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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahaa..tht was a super long update and incredibly awesome.. :))
enjoyed evry bit of it..
Thnks for the update
And for d PM tooo.. :))
continue with the next part sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
New thread di.. BTW, I 4got 2 tel u tht I prefer LACY n SHEER ones... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Frankly Di, I nvr expected tht I'll b able 2 mk it dis tym bt co- incidently, I again made it... Thnx a ton again 4 accepting my request n updating dis early den ur tym schedule... 🤗


NO, I promised to post it before your 11pm but things got delayed...I will try next time again.

Back 2 d update...

I particularly luvd d scene wen Khushi moves 4wrd n Arnav backwards... I so wntd it 2 b in d shw... 😉😉😉

I knew it. I knew you would talk about this as you were expecting Khushi to take initiative for once.

Khushi is restless n nervous abt d unknown feelings shez hvng... Its high tym she realises them... 😃

Arnav's concern always mellows me... He ws ready 2 cancel attending dere AGM jst coz Khushi wsnt feeling well... Hez so cuteee... 😉

Dere limo convo made me realise dere Tom n Jerry relation which will never change n I dnt want it 2 b changed... D way dey tease each other n argue lyk kids makes me feel gud... 😛

D way he tul liberty wid his fingers by grazing it on her back made my heart go DHAK- DHAK...

Arnav 4got 2 invite Sasi n Khushi lashed out her anger on him n it ws justified...

I luvd Arnav's speech... D way he acknowledged Sasi n his efforts, Akash n Payal's trust in him n mst imp Khushi's silent support 2 him n his appreciation 4 her made me Proud of him... 👏

I truly enjoyed Arnav's irritation wen Khushi was called 2 speak few wrds... Bt Khushi, as always, lived upto his expectations n made him proud by her speech n d way dey held each others hand made me imagine a faint Rabba Ve in BG.. ☺️

Khushi discovered his little secret of her feet mehendi design as his wallpaper... I wonder hw wil she confront him 4 tht... 😆

I wonder too, as I didnt plan yet...LOL..What di yu think> Will she confront or do something to make him reveal it?

Khushi seriously spoke abt d BED in front of every1??? 😲

Pehle to sirf lips the, ab feet bhi... Hey Devi Maiyaa, Ye ladki mere gutter brains ko aur gutter bana k chodegi... Sigh.. 😳 😳 😳

There is no limit to our gutter brains so stop worrying and let the gutter gutter thoughts dance while they last 😆😆😆

Arnav spoke abt her continuous staring HIS LIPS activity... Ahaan... I'm luvng it... 😳

Dere dance was superb n ur last few lines made me fall in luv wid Arnav more... Evn I luv him a lot... ☺️

Back 2 Earthwa.. Who said u r immature at editing??? D VM is superb... 👏

I franky hv stopped watching VM's since long bt dis 1 made my day... Dere passion n intensity of dance made me blush hard, DHAK- DHAK n Rabba Ve... ☺️

Awesome Blossom update Di... Luvd it... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

P.S. Wen r u updating nxt???

Thursday as usual😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...finally...she realized her feelings for arnav...
wow diii...
i wanted to update long comment but a days i m busy in work sorry ...
very sorry...will try next tym pakka...
this update nd VM both r beautiful...
awesome...loved it..
love u dii...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG you liked it .Thank you and Welcome.


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Posted: 11 years ago
romantic update definitely..
one hand..khushi realizing her love for arnav..!!!
w8ng for next..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice party and very awesome speech 😛

Well that is nice of Khushi to realize her feelings 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm so very sorry for so late comments.. was really busy and was finding little peace of mind to comment, and like that days just went and here I'm after you have updated your other two updates.. Oh One more thing, Happy Ganesh Chaturthi.. I was so busy with preparation and decorating the house, couldn't find time.. sorry ones again.. and today I'll be happy knowing that I finally commented for the 3 updates.. and nothings pending..

Chapter 25

It was fantastic update..

Loved the way Kaka thanked Khushi for bringing the ritual, festivals back to the house, and Khushi explaining the love of Arnav for his parents to him in return.. and how cutely she said that she can't discuss serious discussion..

