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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vng5mg0iY0Q[/YOUTUBE]

Bol bol why did you ditch me ?

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snapeseverus

@snapeseverus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Yeh kya ho raha hai?

You're here... where is your partner in crime ? the owner of this thread 😛

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arshiangal5

@arshiangal5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

we were supposed to get it today afternoon na?...abtak nahi aya...*dil tukde tukde hogaye..aaj me jaldi sogayiii*😭

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jheel

@Bhavikakosambia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

tumhi dekho na ye kya ho gaya

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arshiangal5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Yeh kya ho raha hai?

Chaand sitaare asmaan pe ayye..update abhi tak na aayi :(

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: snapeseverus

You're here... where is your partner in crime ? the owner of this thread 😛

Uska intezaar toh main bhi kar rahi hoon!
Lekin mujhe bharosa hai...lets wait and see. 😊

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

OHMYGOD.

I am so sorry.

I am posting right away.

Edited by Semanti - 12 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

At last!!

Edit:

First off, I don't have a problem with your font.

Unless you'd rather use Comic sans pink? Coz that makes everything better, you know.

Moving on.

I liked how this started out, with your wonderfully written descriptions of their prep for the party.

I loved Kay's dress!

And gaon-ki-gori?! 😆

But most of all, I loved your 'happy' Khushi.

The kostins she was pondering were just too funny!

And then she calls...and he comes.

How could he not?

The conversation that followed has to be my favorite so far.

The confession about the prank and the letter...the sharing of insecurities...everything was written very well.

And then you wrote the kiss!

Once again, brilliantly written, S. Just the right mix of uncertainty and unbridled passion, M lau it!

But now I'm insanely curious about the aftermath of that kiss.

And things are complicated enough without NK-V and their arguments!

6C definitely lived up too my expectations,and then some.

But I really don't see a problem with the flow, so I'm not sure why you weren't satisfied.

I enjoyed it, as always!

P.S: 12 more 😔

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Sems?
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finally she is here. I was so worried ya? You are not the one who back on promises., i know.!
#RELIEVED

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that was a roller coster ride for me really! first khushi is ummm happy? and she actually texted Raizada and how adorably he said,"nobody call me Raizada!

and then she share what she was feeling in her happy state...

then the words of care and affection...

then the apologies ever so due...

then the fear of dark disclosed...

then the insecurities of her,,,

then the palm moment and goosebumps..and leaning closer cheek kiss dun...

but she is not done yet...

and with temptin thots and desires,,,,and i can say that yes,,,,

N Dan the Kissing Dun

👏

but why are N.K lav fighting? abb inka kya scene hai..uff!

and khushi and her diaries, hope it somehow drops in to a certain someone lap😉

and yes, my commenting also dun!

yayayay!!

updating today?

Edited by .Avanti. - 12 years ago

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snapeseverus

@snapeseverus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Res

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They kissed... FINALLY 🥳☺️
It was simply worth the wait. 6c kind of lived upto its name. Their chemistry is simply palpable... ! Humor, sensuality, attraction... everything was subtle... not overdone... !! 👏

I love Khushi's character in this one... a simple girl with her choices... beautiful but not in a conventional way... living for her own dreams yet trying to prove something to her family, specially , her father... she is not a girl, who would not anything just for the sake of obligation...she'll do whatever she feels right...she drinks, she enjoys( that too in her own way ), she is honest and say whatever she thinks.. but does not quite beilieve in god..not the definition of an ideal girl..you see.. she is just different... yet beautiful...😊 and I love her.

He leaned a little closer at that. "Don't tempt me, Gupta. I may not be drunk, but I'm dangerously close to kissing you right now."

Omg... that dialogue just killed me... 😳😳 Hawwtt 😳😳 Koi to rok lo ☺️

As usual I loved the cullens'😛 masti... they seriously are adorable... Always fighting but they care for each other 😃 and that is what cousins and siblings are for... 😃

What happened between NK and Lavanya ??😲

Khushi could not spend time with Arnav because of them... but friendship is also important and at that time NK needed her the most... well, I am looking for more Arhi moments in coming updates.

Why does Khushi think that Arnav regret kissing her ? ?????
And I would like to know the aftermath of kiss on Arnav !!!!!!!!

Lots of Love
Snape😊

PS : I do not have any problem with the font. It is perfectly fine 😊

Edited by snapeseverus - 12 years ago