once gaian wow...am I loving this gentlemanly Arnav or what.

Finally, Khushi inititating that kiss...did I love it or what.

Loved the crisp dialogue and how they are getting closer closer and closer to each other emotionally. Whether it was Arnav understanding Khushi's problem with her dad (not in its entirity) or fear of darkness. Isnt that how relationships grow. Getting to know every little thing about each other.

That was one fab chapter s.

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

I have read the entire story in one go...wonderful story...loved their fights...their friendship...NK-khushi friendship is awesome...loved his ringtones for khushi and payal...Akash has believed that there is something between NK and khushi and NK believed that there is something going on between Akash and khushi...it was most hilarious when the truth has come out...loved all arnav and khushi's convo...loved the story in total...can you please send me the updates...my email id yoga1237@gmail.com...thanks in advance...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Wow... what amazing build up to the kiss !😳

Some impressive progress Arnav and Khushi have made ...but what's up with the other couple,,,Nkay and La ke beech main jhagda !😲

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Absolutely in love with this chapter...i love happy n drunk Khushi...n her hermone granger avatar <3 n Arnav n her conversations r Awesome...n finally they kiss...but nk n v konchm Kya hua

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Semanti

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I might as well tell you that I will keep you waiting on the Tales thread.

KYA??😲

Basherz Traitorz! 😡

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

I enjoyed the slow build of Arnav's and Khushi's relationship. Of course they are still figuring things out, the uncertainties at their age is of course normal, coupled with their history, just makes it more realistic. I like all of the characters and how their stories and relationships intertwine. Curious to see how our favorite leads handle the day after.