deeps u r such a sweet heart...i really need to thanks GOD for sending u in my life ...aik din achanak say :) and u have filled my life with happiness...i am honoured honestly...love u loads deeps...
i am happy that u like it :)...aalthough wrote it chaltay chalaty while talking to u...:)
coming to update it was fun update ...jahan pyar hota hay wahan fight tu hoti hee hay :)...and these will remain there i am sure when they r going to be even happy loving parents too :)
u have shown beautifully the embarrassment and conflict of khushi feelings ...the way she wants arnav to speak up...and in this all inner turmoil her anger is totally justified..she was feeling irritated that how arnav could be so normal ...:)...very well written...👏
loved the fact u r maintaining arnav character beautifully...he cant be on knees and offering flowers to her...this was the best thing in his role to show himself normal in order to bring out khushi from any awkwardness...👏
loved the way u have written arnav's inner turmoil...its true that such big harsh accidents and realities in his life make him hard...it would not be like just kiss and makeup :)...thank u for depicting his thoughts beautifully..👏
..and best thing is even khushi too knows this that with time he will change ...its not matter of one day...
after every fight couple come back towards each other more strong and forgiving...and that u have done here...
its so sweet of khushi the way she remembered wt is with him the way he fascinated with her sandoor...and strands...wow...she is noticing him ...and that was superb"i need ur help and some direction in my life ,too sad that u r not trying and understanding beyond my words"...hats of deeps beautifully written👏
that was mazay ka when she said next morning idiot doesnot know how to deal with women...haha
although he was rude at breakfast ...although both were giving angry stares ...but good he explained his bad memories of lack of food...uff deeps very strong sentences u have written here 👏
so he said to her he is not arnie ,and khushi in return was right that if he was not then he would never stopped to explained her :),wow..
need to say special thanks to aman...u rocked man...thanks for helping khushi :)
that whole office breakfast scene...uff tujhay meri kasam ...awe she fasting...his concern on her head ache...and the way he told her abt hospital scene...hmmm...very right time u have brought it back deeps...:)...she will ask some one else abt it...
i was smiling on juices thinking abt mango shake...then laughed out loud on mango juice discussion...hyeee deeps u hit the right spot ...wah :)
khushi saying fasting for me,for u ,for their family...and he smiling thinking abt her saying this...ufff and wow😉
jaldi ana...really khushi ...thats a big positive sentence in there love story :)...and the way he enjoyed it...
chalo finally arnav came to know that other then we all ...u have made khushi also checking out his lips...hahahaha...loved that sweet romance btw the two...hope arnav starts to notice it clearly without doubt that kuch kuch horaha hay khushi ko towards him:)
loved it to the core...me zipping my mouth as talked tooo much...love u more and more...❤️
Tanu thank u dear and loved ur poetry too forsure that is very positive one and beautiful too...and i think when arnav and khushi will be thinking on same wave length ,when there dreams will be same...it goes best with them...love u ,thank u again for liking it🤗
Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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