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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally.. Arnav apni dil ki baatein qubool kar raha hai.. lovin the process of re-making Arnie to bits :D
Uff! ye Arnav bhi na.. wot ws der to tease Khushi la dat. poor girl! nw dat she finaly realised she is in love wid him , she wants to suppress her feelings fr Arnav's sake!
sigh!!!
bt i feel their confrontation wl b damm passionate.. waitin fr us din!
Nice vm Deeps :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was Fabulous..
Loved how they are getting so close.. and i am so loving this naughty side of arnav
awesome <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
lo kerlo baat she herself called new problem for her already in problem heart
asked him about his love interest n he left no stone unturn to make her upset
he didn't even realize she got hurt with his new revelation about in relation with married lady after being married himself n confused about her upset state
he appreciate her hard work her effort she put it in all those yrs n each n every person involved in it
great job arnie boy
vm was cute loved that song looking so much in love but she left the flr with heavy heart
mr raizada u better clear all that mess as soon as possible
lovely update
Edited by aayt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, that was extremely emotional speech from Arnav, so heart felt and just amazing. He is surely a unique piece, one moment he was angry and egoistic, another he made her cry tear of happiness and joy. Fantastic update dear, loved the fact they are progressing in their relationship step by step and Khushi's jealous feeling for Arnav's so called love clearly shows how much she is affected by him now, not to forget her reactions to Arnav's closeness were written beautifully, so passionate!! And ofcourse the dance was amazing and lovely show, superb choice!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
so much arshi moments
khushi is hurt hearing arnav is in love with someone
she does not that girl is she herself
speech was awesome
but arnav should apologise to sashi
asr return to arnie
yay!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such an awesome update. So khushi realized she is in love. Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was awesome .. brilliantly written
loved the speech that arnav made .. i almost fell in love with him again !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
vow deepthi!!!
wonderful update..

loved khushi and arnav...

Atlast Khushi realized her feeling and a new misunderstanding... kudos to u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally im commenting...
I was too busy.. Sorry i didn't comment earlier..
Every ur update is just fabulous.. I luv d way u express feeling of both arnav n khushi...luvd your every bit of writing...
Waiting for more arshi romance scenes... ;-) ;-) ;-)
As i asked you earlier... Plzzz can u put some romantic scenes of arshi in rain...
Plzzz...
Waiting for update...
Edited by sana27 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


Yes her doubts will be cleared soon means very soon.

Coming to inviting Shashi, that was not intentional as he said he never paid attention and he neevr realized he wudnt be coming. Now that Khushi pointed, even if he realized before hand, he wouldnt have gone considering his ego and for the words Shashi said that night. It will take him while and there will be another huge blow on his face, for him to realize what guptas have done. Thats why I gave slightest hint in the update.

But I assure you every fight and every tear will only bring them closer.


i trust u fr tht :) :) .. n ye i did catch the hint too :) :) ...

n i agree to the pt of his ego, n situation as well...

sry fr a short comment... especially nt covering these pts... as u might hv read.. i was going to sleep whn i realised this is coming up :) :) .. i set up my alarm fr half an hr... n then gt up, read it ... put up whtever i felt rt thr... n here i m again :)

so welll .. wht i meant was... understandable tht he didnt hv to ever invite the person who helped him.. bt he is nw a relative.. n so banta hai :) :) ... bt again understandable .. frm his exp, his ego, his anger, n hisignorance to such small details.. is very very natural, n realistic.

as of khushi knwing... i seriously felt bad fr her... she really is mking a lot of effort.. n finally she realises tht she loves him... n the intensity of it too... n tht had to happen rt after she was told htt he loves someone...

though he did mk sure to leave enuf hints fr her ( except tht already married n in relation with him .. ) to mk out tht he is talking abt her only... bt i guess.. i can understand she is hurt..

n i m sure he loves her enuf to knw tht he has to clear this out :) :) ..

i m soo waiting fr both of them to confess :) :) ..

as of guptas n arnav... i m sure u wud mk it worth .. :) :) .. plus i can see tht arnav is nt a bad person.. even the tragedies of his life.. hvnt been able to harden him internally... he is still very gnded, sensitive, emotional... he knws hw to b thankful... so i m sure once he realises the extent of the help he gt frm guptas... he wud never ever let the rudeness come in between again...

n till then.. i wud love to see khushi trying to heal him :)

again missed out ...

loved the way he teases her... the way she lost control n touched his face... n loved the way he gt soo concerned fr her, tht he was ready to leave his own annual party...
he really loves her :)

revelations tend to flow naturally in ur story.. :) love the way u revealed abt the mehndi pic...

beautiful .. the way khushi n arnav r trying to speak abt everythg openly... as in.. him asking.. n her trying to tell tht she feels all messed up n she doesnt knw y...

love u payal... fr reminding khushi tht she had a fight with arnav tht day... n i hope she soon remembers n understands tht it cudnt hv been anythg other than NK tht gt arnav soo upset tht day :) :) ...


Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago

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