I was really jumping in my place when Payal told Khushi regarding that Arnav was scared to death when she was admitted in hospital.. So something's are coming out in open one by one..

Khushi realized so late that she didn't give ladoo's to Arnav that her mother had made for him.. poor ladoo's.. she asked her mother for its recipe, and made ladoo's.. she's a quick learner..

Khushi was tempted to eat ladoos, and she kept chanting that first God and then Khushi, that's sounds funny..

Oh so Khushi respects Arnav when others are around otherwise she treats him as her best friend.. and her enquiries were like a typical Indian wife, first asks her husband to come early and when he comes early asks him, why cam early?? Hehe.. but Arnav never forgets to tease her..

Oh God Khushi is obsessed with his lips.. she can't help to from getting attracted to them.. And now that Arnav knows that she's really affected, he teases her on purpose.. And the way she said that "I was just thinking of introducing 3D floral prints on the LIPS" I couldn't stop laughing..

And he was coughing and laughing at the same time.. And she was so happy seeing him laughing like that.. She missed him truly.. And then the growling sound and her reaction to it was so dam funny.. how can she just lean on him in such an angle, he must be so embarrassed.. And then she made him say that he was fasting and the reason made her really happy..

Love to know that they started knowing each other, about their life the 8 years when they were apart.. She was so lucky to wake up at 9 in the morning, even when she was working.. I pity myself, I don't what time I have to get up when I'll start working.. The way she described his anger it was really nice.. her comments and her talking sense can lightens any ones mood.. when she was scared from his anger that she almost peed in her pants?? Batao Batao... hmm hmm..

Lol she's really cute and funny, she actually discuss with him about adult diapers.. she was planning to buy for her.. and thinking about future she actually thought that she'll tell Arnav to pee in your diapers.. She's really a pervert and I'm at Arnav's side now.. God how can she speak to her husband in such a way? And he was totally surprised with her diapers talk and was badly wanted to change the topic..

So she told him one of her secret that she loved his signature and used to practice to sign like him.. Arnav is really turning into a blushing prince these days, for every compliments of hers he starts blushing.. And when she signed just like him on his phone he was so shocked..

The way her expression changed when he was so close to her, he observed everything.. and then to avoid the awkwardness he asked the question he was so looking forward to know about why so many emails, and he was actually wouldn't have replied to her.. I really feel bad knowing that.. I really love their cute fights.. and the way he wiped his face when she splashed water on his face, was kind of romantic..

And then the Mehendi, how came she write NK's name on her palm, when she was marrying Arnav, clear that she was in love with NK but couldn't she think what if her parents or other relative had seen her Mehendi, what would they might have thought about her.. anyways, Arnav really didn't show the hurt when he saw Nk's name on her palm.. But now that she's married to Arnav will she ever write Arnav's name on her palm?? He didn't allow her to say sorry to him on finding NK's name as he understood her..

He's was thinking about their life if they had married for each other, their life would have been really different.. he remembered the way she became pink and all shy.. isn't this hint enough for him that she started getting affected by him and started feeling for him.. and when he saw her looking gorgeous as ever, he couldn't even compliment her when she was so much expecting it from him.. and ended up getting angry..

He denied coming for arti and when he heard her singing he couldn't stop him-self coming towards her.. was she singing for him?? And he did arti with her.. and he remembered his family which made his eyes fill up..

When he saw her giving him ladoo as a Prasad he was really surprised, and when Kaka was trying to tell Arnav the story behind the ladoo Khushi made lots of attempt so that Arnav couldn't come to know about their sweet past that will make her embarrassed.. but all her attempts went into drain when Arnav understood that she wasn't allowing him to know about it..

Omg!! Even I was blushing when Kaka told the story behind the ladoos to Arnav and the reason behind Khushi stealing the ladoos as to get hugs and kisses from Arnav and Arnav purposely avoided to eat ladoo in front of kaka, which made Khushi angry..

It was really sweet and romantic when Arnav forcibly took Khushi to poolside and cornered her and fed her half ladoo and made her to feed him.. And how sweetly he asked her about why she's so beautiful.. And she blushed.. And when she spoke about tradition he also completed the tradition kissing her firmly on her cheeks making her blush and run from there pushing him away..

