ArHi FF: The Same Coin#3

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maddyevans

@maddyevans

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

wow.
wooow.
this might just be the second comment i ever made on IF.
dont ask me why. i just dont know.
but your writing has made me speechless.
i dont think arnav and khushi's relationship can described and developed as beautifully as you do.
i just some how had to tell you this.
i confess.
i red all the other stories of yours...

and i loved The WAUFMAIO Universe...
but this story got me sooo hooked...i dont think i ever bothered to check IF everyday for an author to make any post (even though u clearly mentioned, u only update every three days.clearly..i've gone crazy! 😆)

well, coming to the actual part of my comment..this is my favourite chapter from any of the fanfics i've ever come across on IF.
both ur arnav and khushi are such strong and potent and in depth (regarding their intellectual prowess) characters and u also give us glimpes of those, rather than just establishing the fact. their conversations, thoughts, feelings, the subtle way of noticing each other physically as well as metally and emotionally...it almost has me living there moments through them.
god..i can just go on and on...😃

lastly, i want to do this...👏 amazing. yeah, thats the word i was looking for!

and this IS the looongest comment i ever made! 😉

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Lovely chapter!!

Loved how khushi made an effort to look good for him!! How she was looking particularly for him to share her thoughts when she wanted somebody by her side!!

Loved how a tipsy!! Oops!! Deliriously happy khushi opened up to arnav and told him things which i dont think in her sober state she would have ever had !!

And the whole build up to kiss, the soft caresses, the slight touches , the undercurrents were so palpable!! M glad it was khushi who bridged the final distance!! For some reason i wanted her to be the one!!

N now what happened with Nk and lavanya?? Trouble in the paradise?? But what an inopportune time for them to have a fight!!

Honestly i liked the chapter alot!! As for lacking i didnt find anything much lacking, i guess the chapter was a bit subdued compared to your other chapters!! I hope i have conveyed what i wanted to properly!!

Anyhow a fabulous update!!

N yes no problems with the font size or colour or anything!! Its perfect!!

Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

OMG that was so awesome!

they finally Kissed! <3

Awww! that scene was lovely!

So excited for next part and their reaction! :D

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Ahhh they kissed!!!!! I loved this update. It was awsome! They have come so far. Khushi has opened up so much with him! And Arnav gave her space. I can't believe she came onto him! Now tht was a pleaseant surprise.

NK and lavanya had an argument?! But loved how she wanted to stay behind for Arnav.

Ps. Font is fine.

Will be waiting for the next update!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Wow! they kissed?!?!? OMG!!! What a rocking start to the New Year!!!

Loved the way Arnav pulled Khushi to himself & kissed her... Her response was so cute too... A drunk oops "happy" Khushi was so much fun... Now that the alcohol is gone, she is so embarrassed... Yeah, why isn't Arnav calling her or texting her?? Is he embarrassed too??? LOL

And NK & Lavanya had a fight?!?!?!? That too on New Years?? That's sad... Wonder what their fight is about really...

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

*gasp*

He Devi Maiyya!!!!!! I swooned to death while reading this chapter Semanti!!!!! The kisss... Hayye... I'm officially DEAD! I want more!!!!!!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Wow! They kissed! Loved it. Beautiful update. Wonder what's wrong with la and NK!. The font is fine for me, thanks for the email.

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

It was midblowingly Awesome...It was just too GOOD...I have nothing else to sat as I dont want the spoil the feeling og happiness I am having right now by just blabbering. You are just too good.

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

To be honest????
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAHZING!!!!!
Cause all of it flowed really naturally
Like oh yeah now hes supposed to hold her and then kiss her
It was all so normal and natural and flowing

And im very proud of you
Loved it when khushi said "what is this chinese torture??"
Loved it

Please update soon

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Love this story!!!! The different way in which Khushi and Arnav are portrayed is awesome. I really like their characters! And omg they kissed!!! What's going to happen next?! Are they going to be awkward about it or become a couple ;) Wonder if anyone else saw them??! Can't wait for the next chapter!