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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved arnav ashe keeps surprising her with his different emotions extracting from her ots reaction mostly loved as his showed his gratitude n offered his thanks as he use to acknowledge it bt never vocalised to d people who (payasl sashi n esp. Khushi) had been a pillar of support for him n helped him achieve his dream n owned his empire n also liked as d couple thanked their enplpyee it shows their togetherness in thoughts abt the hard work n dedication of their employees n how of better person Asr z D situations for khushi as she got n lost it dt same moment iam wondering how will be her reaction wn she comes to know it z she whom his arnav loves now wat after dis realization would she will give up n try to stay aloof r she will make her husband fall for her
waiting for next thx
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful update. finally khushi realised she is in love with arnav but she misunderstood that arnav is in love with someone else. Waiting to read further

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg! That was really beautiful !! Arnies speech accepting khushis n shashi s value In his life !
The vm was superb too!!
Khushi babes don't be sad, arnie loves u only!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579


i trust u fr tht :) :) .. n ye i did catch the hint too :) :) ...

n i agree to the pt of his ego, n situation as well...

sry fr a short comment... especially nt covering these pts... as u might hv read.. i was going to sleep whn i realised this is coming up :) :) .. i set up my alarm fr half an hr... n then gt up, read it ... put up whtever i felt rt thr... n here i m again :)

so welll .. wht i meant was... understandable tht he didnt hv to ever invite the person who helped him.. bt he is nw a relative.. n so banta hai :) :) ... bt again understandable .. frm his exp, his ego, his anger, n hisignorance to such small details.. is very very natural, n realistic.

Tanu, thank you dear for understanding my point in this. Arnav is raised very sensible, emotional, forgiving and to be compassionate towards others. The last 8 years of his lonely life made him ignorant of these small things that would make a person happy. If at all he developed anything in these years, its his ego and his status. He will come around soon with the help of Khushi, as we are already seeing him.

as of khushi knwing... i seriously felt bad fr her... she really is mking a lot of effort.. n finally she realises tht she loves him... n the intensity of it too... n tht had to happen rt after she was told htt he loves someone...

though he did mk sure to leave enuf hints fr her ( except tht already married n in relation with him .. ) to mk out tht he is talking abt her only... bt i guess.. i can understand she is hurt..

n i m sure he loves her enuf to knw tht he has to clear this out :) :) ..

i m soo waiting fr both of them to confess :) :) ..

I so wished the chappy was mahaupdate. There is so much more to the night, I just couldnt fit into one part and so ended up making it 2 parts. There is still alot more, good stuff obviously but I had to end the chapter on logical note. I am hoping you will enjoy the next chapter. But sorry to break your heart, there is no confession happening anytime soon😕

as of guptas n arnav... i m sure u wud mk it worth .. :) :) .. plus i can see tht arnav is nt a bad person.. even the tragedies of his life.. hvnt been able to harden him internally... he is still very gnded, sensitive, emotional... he knws hw to b thankful... so i m sure once he realises the extent of the help he gt frm guptas... he wud never ever let the rudeness come in between again...

n till then.. i wud love to see khushi trying to heal him :)

again missed out ...

loved the way he teases her... the way she lost control n touched his face... n loved the way he gt soo concerned fr her, tht he was ready to leave his own annual party...
he really loves her :)

revelations tend to flow naturally in ur story.. :) love the way u revealed abt the mehndi pic...

Thank you 😃

beautiful .. the way khushi n arnav r trying to speak abt everythg openly... as in.. him asking.. n her trying to tell tht she feels all messed up n she doesnt knw y...

love u payal... fr reminding khushi tht she had a fight with arnav tht day... n i hope she soon remembers n understands tht it cudnt hv been anythg other than NK tht gt arnav soo upset tht day :) :) ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
time to open thread 6
jaldi karo :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tushi0310

time to open thread 6
jaldi karo :D


LOL..are you stalking?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



LOL..are you stalking?


I hope u havn't made rules to stalk you :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update di
loved it a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey di i have unres my comment...my comment is on pg.147 plzzz hv a look...
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Posted: 11 years ago
pheww..finally finished reading...
after reading da whole update...im totally speechless yaar..dnt knw what 2 say...its felt like im suddenly shortage of words...bt phir v bolna to hai😆
da whole update was fabulous..jst mindblowing..love da way how beautifully u portray arshi's emotions..jst wow..
ok nw coming to da updates...
haye..so khushi was totally smitten by arnav's apperance nd turned to blushing beauty
phir se khushi ko kuch kuch hone laga😆😆..'' tera hone lagi hoon..khone lagi hun..jabse mili hun..."
love da way arnav teased khushi.."why do I feel that you are very fascinated with my face especially my lips these days" ..aww khushi again turned to red tamato
aww..poor khushi..she was so confussed nd disturbed by her own behaviour..dnt understand what happening with her...''Kuch To Hua Hai, Kuch Ho Gaya Hai...Do Chaar Din Se Lagta Hai Jaise..Sab Kuch Alag Hai, Sab Kuch Naya Hai..''
so again khushi back 2 her sankadevi mode and teased arnav abt limousine nd arnav was hell irritated by this😆😆
aww..bichara arnav..he was totally helpless as her silky shiny strands kissing his face nd her exposed neck activate his wild imagination😆😆
what the!! ye sankadevi apne emotions me beheke asked arnav whether he loved someone as she expected dat girl to b her..bt arnav was also no less..he also playing alnong with her..bt unware of da fact dat by his answer khushi was totally herat broken🥺🥺
khushi was totally dumfounded by seeing all da people praising her handsome husband & her eyes twinkle with joy...
the speech of arnav was superb yaar..beautifully written...👏👏...first time arnav openly xpressed his feelings nd how much he was greatful 2 his wife for dis huge success of AR..lovely..glad 2 see dis changed arnav..
khushi speech was also noless..aww da great ASR was blushing by his wife's speech
wow..arshi dance together..lovely
really da arnie inside da shell of aranv was slowing coming out for better...the song choice was awsum yaar
after battling with her emotions finally khushi realise her feelings for arnav dat she was deeply madly in love with her husband...''Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga...Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya..Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola...Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya
Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau..Tu Hi Apna Paraya..Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun..Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun...Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun''
bt she is happy yet sad. She is happy that she realized his love for him but sad that he is in love with someone else😭😭..poor khushi..i hope arnav confessed his love for khushi soon...
love everybit of da update..hatts off 2 u for dis wonderful update..also love da vm
egarly waiting for nxt..
continue soon😊😊










Edited by arshi_sush - 11 years ago

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