Edited by monasha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 26

Interesting update..

Hmm so she was thinking about the way he behaves with her, his kiss his touch and his weird compliments which made her pink again..

And there Arnav is all happy to know how his past was and is happy how their relationship is progressing..

When she in the morning was making breakfast for them in his thoughts and mistakenly added extra salt and the way Arnav came behind her asking what she was doing, I hoped that he was referring to the extra salt that she was putting in the Poha..

So Kaka left them alone for a week so that they get some privacy.. hmm I so wished he was there, they could get some extra knowledge about their past.. And waise bhi they are getting their privacy in the poolside where both enjoy spending time in each other's company..

And he came to the kitchen to eat ladoo and when she realized what will she get in return she told his to help himself.. But Arnav never back down does he? And he kept the tradition by kissing her on both the cheeks.. but doesn't it cheating?? The tradition was Hug and peck, but he's not following the tradition of hugging..

And they end up arguing at the table regarding her being scared to stay alone in the house and his mocking..

Arnav really made me emotional when he said that he had worst to eat in his early days of struggle.. And how he convinced Khushi that he'll eat the Poha because it was made by her.. He wanted to stay with her but she denied it..

I so wished either Arnav should have stayed at home or Kaka shouldn't have gone for a week or Khushi had asked her mother before cooking Spicy Chicken.. I just hope Arnav doesn't blast on her..

Oh Arnav called Khushi to know whether she ate or not and till he didn't get any confirmation he also didn't eat anything.. he's so lovely..

Arnav really don't have manners ha, he directly entered her room without even knocking.. what if she was getting dressed in her room instead of bathroom, it would have been so embarrassing..

They both are getting lost in each other's beauty and charms.. and both shy and blushing..

Hehe

Edited by monasha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 27

Amazing update..

They both like playing with each other don't they?

She's really very fascinated with his face and his lips, she just couldn't take her eyes off his face.. And Arnav enjoy seeing her like that lost in him.. when he teased her, she couldn't say a word and then she told that she's just restless.. but he still couldn't understand that she was getting affected by him and therefore reacting in this way..

Wow they had a ride in Limousine and it was first time of Khushi being in it even being so rich.. And then he started noticing her and couldn't help the glances and before he could do any foolishness he change his place making Khushi ask him the reason..

Out of nowhere Why Khushi asked him whether he loved someone or not?? Was she expecting something?? And Arnav started teasing her, telling about her and without taking her name that he loved the girl who married because her parents forced her and still she's in relationship with him.. and still asking her whether she have problem with it or not.. Poor Khushi she must be really heartbroken hearing this news..

Khushi was really fascinated to see so many people around them and she was really proud of her husband..

Oh Finally they met Payal and Akash.. And Shashi didn't come to the party as usual.. and Khushi was so angry that Arnav didn't invite her father.. Though Arnav and Khushi both had a point but Arnav should have invited Shashi as he now no more work in the company..

And at last Khushi saw the Mehendi pic on Arnav's phone when he forgot his phone on the table and when he was getting calls.. She must be wondering why he kept her picture as a wall paper of his phone.. will she ask him?? What will he answer?? And will Khushi allow Arnav to get closer to her when he himself said that he's in love with someone else??

Hmm I Love Arnav speech when he said that this particular day was special and unfortunate for him, Special as Akash and Payal was with him and unfortunate as Khushi wasn't there with him anymore.. he also thanked Shashi for being with him when his own people ditch him.. and he also he gave credit for his success to Khushi..

Even Khushi's speech was cute and little funny.. And Arnav was impressed as he knew that she wasn't prepared for the unexpected speech..

When Akash called Arnav Kanjoos as in the party it was 2 alcohol drinks per head Khushi mentioned about his small bed,, and when Payal teased her she became all crimson.. And how can Arnav remain quite without teasing her?

Wow they danced together on the song which Arnav chose.. And while dancing she realized the she's falling in love with him.. And then she realized that he loves someone else..

What will Khushi do now?? I hope Arnav goes behind her..

Update soon

Edited by monasha - 11 years ago

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