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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Prizi
yeaaa 1st one to comment :P

heheheh congo ... chalo cuppy-cake di ke liya arty karte hain 😆

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

thank u soo much cuppy-cake...
and i know kameena ke saath ye hi hona tha.. hahahaa...

and ur ques.. ahahha aab ye mein kaise bataun... Jo maan mein aata hain likhti chali jaati hun.. no re-read .. huff... mein re-read karne bethi toh jaanmo tak update na dun... u see i never feel my writing upto that point wheere i wanna take it...

par u liked it that much ...
toh kuch toh aacha hai... i m improving then... ahhaha/...
u see i m too senti to put up senti parts is what i feel like...

but anyway thank u for the appreciation...
luv u cuppy-cake

yes di u improved alot.. I read ur ff 1st on fb.. Meko name yaad nhi hai ff ka 😳 u see i'm bhulakkad toh...

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

heheheh congo ... chalo cuppy-cake di ke liya arty karte hain 😆

hehe partyyy 🥳 😎

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Awesome blossom part Aayu...

Lagta hai tu tik hogayi huppp...

tumne apni fever mujhe bhej di kiyaa 😭😭😭

dekho na main bechari si choti baby koh fever hogayi ab 😳

hahahha...😆😆😆

about the part... as i say in first line...

Awesome blossom (Copypaste) 😉😉

hehehe...

Wah... hero ne kiya maara hai...

Saale kamine... aise hi maarna chahiyeh...

Accha huva time pe ridzy ne rokh diya.. can't afford to send hero to jail na ... heehehe😆😆😆

AR convo... Super awesome...

it touch my ❤️

Sach main... I feel every word both said to each other...

how deep, love and care it shows...

Love it and Love u Aayu...

end of the part was cutest... the way ridzy showers those kisses and mujhe laga hero will asked to kiss on his lips 😛

ab meri galati nehi hai kkk...

his naughty wala expression make me think like that... 😆😆😆

chalo koi nehi... i felt it was cute... oopsss... i mean cutest in whole part...

Cont super soon...

takecare

muwaahhh

❤️ u...

P.S.

I know u must be thinking main bimar hokhe kaise itni lambi comment de rahi ho 😛

U know I m superwoman hahahaha 😆😆😆

Toh itna likhna toh mere liyeh kuch bhi nehi hai...

'Aaachuuu...!!!' Sorry sorry... yeh sneezing bhi na.. bina invite huve bhi aajaate hai 😛

Edited by RihooHaws - 11 years ago

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

bhaagoo kyun di

Kyunki woh toh res karke bhaag gayi na 😛 hahahha

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Prizi
yes di u improved alot.. I read ur ff 1st on fb.. Meko name yaad nhi hai ff ka 😳 u see i'm bhulakkad toh...

my first ff was always with u one... vo hi padha hoga fb pe

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Kyunki woh toh res karke bhaag gayi na 😛 hahahha

hahhahaha...

hum toh jaisa hain... wiase hi rahen...

hum nehi badle aapni aada..

ahahahha

mein aur sisi dono res kar ke bhag jaate hain ...

hahahaha

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

hahhahaha...
hum toh jaisa hain... wiase hi rahen...
hum nehi badle aapni aada..
ahahahha
mein aur sisi dono res kar ke bhag jaate hain ...

hahahaha

Hehehe I know Aayu..

seems she is writing BL...

waise humhare is list main aur naam add ho rahi hai 😛😛

priyu, rajani jenny hehehe...

woh log bhi ab competition de rahi hai hahahaha😆😆

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
end of the part was cutest... the way ridzy showers those kisses and mujhe laga hero will asked to kiss on his lips😛
ab meri galati nehi hai kkk... his naughty wala expression make me think like that...😆😆😆

exactly
meko bhi yehi lagi thi