11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

My expression after reading this chappy 😲 😲 😲

You are an amazing writer... first you gave us the Honeymoon track with all lovey dovey Arshi and now the dark side of Payask... mindblowing 👏

Ok so this update for Aakash n Payal...Missed this couple...

Akash's behaviour terrified me... what an outburst... he was super scary... guy got a lot of shades to his character... not like our lovey dovey Akash from IPKKND... loved the change in character 😃

But super surprising revelation about Payal's past...Never knew there was some sort of tragedy behind Payal's behaviour. She was married and killed her husband 😲 😲 😲

Cliff hanger...why or why 😭 Eagerly Waiting

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Oh my god
This chapter is something I can never imagine
I wanna knew what happens next
Loved the update

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just4this

@just4this

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

as usual it was good.my friend. masterclass is the best and u know that. and so r u . thank u for a superb story though can't thank enough.

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

omg that was super unexpected...intriguing to say the least

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

U know i have totally forgotten what feedback I gave lols..(if you can please show it to me :P )

Gosh this part was a shocker..Where did this whole payal being married and killing her hubby come from..? :O

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
Oh thankgod the honeymoon is over.. coz it was way too unrealistic and mushy for my liking though i did find a lot of parts cuteee <3
Waiting for the upcoming parts.. :D

ha ha this is what i wrote... ??? 😲 i guess i got a bit rude.. trust me i didn't intend too...

Lols to be honest , i was really pissed off that day so i kind of took it out here.. I wasn't liking anything.. True i wanted the honeymoon period to be over for the said reason but not because i didnt like it but because it was just manipulating my mind- you know like raising the expectation bars for the person whosoever is written i my destiny (lucky guy though..:p )...