ArHi FF: The Same Coin#3

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Lalalal

Muje mera bday gift dede:)
3 ch ka pending comments return gifat ke tor pe.. Pakka

Edited:

6a and B ekatha( coz ramanchi Karne ka hak surf juhi ke pass nahi hai)

Ahh possessive about NK, Gupta? Par Mera Neelkanthan is in pyaar. Par tum nahi samjhogi . Kuch kuch Hota hai. ASR: What crap😆

Your stories are simple yet unique. I can relate emotionally with the characters, yet the subtle " your story is different" never leaves my mind. I marvel at your creativity and knowledge of the theme, the setting of the story. Simple but hatke. When after the ASR rescuing his damsel in distress incident happened( Khushi getting locked up) , I knew their equation would change . I was a little apprehensive as I thought that you would suddenly rush their relationship. But you proved me wrong. I love the speed with which they are proceeding😊

What's with fireworks and first kisses?

Even in WAUFMAIO , La mentioned something about how the Goan fireworks were nothing as compared to Arhi's chemistry pathakaas before Khushi was going on her first date and then they had kissed . I mean arhi and not la and KKGSR .😆 Ch 15 I think ? Not sure.

La saw Arnowji naked?

Arhi first kissed?

Khushi drunk? Not much though.

Lakanthan fought ?

What a dramatic chapter. But kiss took the cake away.

Loved it:)

Edited by DROOL - 12 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

ME !

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Whattey dhamaka sizzling entertaining paisa vasool update Rosie!

Crackling ambience, sizzling chemistry, dazzling kiss. Lovely!

You had me at the hand holding. Bas this Raizada boy is MINE. The Arnav I had staked my claim over got abandoned by the writer, so this one is MINE. BAS!

His eyes are enough to get me dru.. er...happy.

Now whats with NK and La? Did they catch them kissing?

Also, I really want Payaliya and Akash to Rabba Vey soon 😒

Stunning updex deer 🤗 But don't be da basherz nxt time and plz updex on time !

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

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haila!!!! i forgot that i resed here!!!* banging head*

commented on pg40.

ps.1st pg milkar v nahi mila :((

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 12 years ago

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

finally they KISSED (in their style😆) 😲☺️

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Res
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Loved the update a lot Semanti...

a happy Khushi was fun to read (oops do i mean drunk 😉)

it was like on of those "finally moments"... yeah finally they kissed 😃.. the moment was written down so well..at new year's they kissed.. looking forward to the aftermath now between Raizada and Gupta..
the start of one love story, and speed breaker in the other .. wonder what the problem is with Lav and NK...also I keep wondering what is in store for Payal...

P.S. - I don't have any problem with the font

Edited by valeyrie - 12 years ago

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Turkiye

@Turkiye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Wow, didn't expect this to happen any time soon, but I am happy that Khuhsi wasn't too 'happy' to be able to judge the situation and decide ofrherself what she wants. Though I am sure it helped the cause that she was in a 'happy' state of mind.
I am really curious about what happened between Nk and Lavanya for him to be so mad.

We waited long,but there was a lot happening in this chapter.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Oh...I'd say more than just a cracking start to the New Year...

This Kiss. It was meant to happen, and You fit it in perfectly...especially, with Khushi being so "happy"...

I love how they are opening up to each other, and though it is right of Khushi to think that they are rushing this, but sometimes, emotions, and feelings like this are experienced even after mere some meetings...and as a reader, I'd say this was over due ;-) They had too much built up chemistry, and fireworks going on...Yeh Toh Hona Hi Tha... ;)

Khushi opening about her phobia of darkness...something I can relate to so much! It was nice to see them opening up and sharing...every meeting of theres is always so engaging, spontaneous, simple, and so true.

Thank you for the long update. I like this length ;-)

Uh oh for NK-Lav. Trouble in Paradise? Lets see how this go's...

I have no issue's with the font :)

Will be waiting for more!

- Dee

Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

well well well...what a setting!! new year's eve...the balcony and the sea breeze...view of mumbai's twinkling lights...and a conveniently placed rug!!

i think i have goosebumps too...like Khushi... :)

Loved the way you described the kiss...

I liked the way you wrote the chapter...and I guess that you will write Arnav's POV of the kiss...how he thought she looked and she felt...you know? in the next chapter may be? so I dont think anything was missing ...in my humble opinion...

I also liked the way you said kettle, pot etc... nice ring to it!!

Cheers

what_the